1, Lionel Messi , a 30 year olds Argentine footballer, is my biggest idol.

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=> The person that I admire is a 30 year old football, Lionel Messi
2. He currently plays for the Barcelona and the Argentine national team.
3. The thing i make me love him most is his manly appearance.
4. He's tall and strong with stanned skin and short black hair.
5. His straight nose and square face makes him more handsome.
6. Not only does he have a good build but he also has many success in his
career.
7. At an early age, he showed his talent for soccer and recorded great
achievements of in football.
8. For examples, in 2008 Messi became the first and only player to score in
4 consecutive champion league campains campaign
9, In March 2013, he made Champions league history by becoming the first
player to score 5 goals in a Match.
10, He's is always competitive to desire to win the game as a great present to
his fans usually supporting him.
11. However, behind his success, it's not generally known that he had hard
childhood and lived in poverty but his passion for soccer wasn't limited so
he always trains hard and never give up.
12, In short, Messi is the footballer i admire most
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