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Virgen Milagrosa University Foundation

Martin Posadas Ave., San Carlos City, Pangasinan, 2420, Philippines


GRADUATE SCHOOL
COMPLIANCE REPORT
Name : Anu Maharjan
Program : Master in Business Administration
Title : Spice of Nepal
Adviser : Michael Armas, CPA
Chairman : Jose Emmanuel C. Mandapat, DA
Members : Marcelo G. Paz, PhD
: Efren Y. Ignacio, PhD
Date of Defense : 2 July 2017
Section/Page Comments / Suggestions Compliance
General Comments The paper requires a grammar
editor. Please consult Dr.
Marcelo G. Paz for the
grammatical corrections.

Please follow institutional


format including the indentions,
justification of paragraphs, and
spacings.
Please revise the presentation
of your executive summary.
Table of Contents Follow institutional format.
Chapter I Follow proper indentation.
Remove the page numbers at
the start of every chapter.
p.3, change adorable with
affordable

p.3, include Convenience


Store after 7-11

Courses should be changed in to


programs.

Spell out VMUF.


Check the justification of your
paragraphs.

Font should be Arial, size 12,


double spacing.
Cite your sources.

Consider revising our logo.


p.10, on the last part: use
enrolled at VMUF, instead of
inside VMUF
Chapter II The map should include a
symbol where your canteen
should be located.

Resize your pie chart. It should


be enlarged.

p.25 Please check the proper


numerical values of the annual
sales of your competitors.
Chapter III p.49, the flow should have a
starting point and an ending
point.
p.50, please consider revising
the service flow.
p.53, please update your land
price in the Philippines.
p.54, please include the
measurements. Please consider
revising the second figure. You
should have a more detailed
layout of your floor plan.
p.60, you may include a cabinet-
type air conditioning unit. Also
include exhaust fan in the
kitchen
p.66-100: This may no longer be
found in your manuscript
Chapter IV Please be consistent with your
currency

Recorder: Carlo Paul C. Sana

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