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by Tracy Mae De Vera

Submission date: 16-Oct-2017 07:46AM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 863571761
File name: Progress_Report.docx (110.6K)
Word count: 449
Character count: 2243
Hi Tracy, Your Progress Report
includes some important details--good
start. To improve future papers and/or
if you decide to revise this for your
add logo
portfolio, use the comments below as
a guide.

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and what happened?

Oh! That's new--thank you!

 and all were accepted by iFixit?

specif ics add

milestone 4? final folder?

add conclusion ("If you have any questions . . .,"

"We expect to finish on time")
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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment. Hi T racy, Your Progress Report includes some important details--good
start. T o improve f uture papers and/or if you decide to revise this f or your portf olio, use the
comments below as a guide.

Text Comment. add logo

Text Comment. OK

QM specif ics add

sentences are always helped by specif ic details. replace general terms with specif ics.

Text Comment. milestones? device?

Text Comment. and what happened?

Text Comment. Oh! T hat's new--thank you!

PAGE 2

Text Comment. and all were accepted by iFixit?

QM specif ics add

sentences are always helped by specif ic details. replace general terms with specif ics.

Text Comment. milestone 4? f inal f older?

Text Comment. add conclusion ("If you have any questions . . .," "We expect to f inish on
time")
RUBRIC: IFIXIT PROGRESS REPORT RUBRIC

CRIT ERIA 1 Prof icient

Form & Organization

ABSENT/BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or

BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
concisely, specif ically, and accurately

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT/BELOW T he report f ails to describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
BASIC work; the group seems in danger of not f inishing the project on time.

DEVELOPING Descriptions of the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work may be
vague; evidence of the group's ability to complete the project on time isn't quite
convincing.

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work adequately; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

ADVANCED Specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work
directly and aptly; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

CRIT ERION 3 Advanced

Appearance

ABSENT/BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the report.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Prof icient

Language
ABSENT/BELOW Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability.
BASIC

DEVELOPING Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract
f rom meaning.

PROFICIENT Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning.

ADVANCED Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence variety.
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