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  • It Was Love To Me, But Not To You: Alyssa Prydz English 9H/Period 6 5/31/17

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    The speaker recalls falling in love with the subject over the summer, enjoying their time together. However, when the subject's parents discovered their relationship, the subject withdrew and ignored the speaker. When confronted, the subject broke up with the speaker and claimed they had never loved them, only daring to date them, devastating the speaker. Though the speaker wanted to reconcile, the subject no longer seemed to care about their past love or the special summer they had shared.

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    The speaker recalls falling in love with the subject over the summer, enjoying their time together. However, when the subject's parents discovered their relationship, the subject withdrew and ignored the speaker. When confronted, the subject broke up with the speaker and claimed they had never loved them, only daring to date them, devastating the speaker. Though the speaker wanted to reconcile, the subject no longer seemed to care about their past love or the special summer they had shared.

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    It Was Love To Me, But Not To You: Alyssa Prydz English 9H/Period 6 5/31/17

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    Alyssa Prydz

    English 9H/Period 6
    5/31/17

    Verbal Advantage Writing Sample: A Poem


    It Was Love To Me, But Not To You

    Iwassmittenwithyou
    Eversinceyoutalkedtome
    Thosesummerdaysseemedtoflyby
    WheneverIwaswithyou

    Youalwaysflatteredmewithyourclement
    Andsoothingchoiceofwords
    ThedayswhenIfelthaggardandWearyYouwouldsay
    ThatmyLipswereasplumpasstrawberriesripeningonacoolSpringmorning

    YouwererichandIwaspoor
    IwasFrugalandspentmymoneycarefully
    WhileyouwerespendthriftandspentyourmoneywheneveryouhadtheChance
    OppositesiswhatwewereButIdidNotcareBecauseIalwayswantedMore

    Iwantedtobewithyoueverysecondofeveryday
    IwasalwayshopingourmeetingswouldbediurnalandoccureachDay
    OnedayIwasinaPublicGardenandyoucametome
    IwassoSurprisedandHappybutyouseemeduncertainandAmbiguous

    AfteraWhileyoucameandsatdownnexttome
    IsaidhelloandwasUnequivocalandClearwhenaskingwhatyouweredoing
    youbegantodescribetheBeautythatsurroundedme
    HowtheflowerswereeversofluorescentIntheBrightRaysofSunshine



    ItwasnicebutitseemedasIfyouweretryingtotellmesomething
    YouweredefinitelyNebulousandvague
    ButIthinkasyoudescribedTheGarden,youwereTalkingaboutme
    IaskedyouifyouweretryingtoAskmeoutonadate

    yousaidYesandweresorrythatyouweretooshytoSayitbluntly
    Iwasnolongersmittenwithyou
    ButInloveafterDatingforTwomonths
    Iwassadthatourrelationshipwassomewhatclandestineandbeingkeptasecret

    IknowitwasbecauseyourparentsWouldnotapproveofme
    ButIstillwantedtoexpressthelovethatwehadforeachother
    AssummerbegantoendandChangeYoutoochangedwithit
    YouwouldntlongersupportoradvocatefortheideasthatIhad

    WheneverweWereinpublicyouWouldjustrepudiateandcastmeoff
    YouneverdidthatbeforeandIthurt
    ItwaspainthatIhadneverexperiencedbefore
    AndIwantedittoend

    WhenIrealizedwhyyouweredoingthisIfelt
    LikeIshouldhaveunderstoodbutIdidnot
    YourParentsfoundoutaboutus
    Andbecauseofthisyoubecamewithdrawnandsilent

    ImadeanallegationorAccusalthatYourparentswouldDisapproveofMe
    ButWecouldmakethemseeourlove
    InsteadyoucontinuedtoIgnoreme
    ItwasasIfibegantoNettleandIrritateyou




    Youseemedtovacillateorbeindecisiveaboutwhatyouwantedtodo
    ItoldyouIlovedyouEversincethen
    ButyoubegantoReBufforRefusemylove
    EventhoughyouwerelikethisIstillbegantomollifyandcalmyourtenseemotions

    Thenonedayyoubrokeupwithme
    IwouldnotacceptItbecauseIknewourlovewasreal
    Youwouldjustnotacceptitbecauseofyourparents
    ButthenyousaidsomethingThatTrulyrippedoutmyHeart

    Yousaidyouneverreallydidloveme
    Anditwasjustadaretogooutwithme
    IwasdevastatedasIknewthiswasnottrue
    ButThatyoustillhadtosaylies

    Justtoberidofme
    Iwantedtoreconcileandhealourlove
    ButItseemedtobenouseasIBegantowaiveandGiveUp
    Onwhatwehad

    Igenuinelyneverthoughtofustobeanalogousandsimilar
    Butwelovedeachother
    AsthedayswentbythoughIbegantothink
    Thatyoureallynolongerlovedme

    Ialwaysthoughtofyoutobethiswonderful,Benigngood-naturedPerson
    Butyoureallyforgotallaboutthosesummerdaysthatwespenttogether
    IwishIWasneversogullibleandfoolishtofallintoyourtrap
    ButIdidandIdIscoveredthatOurlove,
    ItwasLovetome,Butnottoyou

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