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Daveon Bradley

Ms. Sroka
8B
4/3/17

CreationbyBarneyandtheRingofAshes

Nothing was there but darkness. A god was sitting above a circle of dust and ashes
which just shifted about in the air as if it were blown away by a fan. The darkness was the
middle of nothing, until one day a bright green oval shape, and a shiny glowing smile brightened
up the sky which was the works of the God, Barney. Barney remained on his circle of ashes and
as he was on the ring, he threw the ashes up in the sky to create the stars. After he created the
stars, he generated enough power to take the gleam from his eyes, and toss that up there also,
to create the sun. Barney was a fan of his circle of ashes, for which hes never left, so he
continued on creating because he was not finished, he took the rest of the ashes and dust to
create the animals, and the the insects and birds. Barney took himself and his ring of ashes to
create the moon. He formed the dust and ashes in the shape of a moon, for there to be a day
and a night also. He created a forbidden garden out of his ashes to make sure that when his
later creations come they take it as a test and pass. After that day of creation, Barney took
himself and that ring of ashes to rest that night.

Barney was a fun God, he enjoyed playing games and just displayed jovial emotions
throughout his days of creation. One day he was having a lot of fun, while playing ring around
the rosie with his ring of dust and ashes he chose to create a human. This human was to be
created so that it can fill the earth and make more. Also,so Barney doesnt become bored, so he
spun really hard and fast so that the dust and ashes could soar up and fill the atmosphere.

For Barney to create this human, he created a special chant, Which was, Human
Human, Let there be Humans, and thus, the human was created. Barney was proud of his
child. He named his child, Alesandro. Barney had special plans for Alesandro. From then, on
Barney played and danced ring around the rosie with his child and they both enjoyed
themselves.

Father, Alesandro asks, Why am I the only one?

You are the only one because you are my only creation so far and because I have to
regenerate, Barney replied. So then, Barney and Alesandro just kept swinging around with the
ring of dust and ashes. After they were finished playing, the loving two were exhausted and they
rested the night away.

I love you Father


Love you too son, Barney replied. As they rested, Barney regenerated and he was able
to make his ring full again and create more humans.

Hey son are you ready to see the new creations? Barney said excitedly.

Yes I am! Alesandro replied. So from then on Barney and Alesandro continued on
ringing around making their next creations. They made Majes and Jameerah, and every time
they were to ring around a new creation was to walk on the earth.

Look at all these creations, Alesandro said excitedly. I cant believe it.

I know, this is now a new stage, Barney replied with eagerness. After those new
creations, Barney invited them to the Ring of ashes and dust, so they help create more humans.

Come on my children so that we may CREATE! Barney shouted to Alesandro, Majes


and Jameerah. They all joined him in ringing around the rosie, so every time they spun around,
a new human pounced onto the earth, originating from the ash and dust. Barney loved his ring
of ashes and dust. He told his creations that if they were to step out of the ring, to go to the
forbidden garden, he would banish them to the middle of the ring where the ashes and dust are
where he were to lay for all eternity and never come back.

Barney tested them, he watched to see if his creations were ever going to walk out and
didnt happen, as they continued on making humans to live on the earth. Barney kept ensuring
that no one would leave and so they can stay happy and have eternal life.

Alesandro thought it would be okay to just leave the circle for a little bit and go see the
garden, and what was so forbidden about it. All he saw was a bunch of colorful puppets and fuly
grown trees, until a dark shadow appeared behind him.

HOW COULD YOU, Barney shouted to Alesandro. MY FIRST CREATION BETRAY


ME LIKE THIS!

Im sorry, Alesandro cried. I did not mean to.

WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DIDNT KNOW, I SPECIFICALLY TOLD YOU TO NOT
GO INTO THE GARDEN, Barney shouted angrily. YOU MAD HARDHEADED, YOU DONT
LISTEN!
NOW YOU GET BANISHED TO THE
ASHES!

NOOOOOOOO! Alesandro cried.


WHAT YOU MEAN NOOOOOOOO, Barney asked. YOU SHOULD HAVE
LISTENED! So from then on, Alesandro was down in the ashes dead, because of his betrayal,
and Barney put a generational curse on the world. Every time someone on the earth who
believed and worshiped in Barney betrayed him, and or forgot his rules, he punished them.
After Alesandros disobedience, no one was able to be immortal.

Barney, Majes, and Jameerah continued on ringing around the earth creating more
humans to fill the earth, and when the world was filled with enough people Barney revealed
himself as exhausted, and allowed females and males to reproduce together. Barney was
convinced that life would go well even though Alesandro ruined everything, so he rested.

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