Martin Posadas Ave., San Carlos City, Pangasinan, 2420, Philippines
GRADUATE SCHOOL COMPLIANCE REPORT Name : Anu Maharjan Program : Master in Business Administration Title : Spice of Nepal Adviser : Michael Armas, CPA Chairman : Jose Emmanuel C. Mandapat, DA Members : Marcelo G. Paz, PhD : Efren Y. Ignacio, PhD Date of Defense : 2 July 2017 Section/Page Comments / Suggestions Compliance General Comments The paper requires a grammar editor. Please consult Dr. Marcelo G. Paz for the grammatical corrections.
Please follow institutional
format including the indentions, justification of paragraphs, and spacings. Please revise the presentation of your executive summary. Table of Contents Follow institutional format. Chapter I Follow proper indentation. Remove the page numbers at the start of every chapter. p.3, change adorable with affordable
p.3, include Convenience
Store after 7-11
Courses should be changed in to
programs.
Spell out VMUF.
Check the justification of your paragraphs.
Font should be Arial, size 12,
double spacing. Cite your sources.
Consider revising our logo.
p.10, on the last part: use enrolled at VMUF, instead of inside VMUF Chapter II The map should include a symbol where your canteen should be located.
Resize your pie chart. It should
be enlarged.
p.25 Please check the proper
numerical values of the annual sales of your competitors. Chapter III p.49, the flow should have a starting point and an ending point. p.50, please consider revising the service flow. p.53, please update your land price in the Philippines. p.54, please include the measurements. Please consider revising the second figure. You should have a more detailed layout of your floor plan. p.60, you may include a cabinet- type air conditioning unit. Also include exhaust fan in the kitchen p.66-100: This may no longer be found in your manuscript Chapter IV Please be consistent with your currency