Logan S Rampey

Prof. Intawiwat
Exercise 4
9/15/17

Handwashing: Writing for Readers

In order to adapt the corporate handwashing info to employees instead of employers, I would
describe the benefits in a more personal, less calculated, way. Instead of saying that employees
will use less sick days, it could be presented as a positive. Perhaps employees will be less
likely to fall behind in their work would be a better alternative. Also, when addressing
employees directly it would be of benefit to use terms like we or our families instead of
referring to them as employees. A more personal instance of this same information could apply
well to employees.