A description of a person he/she admires.

Rearrange the paragraphs and rewrite the essay.

My uncle is a special man. He is slim and good-looking. However, he is

very strict man. Despite his look and stare, he remains modest and humble.
Uncle Ben was a good student. He and my father came from a big family
of six children. They were poor. Yet, he studied hard and obtained a
scholarship to further his studies in overseas. When he was overseas, he
worked part-time and sent money home to support his younger siblings.
A person whom I admire very much is my Uncle Ben. Since I was young,
his advice has influenced me a lot in many ways. His words of encouragement
have been responsible for my success.
After graduating with a degree, he joined a big accounting firm. Today, he
runs his own firm. His kindness is shown when he does accounts for those
small and poor firms at low fees. That is my Uncle Ben, my hero and mentor.
He will always be my role model.
Uncle Bens Personality and Success