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Simpson Ami-Marie - 102086 2h 2017 A2
Simpson Ami-Marie - 102086 2h 2017 A2
Ami-Marie SIMPSON
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Contents
Section 1: Australian Professional Standards for Teachers .......................................................2
Section 2: NSW Quality Teaching Model ................................................................................4
Section 3: Identifying Areas for Improvement .........................................................................6
Close Look at Speeches (Amended Lesson Plan) .....................................................................7
A Close Look at Speeches (Worksheet 1) .............................................................................. 13
Plan your own speech (Worksheet 2) .....................................................................................15
Public Speaking Rubric ......................................................................................................... 17
The Four Cs .........................................................................................................................18
Academic Justification: ......................................................................................................... 19
References ............................................................................................................................. 21
Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following Australian Professional Standards for Teachers. Only standards
directly addressed in Designing Teaching & Learning that are relevant to this assignment have been included. However,
this does not mean the other standards are irrelevant to lesson planning and evaluation more generally.
1.4 Strategies for teaching Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students
12345 Comments: As per the comment above, there is no inclusion for ATSI students. There is some
research undertaken by the class to understand who Martin Luther King Junior is, so that there is
some historical context to why MLK Jrs speech is important, but the assumed historical context is
not made definitively relevant to this Australian classroom.
1.5 Differentiate teaching to meet the specific learning needs of students across the full range of abilities
12345 Comments: Undertaking small group discussions allows the stronger students to further facilitate
their personal growth by relaying their thoughts to students with less ability, however there is no
scope for teacher assistance or differentiation of tasks outlined.
Evaluate the lesson plan according to the following NSW Quality Teaching model elements.
Evaluation score refer to NSW QTM Classroom Practice Guide for each element
Comments incl. evidence for evaluation score (2 sentences)
1 Intellectual quality
1.1 Deep knowledge
1 2 3 4 5 Comments: Students are asked to apply their previous analysis of texts to speeches. Emphasis is
made on how language is used for an oral presentation, with specification on the language features
used to make a speech powerful. This could be expanded by specifically reviewing language
features at the beginning of the lesson.
1.5 Metalanguage
1 2 3 4 5 Comments: The power of language features is the main outcome of this lesson, focusing primarily
on the spoken word.
2.2 Engagement
1 2 3 4 5 Comments: It would be expected that there is a higher level of engagement due to the amount of
small group work and larger class discussion, but there is no specification for the teacher to monitor
students focus on task. Additionally, the sample speeches may not have direct relevance to the
students and this may lead to a level of disinterest.
3 Significance
3.1 Background knowledge
1 2 3 4 5 Comments: The students prior knowledge regarding language features and tools is implied in the
analysis of the speeches. However, the students background or out of school knowledge is not
discussed.
3.4 Inclusivity
12345 Comments: Inclusivity is not specifically addressed, though the shared discussion on research
indicates that everyone will have similar knowledge before reviewing the spoken texts. There is
scope to improve the cultural knowledge brought in to this lesson.
3.5 Connectedness
1 2 3 4 5 Comments: Exploring the power of the written word has implications for the outside world and
assisting students, and this could be addressed more clearly in the lesson plan.
3.6 Narrative
12345 Comments: After listening to and analysing powerful examples of spoken texts, students are asked
to create their own narratives. However, the content of this narrative is not defined.
Identify the two APST standards and two NSW QT model elements you are targeting for improvement.
APST
1) 1.5 Differentiate teaching to meet the specific 2) 2.3 Curriculum, assessment and reporting
learning needs of students across the full range of
abilities
QT model
1) 2.1 Explicit Quality Criteria 2) 3.5 Connectedness
General Capabilities:
Resources Required:
Teacher:
o Suitable facilities for showing captioned YouTube clips on screen to class, including
access to the Internet:
Lesson outcome: Students learn about speeches as powerful spoken texts by considering two
speeches, and analysing the use of language features to manipulate particular effects. Students
apply this learning to create their own spoken text exemplifying language features such as stylistic
devices.
