Kiyan Mullen Progress Report

(Team Squirrel/Team 4)
by Kiyan Mullen

Submission date: 01-Oct-2017 11:36PM (UT C-0700)

Submission ID: 855717006
File name: Progress_Report.docx (13.35K)
Word count: 270
Character count: 1548
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team

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at!

Great work here--

concise yet
complete

write device
page; submit
iFixitone page,
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five topics
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add a
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n stating
when and

whether
you think
you'll
finish on
time,
given very pragmatic
your
progress
thus far.

Hmm, what about your Editing

manager? Maybe you can
delegate that delegation?
Sign off (usually a "please call if you have questions"
style closing is welcome)
Kiyan Mullen Progress Report (Team Squirrel/Team 4)
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Text Comment. one page, f ive topics

Text Comment. You should add a conclusion stating when and whether you think you'll
f inish on time, given your progress thus f ar.

Text Comment. T his section is really detailed--great job.

Text Comment. very pragmatic

Text Comment. Hmm, what about your Editing manager? Maybe you can delegate that
delegation?

Text Comment. Sign of f (usually a "please call if you have questions" style closing is
welcome)
RUBRIC: IFIXIT PROGRESS REPORT RUBRIC

CRIT ERIA 1 Prof icient

Form & Organization

ABSENT/BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or

BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
concisely, specif ically, and accurately

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient

Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT/BELOW T he report f ails to describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
BASIC work; the group seems in danger of not f inishing the project on time.

DEVELOPING Descriptions of the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work may be
vague; evidence of the group's ability to complete the project on time isn't quite
convincing.

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture
work adequately; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

ADVANCED Specif ic details describe the group's completed tasks, current work, and f uture work
directly and aptly; evidence of group's ability to complete the project on time is
convincing.

CRIT ERION 3 Advanced

Appearance

ABSENT/BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the report.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Advanced

Language
ABSENT/BELOW Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability.
BASIC

DEVELOPING Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors impede readability or otherwise distract
f rom meaning.

PROFICIENT Spelling, syntax, diction, or punctuation errors are f ew and do not distract f rom
meaning.

ADVANCED Outstanding control of language, including ef f ective diction and sentence variety.
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