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Basic Plan Essay
Basic Plan Essay
Introduction
1. Hook:
Extensive livestock farming is one of the activities that most contaminates water
sources, besides being one of the activities that waste this resource and that for
its development must resort to deforestation of flora necessary for the generation
of O2 on the planet. Commented [BH2]: Las ideas principales
(mainideas) deben hacer parte de la thesis
3. Thesis statement: statement, no de la infoemacin de contexto.
water footprint generated for the extensive livestocks can be much bigger that Commented [BH3]: No se identifican las tres ideas
principales. Estn deben ser claramente
the generated for the use of vehicles or by the effect of industrial production.
identificables en la thesisi statement.
Body
1. Topic sentence:
3. Concluding sentence:
The contamination of water sources and the generation of dead zones in the
ocean around the world find their explanation in the inadequate disposition of
the residues generated by the extensive livestocks.
1. Topic sentence:
2. Supporting details:
3. Concluding sentence:
These figures demonstrate that waste of water by extensive livestock reduces the
attempt to save water in our homes to zero. it's very frustrating that governments
don't take actions for regulate this problem.
1. Topic sentence:
2. Supporting details:
3. Concluding sentence:
The fact that extensive livestock contaminates water sources and at the same
time significantly reduces the "lungs of the planet"; Makes it the activity that most
contaminates and which should be the most concern of environmental groups.
Conclusion
The idea that vehicles and waste of industry are the biggest source of pollution
on the planet is totally wrong. The media power of this idea causes people to
turn their eyes from the real problem, the livestock.
3. Final thought:
If the governments of world don't act before this problem the next generations
will see behind and they will blame us for the condition of the planet that we left.