Reflection Essay #1

This was one of my favorite essays because it was a narrative. I liked the way it turned

out because I got to share my story on what I believe in, which is the benefits of nature. The

rough draft had a good story but had problems with the grammar and sentence structure. The

final draft fixed those problems, but the story stayed the same. This page mainly focuses on This

I Believe and narrative essays. It also includes a journal that involves other This I Believe essays.

I didnt add more to the story because I liked how it was but I had to fix the errors.