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Dystopia
Dystopia
Period 4
March 24, 2017
Capital Punishment
Death is terrifying, and it happens more often than ever. You never knew
who will be next. The governments of the past had long since died out. Or, at least
they had Here. Thats what all cities and countries had become now, Here. Here was
run by a group of people called Them. The Them controlled everything. The people
of Here would wake up, go to work, work, come back, and go to sleep. If they were
late, they were killed. If they rebelled, they were killed. If they committed crimes,
they were killed. The collector killed them. They didnt know if he was human. They
didnt know if he was a he. They didnt know if he existed. All that they knew was
that he was the most fear-inspiring living creature ever known to man.
Rodger Raife awoke to his bed giving him an electric shock. The shock made
small children cry, but everyone got used to it. It was designed to make sure that
nobody had any excuses to be late to work. Roger lived alone, and in turn had one
cramped room that worked as everything a single man might need in life. He sat
down at his small square table. Out of the slot in the wall came a plate with two half-
fried eggs and a glass full of liquid sandpaper. He ate his breakfast quickly and in
silence. After finishing, he ran outside of the house to make sure that he didnt miss
the bus. If he did, he would be late for work. He would die. He made the bus with
plenty of time. He always did, but it never got less scary. The sign on top of the bus
The bus-ride passed without a noise. Nobody talked to each other for fear of
saying something that could be classified as rebellion. The silence pressed around
Rodgers ears, making him think to stay sane. Them couldve come one of two ways.
They could be the unnamed terrorist group; the one that utilized the fear of the state
that the death penalty itself had created to lead a civil war into full action. Or it could
be the old government; the one that may have decided that taking a fascist approach
to ruling its citizens wasnt so bad. He wasnt sure which option was worse. Though
he supposed the first would be more ironic. The death penalty that threatened
thousands into obeying today was the very thing that launched Them into power
hundreds of years ago. But it didnt matter what he thought anyway. The polls told
that the next three years of his life were the ones where he was most likely to be
killed.
His age was 27. He was already the oldest man on his street. He hardly
bragged about it. If he did the collector might come for him just to send a message.
The oldest man alive at the time was 39, and his family had already divided up their
inheritance. Nobody lived more than that. Only the collector was eternal. Or, at least,
that was what they had been told since childhood. The bus came to a stop, and there
was a mad scramble for the door. Attendance was counted by who was in their
office chair in time. Rodger was the fifth one out. He always was, for some reason.
He stood on the platform with his name labeled on it. It rose into the air and carried
He had always been very proud of his job. It had taken 8 years of education
added on to the required 10 (not attending school was punishable by death, as was
doctor of the highest prestige. He slipped on his work uniform without talking to
any of his assistants. He had never liked any of them much, except for Angela. The
always set up couples for the sake of baby-making. Angela was his, and he was
Angelas. He pulled todays files towards him on his desk. He opened the first file. A
construction worker, Hector Marches, who had been scheduled to work all night and
late into the day had fallen asleep at the jackhammer and drilled the front half of his
Bring him in. He said quietly. Two medical assistants brought in the man on
chunk of your foot is gone. Now, you cant build a 12-story building with that kind of
pain, can you? But if you dont log todays work in you record, you cant exactly hope
to see tomorrow either, can you? Mr. Marches gave a wail. He knew what was
coming. It was one of the reasons why jobs that may result in injuries were awful.
Rodger removed a syringe from the wall. It was filled with a sinister-looking green
liquid. The medical assistants bound Hector and fitted him with a mask connected to
a long tube. It pumped him with gas of the same sinister color. The mans eyes rolled
back into his head. Rodger plunged the syringe into his upper arm and hoped that he
The medicine had no name. It was ten times more addictive, effective, and
excruciatingly painful than the olden days morphine. It was not meant to heal, but
get the average citizen through the rest of their workweek, and it was very useful to
that end. Within ten minutes Hector Marches was on his feet and more ready to
work than he had been at the start of that work cycle, despite his new found lack of
right foot. Rodger had five more patients that morning. At Lunchtime, he sat, like
everyone else, alone. He held out his bowl, and a red liquid poured from above,
landing in his bowl without spilling a single drop. It tasted like a mix of liquefied
To pass the time, he did what he always used to do, he remembered. His
remembered the only encounter with the collector that he had ever had. He had
come late in the afternoon, when Rodger was six years old. He had come for his
father. His father, who had whispered an unspeakable word in his sleep, his father
who had dared to say Britain in his dreams. No one alive had ever seen the collector
in person. All those who had lived to see him attack recounted the same thing. They
recounted a cloud of black smoke entering room. They recounted a deep voice
saying the name of the guilty and their crime. The smoke then filled the room
completely, and the guilty was never seen again. All those who were in the room,
and all those who knew the guilty had their memories of them immediately wiped. If
they werent in the room, the smoke came from their food slots.
He tried to eat as fast as humanly possible, for he knew what was going to
Hi, there are no more seats. Do you mind if I sit here? It was Angela. It was
sweet beautiful Angela who was perfect for Rodger. He wanted nothing more in life
than her. But she was a lie. She was a nightmare, the perfect nightmare. She was a
Trojan horse, something designed to entice, and distract him until he was trapped
with five kids and no future, not that he had had one anyway.
Please, I was just leaving. He said, leaving half of his soup.
Back in his office, he had the rest of his Lunch hour to think. He thought of his
family, two sisters, a brother, a mother, and a father. He thought of his brother, dead
for having an affair. He thought of his sister, dead for hitting her head on the bus and
getting amnesia. He thought of his other sister, dead for walking into work with a
tear in her pants. He thought of his mother, dead for leaping out of the crowd,
embracing and embarrassing him after his name was called during his medical
school graduation. He thought of the dark cloud, absorbing criminals, stealing their
memories, their identities, and their souls, and leaving nothing but their crimes
behind.
He thought of Angela. He thought of all the matched couples in the world. The
romanticism of falling in love had been taken by Them. Everybodys other halves
had already been decided. Everybody was doomed to marriage. Every woman
doomed to become a human waterslide, spitting out squealing children every two
years. Every man doomed to give up everything only to make sure that his children
He cranked the lever. Sweet relief filled his mouth. His seemed to be trying to
break out and live alone. He didnt want it to. He was going to die either way. The
smoke would not kill him. He would not be stolen from the world. Nor would he