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Gothic Story - Draft 2
Gothic Story - Draft 2
Gothic Story - Draft 2
It has been a long time since the Erebus castle gates have opened. A long time indeed.
The hosts shut their doors to the outside world decades ago. Some speculate that they are
dead, others that they have fled, but no one really knew. Not a single carriage ever left the house.
Not a single voice was heard from inside its walls. It remained perpetually in darkness, and the
castle fell into disrepair. Ivy crept up its walls, and cracks splintered its stone towers.
A treacherous forest grew around its borders, obscuring it from outsiders. Its branches
grew so thickly as to shroud its depths from even the touch of sunlight. A sea of thick fog
hovered over the ground. There were terrible stories about this forest stories of a beast residing
within, tearing to pieces anyone who lost themselves inside these woods. Villagers claimed to
hear horrible, howling shrieks at night, shrieks that did not sound human or animal.
A few brave souls poor, wretched souls have ventured into the woods, announcing
obstinately that they believed neither in or curse nor monster. None ever returned. Our story,
however, does not begin in this cursed forest, but within the stone walls of the castle, long, long
ago. The day the gates were closed and the lights extinguished forever.
A father knelt next to the crackling fire, watching his small son take stumbling steps
across the living room carpet. He reached his mother, who turned him gently around, and he
started for his father. He wore a toothy grin and giggled as he drew near his father.
Thats my boy! exclaimed the man as the boy fell into his arms, laughing. Rain howled
outside, making the candle on the windowsill flicker, but it did nothing to diminish the happiness
of the family. Nicos eyes gleamed with excitement, and he looked from his mother to his father,
as if not knowing what to do next. He was mid-laugh when his eyes rolled back in his head and
The mother gave a scream and rushed to the child. Is he breathing? she cried, checking
his pulse. Nothing. His blood was still in his veins. His skin was icy. His heart isnt beating,
wailed the mother, turning the limp child over onto his back. She pressed on his chest frantically,
As soon as it started, it was over. The boy sat bolt upright, wide-eyed. The mother gave a
weak laugh of relief and threw her arms around the child, but she jumps back, horrified, upon
finding no heart beat in his chest. No breath issuing from his mouth. His skin remained cold to
the touch.
The child cocked his head sideways, and his eyes took on a cloudy green hue. They
stared forward unseeing. He opened his mouth and started to speak, but it was not his voice
indeed, Nico had not yet learned to speak but a low, snake-like voice speaking through him.
I am Khalida, goddess of Death, hissed the voice. The eyes turned to the mother, who
stared back in horror. Furnisher of the flames of hell, torturer to the living. Your son is mine.
No, Nico, please, the mother whispered, but her lips didnt move. She tried to touch her
son, but his small hand, with inhuman strength, pushed her roughly away. He stood and kicked
her sharply in the side, making her moan in pain. Meanwhile, the father inched slowly toward the
cabinet, where a sharp, serrated knife lay on display. He got it shakily out of its casing.
was gone, leaving only little Nico, eyes widened in fear, before the spirit regained control. The
boy twitched, gasped, and his body began to mutate. His eyes sunk into his flesh, leaving animal
eyes where his had once been. His muscles bulged, his skin disappeared, and a scaly layer of
flesh formed in its place. His face became long and hairy, its nose protruding from its face.
The beast whimpered and fell silent, licking itself. The mother found with horror that she
did not recognize her son, but the horror soon turned to pure fear as the beast turned on her,
baring his teeth. It is your turn to die, crooned the voice, and the beast opened its fist to reveal
Please, just spare my son, she pleaded. Let him go! Take me instead!
The beasts face contorted with anger. Khalida will take whomever she wants, it hissed.
There was a shout behind them, and the father came charging toward the beast, a knife in
hand. He wheeled back to throw, knowing he had only a few seconds before the beast reacted. It
knelt over the mother, lowering its razor-sharp claws down to her skin.
The beast blinked, surprised for a moment. It made no move to flee. It simply flickered
and was gone, disappearing into thin air as if it were merely a projection. A few moments later, it
appeared at the back of the room, unscathed, a nasty grin on its face. In a moment, it had fled the
room, and the father realized for the first time where his knife had landed. Finding no beast, the
knife had continued its course and plunged itself into the womans chest.
The father screamed, a tortured screech that echoed through the house. The monster took
off into the woods, and the gates of the Erebus castle clanged shut for the final time. It
disappeared into the forests, whose branches began curling around him to hide his presence.
The mother lay face-first on the floor, a knife protruding through her rib cage. Blood
soaked into the rich living room carpet, and she trembled as the life began to drain out of her.
A cold wind swept across the grounds, pervaded the house, made the mother shiver
where she lay. The crackling fire flickered and died, leaving only a pile of burning coals in its
place. The windowsill candles flame wavered a moment, and then was extinguished forever.