era0:7 Rovéow Your Resume Critque | TopResume oe ES Your TopResume Resume Critique Andrew Bennett September 10, 2017 tome Hello Snehan, My name is Andrew Bennett and | am a resume Expert at TopResume. | analyze hundreds of resumes for professionals each month, so | can tell how you're marketing yourself as a potential candidate to prospective employers. | have reviewed your document's content and formatting to provide insights that will aide you in your job search. Overview of Your Resume Your current resume is underselling you. It needs to shine the best light on your experience, qualifications and accomplishments. The visual presentation and content contained in your resume could be much more impactful. Employers want to know about your previous contributions and specifically, how you've made a difference. More importantly, they want to know how you are going to make a significant difference at their company. While reading your resume, | felt that you could use some more compelling language to help bring your work to life. Passive words and non-action verbs don't do you any favors. Phrases like “providing” and “conduct” are overused and come off a bit monotonous. Strong action verbs and compelling language are essential to a well-constructed resume Now, let's see it in action. Here's an example taken from a former client's resume. By changing the language, we helped improve perception of the candidate. = Passive language / Doing: Negotiated contracts with vendors ipsshawucopresume.cony?pl==BKgOFPeWHukpor=monstaraclon=resumecrliquevewdal=qDsXSIK-hUSHKOYDHXUZFASAUSTIKBerit=28ulm cam. 19era20%7 Rovéow Your Resume Critque | TopResume « Action language / Achieving: Slashed payroll/benefits administration costs 30% by negotiating pricing and fees, while ensuring the continuation and enhancements of services. Acchange like this makes a dramatic improvement. Bullet points are great for emphasis, but too many can be distracting. Consider limiting your use of bullets to increase impact. Too many makes it difficult to zero in on the most important information. Also keep in mind size and type of bullets. After all, visual impact of a resume is the first step to ensuring that an employer reads it thoroughly. Digital Readiness Your resume is 16kb in size. About 8% of resumes are smaller than yours. You have a little room to work with, so if you want to spend some more time on formatting, you can do so and not risk getting filtered out based on size. RESUME FILE SIZE COMPARED TO OTHERS SMALL FILE LARGE FILE Good news: your resume is saved in a recent version of Microsoft Word. An overwhelming majority of resumes look like yours and Applicant Tracking Systems (ATS) ? love it. RESUME FILE-TYPE, COMPARED TO OTHERS 64% 19% 8% % -ipsshawucopresume.cony?pl=6T BKgOFPeWHupor=monstaracUon=resumecrliquevenéal=qDsXSIK-USHKOYOHXUZFASAUSTEKBerit=28ulm cam. 29era20%7 Review Your Resume Critique | TopResume Resume scanning software litmus test 93% of all Hiring Managers use a resume scanning software to filter candidates from the application pool. To illustrate how you stand up to the automation, | passed your resume through the very same software that Hiring Managers use to filter the real talent from the hundreds, sometimes thousands, of candidates that apply for a single open position Continue below to view how Applicant Tracking Systems (ATS) present you REWRITING PACKAGES Simply put, you will land more interviews after your resume is re-created by a TopResume resume writer. PROFESSIONAL GROWTH Your new resume, keyword optimized to get you past all of the filters CAREER EVOLUTION Your new resume with two revisions, along with a brand new cover letter. HEAD AND SHOULDERS ABOVE THE REST TopResume has helped more than 300,000 professionals ~ from every industry and background — enjoy the careers they deserve. Below are real stories of others we've helped Lyo1a, An Executive Assistent, she followed a resume-writing guide anc everything seemed in place. But she wasn't getting any interviews. View Lydia's Story » ae -ipsshawacopresume.cony?pl==T BKg OF PeWHupor=monstaraclon=resumecrliquevieuéal=qDsXSIK-USHKOYOHXUZFASAUSTEKBerit=28ulm cam. 39era20%7 Rovéow Your Resume Critque | TopResume (OUR PROMISE TO YOU The first step to getting hired is getting your resume in professional shape. When you work with our certified resume writers, you're working with experts in your industry. The raw data, pulled directly from your resume. SNEHAN PESHIN's experience appears to be concentrated in Engineering / General Engineering, with exposure to Light Technical/Trades/Skilled Labor / Machine Shop. SNEHAN PESHIN has 6 years of work experience, with no management experience. FULL NAME SNEHAN PESHIN MOST RECENT EMPLOYER Ford Motor Company, Auto Transmission New Procuct Center MOST RECENT PROFESSIONAL POSITION Product Design Engineer (Materials, Plastics, Oils, components) CONTACT INFO| ps shawucopresume.cony?pl==T BKg OF PeWHupor=monstaraclon=resumecriqueviewéal=qDsXSIK-hUSHKOYDHXUZFASAUSTAKBerit=28ulm cam. 49svar” Redon Yur Resume Citque| TopResune gato133451 snehanpeshin@gmailcom LOCATION Jammu, IN-JK EXPERIENCE 6 total years MOSTRECENT EDUCATION Michigan State University East Lansing se , ©) OUR RESUMES GET YOU INTERVIEWS. | BROWSE OUR PACKAGES ye es Hiring Managers use Applicant Tracking Systems (ATS) to automatically designate a Best Fit based on your experience level and the kinds of keywords spread throughout your resume. The ATS will also assign a weighted score to Key Skills & Competencies from your resume to paint a picture of who you are as a potential employee. Here is how your resume stacks up... ‘Where the ATS thinks you fit: Engineering Light Technical/Trades/Skilled Labor Does this properly describe the career helped pursuing? If not, check out a real-life scenario where we meone change thelr story, ipsshawucopresume.cony?pl==T BKgOFPeWHupor=monstaraclon=resumecrliquevieuéal=qDsXSIK-hUSHKOyOHXUZFASAUSTIKBerit=28ulm cam... 5era20%7 Review Your Resume Critique | TopResume Top Skills: mechanical engineering purchasing welding acoustic packaging Other Core Competencies: product design molding machine product design engineer analog silicon prototype plastics prototyping injection molding fasteners optimization engineer systems engineer tooling dyno assembly plant axle Less Weighted Skills: buying/procurement system level cost reduction shipping design engineer design for assembly driveline fabrication mems wafer lithography teaching laboratory assembly maintenance cfp test engineering data collection collection set want to convey to employers? If not, email me! I'm here to help you land more Vv My Suggestions Your resume has been flagged as one that will benefit greatly from the skilled attention of a professional resume writer! Recommended: Professional Resume Rewrite ipsshawucopresume.cony?pl==T BKg OF PeWHukpor=monstaraclon=resumecrliquevieuéal=qDsXSIKHUSHKOYOHXUZFASAUSTIKBerit=28um cam. 6era20%7 Rovéow Your Resume Critque | TopResume Besides gaining the perspective another brings to your personal pitch, you can benefit from all kinds of technical nuances our professional resume writers are trained to identify and optimize. Email me with any questions! | critique resumes professionally, and I'm here to help you get more interviews and job offers. Thanks, and good luck! 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