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Tower Of Terror In Disneyland

Tower Of Terror

CREEK CREEK That Was The Sound-Noise Of The Footsteps Coming Towards Me, The
Lights Suddenly Flickered Slowly,The Vibration Coming Of Of And The BANG It Was Dark
I Couldnt See Anything, Were My Parents-Mum Next To Me Or Was I All Alone.OWWW I
Heard Ghosts But I Didnt See Them, I Felt Unsafe Because I Didnt Know What Was
Coming Next, Then BANG We Dropped I Scream As Loud As I Could, I Could Feel
Butterflies In My Stomach Raising Up And Down.Then We Stopped, I Was Confused I Didnt
Know What Happened Is The Ride Stuck? Or Will I Never Get Out Of Here, THUD We Fell
Right Down To The Bottom I Was Relieved But I Was Also Scared Out Of My Life!, My Heart
Was Beating Out Of My Chest.