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Wp1-Writing 2
Wp1-Writing 2
Lovedeep Singh
6/12/17
Writing 2
Professor Johnson
Plagued by Violence
Gang violence has always been a taboo subject in American society. People do not like to
acknowledge its existence or its fatal consequences. Rapper Kendrick Lamar is a luminary when
it comes to discussing gang violence and placing the spotlight on the perilous conditions in his
home town of Compton, California. Similarly, Author Julia Dunn presents a straightforward
presentation dictating the gruesome and conflicting battle between the Bloods and Crips of Los
Angeles. As a musical artist, it is easier to reach out to the public and various age groups because
of how radio, social media, and mainstream culture hold such importance in everyones lives in
our current day and age. Authors are also able to relay their messages to many people, but they
usually have a different connotation connected with them. The genre of rap and online news
articles are different in many aspects, but predominantly in terms of the audiences that they
attract, the tone in which their messages are revealed, and the conventions that accompany each
respective genre.
Kendrick Lamar is known for this revolutionary lyricism and for his mission of placing
an importance on social issues in west coast hip hop. Rap, in general, attracts the younger
generation and especially the age groups constantly involved with social media. Social media
such as Twitter, Facebook, Instagram, etc. gives the younger generation a platform to voice their
opinions and read about daily happenings around the world without having to worry about direct
confrontation or putting too much effort. With everything right at their fingertips, the younger
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generation can access any type of news instantly. This allows rap to flourish and spread its
message with ease because it is always present or being spread around. Although Kendrick is a
famous artist, with an abundance of fame and fortune, people appreciate how he has not
forgotten about his past and place of origin and how he uses his platform as a rapper to put a
spotlight on the violent conditions in his hometown. His humble demeanor, social awareness and
lyricism pertaining to gang violence in Compton has many hip hop followers by his side.
Julia Dunn, the author of Los Angeles Crips and Bloods: Past and Present, relies on a
more straightforward and structured approach when talking about the gang culture of Los
Angeles. As an online news article, the audience that is attracted is automatically cut short in
comparison to rap. They are cut short due to the limited population that looks for online news
articles and the minimal publicity that an online news articles gets compared to a song. Younger
generations do not really scour the web, looking for news articles. In general, online news
articles do not really entice adolescent minds. Online news articles do not incorporate the
exhilarating and descriptive language that attract the younger minds. Those kinds of articles lack
imagination and flare. For example, Julia Dunns article says A gang is an interstitial group,
originally formed spontaneously, and then integrated through conflict. This kind of formal
writing does not allow for the younger masses to build a connection with the issue at hand. Only
an older and more mature audience would be able to understand the meaning of that sentence and
maintain interest throughout reading the entire article. This is because older audiences tend to be
more interested in what is going on in their community or the areas around them, whereas
younger generations are too pre-occupied with other events and the nuances of growing up.
Rap is an aggressive and emotional music genre. It has been used as a stage to describe
life-changing events such a drug usage/trafficking, sex, and death. The tone of each song
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highlights the message being depicted; we are being shown the events, not told. For example, the
tone in m.A.A.d city creates an atmosphere where you feel uncomfortable to leave the safety
of your home and are cautious of the death and danger that surrounds the city of Compton. The
song almost has a biased tone to it because the artist is showing his or her own experiences and
wants the audience to feel the same way. Vulgar language has also been a constant through the
history of rap music, but its usage helps create a more surreal and survivalist environment
because vulgar language tends to come out instantaneously and it is automatic. m.A.A.d city
transports you directly into the chaos and havoc present in Compton.
Articles tend to tell us of events. In Julia Dunns Los Angeles Crips and Bloods: Past
and Present, we are able to read about the history of Bloods and Crips and how they have
evolved over time. We are presented the facts in a formal tone and we are able to analyze the
articles contents from the comforts of our safe houses. Unlike rap, where we feel like we can
picture all the events being described, news articles relay information in a straightforward and
bland manner. As the 1950s came to an end and the next decade emerged, car clubs began to
languish and more organized groups came to the forefront. This sentence epitomizes the major
differences of tone between rap and news articles. You cannot feel the passion or fear from this
sentence, but you feel more educated and aware of how gangs formed back in the day. It feels as
Hip Hop is an onslaught of catchy beats, vulgar language, and illustration. Specifically,
in Kendrick Lamars m.A.A.d city, Lamars usage of rhyme scheme, ad-libs, and descriptive
language hook the listener. Kendrick Lamars verses are able to tell a story and that type of
lyricism captivates listeners. The verse That was back when I was nine/ Joey packed the nine/
We adapt to crime/ Pack a van with four guns at a time helps depict at how early of an age
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Kendrick had to adapt to the violent culture of Compton. Kendricks rhyme scheme and ability to
paint a vivid picture are common conventions used throughout all rap songs. However, Kendrick
uses these conventions to promote awareness about the gang violence in his hometown. The
catchy beats, rhyme and description are vital to keep the listener entertained and all the while,
they are being educated on what it was like to be growing up in such hazardous conditions.
News articles do not include the type of figurative language that raps contain, but that is
because that is not necessary. The purpose of a news article is to keep the reader aware,
considering how news articles are primarly used to be unbiased accounts of information.
However, the way in which it is expressed as compared to rap is immensely different. Julia
Dunns news article includes a plethora of quotations, facts, uses a formal tone, and is structured
in paragraphs rather than verses. This article can articulate and explain its statements, in ways
that Kendricks m.A.A.d city could not fathom. For instance, The gangs in existence at this
particular time in history were not territorial. On the other hand, they were loose associations,
unorganized, and rarely violent. This sort of explanation could not be used in a rap song
because of the nature of how rap songs consist of short and direct lines. This kind of complexity
and word choice is what gives news articles a more civilized and educated appeal.
There are many literary genres, but rap and news articles are two of the most distinct
ones. Rap helps tell a story. Its usage of visuals, strong language and rhyme scheme help entice
the listener. Also, rap transports the listener into the forefront of the described events, which
attracts the younger generation, who are more socially aware and adventurous. News articles are
primarily for those who want strictly the cold hard facts. With a formal and colloquial tone, the
more mature and highly experienced are better able to understand the contents of the articles.
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Although both genres have many differences, they are both adept in getting their messages
Works Cited
Dunn, Julia. Los Angeles Crips and Bloods: Past and Present. Los Angeles Crips and Bloods:
https://web.standford.edu/class/e297c/poverty_prejudice/gangcolor/lacrips.htm
Kendrick Lamar (Ft. MC Eiht)- m.A.A.d City. Genius. Genius Media Group Inc., 22 Oct.