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NAME: Fausto
CODE:
Talk about you making an autobiography about 130 150 words
long in which you mention five situations you couldnt achieve in
your life but you wanted. In each situation, mention the year
TASK: and give reasons why you didnt fulfill them. Bear in mind the
previous information and take into account the use of perfect
modals to express personal regrets, speculations, certainty and
draw conclusions. Additionally, involve all the vocabulary needed
to support your ideas.
FIRST DRAFT: _______ FINAL VERSION: _______

There have been a lot of situation that I have regretted in my life. I dont think I can be able
to name five of them because I dont like thinking about them. Maybe I can say that I once
wanted to become a famous singer but I wasnt blessed with the best of vocal chords, so I
resorted to playing an instrument, but I couldnt find the time to practice the necessary
amount of time. I felt depressed for a few weeks and then I decided to go and try to
become something much more believable and in line with my beliefs and desires. One
should follow their dreams no matter what. No matter how difficult they are. I want to feel
sure that someday Im going to be the person I want to be.

CRITERIA SCORE
Task completion
Cohesion and
coherence
Orthographic
control
Vocabulary
Accuracy
TOTAL
COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS
 KEY TO PROVIDE FEEDBACK

Key Type of error Example Correction

A Agreement He play tennis. He plays tennis.

PL Plural Two nice man Two nice men

S Singular She has a cars. She has a car.

? Problems in discourse I was studied big

[ ] Something must be left out Ana she is cute Ana is cute.

^ Something is missing I am student I am a student.

W.T Wrong tense I am born in 1977 I was born in 1977.

W.W Wrong word I assist class. I attend class.

W.S Wrong spelling She is beautifull. She is beautiful.

W.E Wrong expression I have 20 years old. I am 20 years old.

W.P Wrong preposition The key is between the car The key is in the car

W.O Wrong order I like very much pizza. I like pizza very much.

C Capitalization I like english. I like English.

P Punctuation It is cold, and humid. It is cold and humid.