Lesson outline:
Note: This lesson is broken into two periods as per the recommended structure below.
Lesson 1:
1. Note to the students that Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander are advised that the following
lesson may contain images and voices of people who have passed away.
Lesson 2
1. Open Padlet to review powerful language tools used in the speeches covered in first lesson.
o Ask students if they had any further ideas on why these speeches were powerful and
add to Padlet.
2. As a class, construct a Venn diagram (creately.com) which identifies the similarities and
differences in the speeches of King and Rudd with a focus on the language features used
and how they made the spoken text powerful.
o Extension: Reflect on the historical impact of these speeches.
3. Facilitate a class discussion where students can contribute their ideas about what it is they
liked about either or both of the speeches. Emphasise that this is a safe environment to
discuss their opinions.
4. Further discuss and explore the concept of how when written language is presented to an
audience orally, the emphasis can change.
o Extension: Ask for examples of this, eg. Reading Plays as opposed to Performing
Plays
o Adjustment: Write sentences on the board, and have students volunteer to read
them aloud, using tone and emphasis to perform the written text. Make these
funny, relatable, and relevant to the school.
Describe the audience; who are they and how are they responding to Kings speech?
What language techniques does King use to achieve this purpose? Provide examples.
Describe the audience; who are they and how are they responding to Rudds speech?
What language techniques does Rudd use to achieve this purpose? Provide examples.
I have a dream
The Cap That! Close look at speeches source analysed was a resource developed
specifically to accentuate the availability of captioned videos online. Media Access Australia
developed these resources to correlate with the national Australian Curriculum, and posit that
captions assist not only students with hearing problems or deafness, but also students on the Autism
spectrum, and with a Language Background Other than English (Media Access Australia, 2017).
While this meets the Australian Professional Standards for Teachers on several levels for
example: 1.3, 1.6, 2.6, and 3.4 the lesson plan has scope for improvement on Standard 1.5
Differentiate teaching to meet the specific learning needs of students across the full range of
abilities and 2.3 Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting.
Standard 2.3 Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting was briefly addressed in the original
lesson plan by linking back to the Australian Curriculum unit ACELY1750. However, there was
no planned assessment outlined. The inference for Graduate teachers is apparent in that the group
dynamic and ongoing questioning by the teacher would form part of Assessment as Learning
(Board of Studies NSW, 2012, p. 104), an in-the-moment assessment where the teacher gains
By not addressing the Assessable outcomes of the lesson, this plan also did not meet the
NSW Quality Teaching Model Element 2.1 Explicit Quality Criteria (NSW Department of
Education and Training, 2003, p. 26). By having students understand what is expected of them not
just in terms of behaviour but quality of work, students will be able to positively engage with their
task (Geelan, et al., 2015, p. 21). The consistent reference back to powerful language, and what
this means to the students, assists students to intrinsically understand the quality of work expected
from them, without being directly articulated (NSW Department of Education and Training, 2003,
p. 27).
The lesson initially included the Martin Luther King Jr speech, and a speech by successful
Australian conductor Richard Gill. Richard Gills speech was 13 minutes in length, and this
reviewer found it to be very dry and not particularly engaging. The choice of a shorter speech in
Kevin Rudds Apology to the Australian Indigenous People was both to contextualise historical
racial movements and attempt to engage the students in something that they could connect to as
part of Australian society. Quality Teaching Element 3.5 Connectedness (NSW Department of
Education and Training, 2003, p. 48) was sorely lacking in the original plan. While Richard Gill is
Australian, and some students may have been involved in music, there was no real connection to
our greater social structure. Essinki (2009, p. 13) emphasises the Quality Teaching Models focus
on Connectedness, and argues that personalising activities assists in engaging students of all
abilities. Hence the lesson plan has been amended to include the students opinions in a Safe
Learning Environment, while the speech assessment has been further clarified to be specifically
written on a topic that is personally important to the student.
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