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Joseph Bunny
English 115
29 September 2017
1st Draft
The internet is like alcohol in a way. If you want to be a loner, you can be more alone. If
you want to connect, it makes it easier to connect. The vast internet has been a tool and a weapon
throughout the years it has been around. It could make day to day living much easier, like when
your phone reminds you you have a doctors appointment at three the next day. On the other hand
technology can totally ruin your day, like when your car refuses to start and you need to drive to
school to take your final. Technology is a good servant but a bad master says American writer
Gretchen Rubin. Technology has consequences that can be positive or negative depending on
how we use it. Due to the choices people have already made, we have changes in the way we act
with other people. Technology has affected the way we interact face to face, negotiate, commit
crimes and even date because it removes the much of the emotional connection that is
We have impacted the way we do things in real life due to the internet. The internet has
lead to weaker social interactions because the internet has reduced the need to leave the home.
Due to the internet, people have been encouraged to stay at home because everything that needed
to be done outside the home are now accessible in the home. Things such as work, friendships,
romantic relations, and even banking. This is stopping us from having social interactions and
weakening our real life interactions. A study was conducted by a teacher, J. Richardson, to see
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the impact of smartphones on his classroom. He teaches theatre, and this is what he said, the
freedom of choice and control that students associate with their use of smartphonesshapes the
way in which they experience and respond to live theatre (Richardson, 2014). He also states
later on the smartphones even affect the way we watch theatre due to the temptation to check our
phones during a performance. He believes that smartphones have affected the way the students
acted in plays. I believe this is due to a separation from reality. It is easy to make some believe
something in an edited video with special effects and music production but that same impact
from a video must be done through a play. The play must encompass the emotion that you can't
get from looking at a glass screen. Another studied backed up Richardson's study when it was
found that Facebook users reported to have lower mean GPA averages and reported spending
fewer hours per week studying on average than Facebook nonusers. The internet is affecting
even things like school work. The internet is a huge distractor that sucks our time away from us.
If we are continuously distracted by something it will stop us from taking in reality. Our
responsibilities seem to just fade away, like they just don't exist. This affects our identity because
when our mind detach from reality we begin to do things and think differently than we would if
Another impact that has changed the way we live is the increase of cyber crimes.
According to Bureau of Justice Statistics In 2005, among 7,818 businesses: 67% detected at
least one cybercrime, nearly 60% detected one or more types of cyber attack, 11% detected cyber
theft, 24% detected other computer security incidents, most businesses did not report cyber
attacks to law enforcement authorities. The ammoun to businesses that have experienced cyber
crimes is overwhelming. The internet has created new ways to steal and i am only lead to believe
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that that has gone up since 2005. People you talk to willingly share that they download music
illegally and they download movies in the same manner. This not only harms the industry they
are stealing from but also the government will lose their trust in us. People's information has
been hacked to the point of identity theft. The internet makes it now easier to access thing like
social security information and addresses that it lowers the security and privacy for the user.
People have hacked into other countries information making the internet possibly the place
where war can start. Cyber war is something that become increasingly more possible to occur. If
the United States hack Russia for instance, instead of Russia fighting back with weapons, all they
need to do is hack us back. It will become a continues cycle of hacking each other till one
surrenders. It doesnt help that the government is hiding thing from the people. Now going back
to the statistics it also shows that businesses arent reporting these crimes. Because cyber attack
are not face to face it removes the urgency that is cause by stealing in real life. In cyber attacks
there isn't someone putting a gun to your head saying to hand over your product. It happens very
suddenly but it may not even become apparent till inventory is done or someone finds the
missing goods. Because of this lack of urgency people don't report this to law enforcement. We
need to feel this urgency to ensure our safety and our businesses safety. This affects our identity
because it changes the way we feel about urgency in real life. It lowers our confidence online and
Another thing that has been affected by the internet is romantic relationships and dating.
This is something that has been greatly changed because of the internet. Some statistics show
that, one-third of people who have used online dating have never actually gone on a date with
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someone they met on these sites. The increasing use of dating sites have increased the amount
of dates we go on but have lowered the amount of successful date that we go on.
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Works Cited
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doi:10.1080/17439884.2013.867867
2. Smith, Aaron, and Monica Anderson. 5 Facts about Online Dating. Pew Research
www.pewresearch.org/fact-tank/2016/02/29/5-facts-about-online-dating/.