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    The document provides feedback on a dance video. It notes several things that went well, including sparkly costumes at 1:44, festive style suiting conventions, and matching beats and claps from 0:00-0:09. Areas for improvement are also identified, such as repetitive editing from 1:06-1:10, removing blemishes, changing the forest scene tone, and improving camera movement quality and lighting.

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    The document provides feedback on a dance video. It notes several things that went well, including sparkly costumes at 1:44, festive style suiting conventions, and matching beats and claps from 0:00-0:09. Areas for improvement are also identified, such as repetitive editing from 1:06-1:10, removing blemishes, changing the forest scene tone, and improving camera movement quality and lighting.

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    Talk About Me Edit 4 Mindmap

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    Zara
    The document provides feedback on a dance video. It notes several things that went well, including sparkly costumes at 1:44, festive style suiting conventions, and matching beats and claps from 0:00-0:09. Areas for improvement are also identified, such as repetitive editing from 1:06-1:10, removing blemishes, changing the forest scene tone, and improving camera movement quality and lighting.

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    What to improve? What went well?

    -00:06 Shot looks average -Sparkly Dress at 1:44 and the Bracelet
    -Lots of fast pace, repetitive editing, change order between 1:06-1:10 suits genre conventions of dance; festive
    style.
    What went well?
    -1:15 setting
    -00:00-00:09 Match to
    beat see the beat
    -Matched most clap
    claps Editing
    Mise En Scene
    -Jumpcuts at 00:26-27
    What to improve?
    Second dance break shots
    2:15-2:31 -Colour-grading + Remove
    blemishes
    Talk About -Change temperature and tone
    in forest scene
    Me Edit 4
    What went well?

    Camera - 1:45 Slow pace shot to


    emphasis the reflection of
    the dress
    What to improve?
    Lighting
    -Movement of camera
    at 1:29.

    What went well?


    -1:50 close-up What to improve?

    -Continuity of shots - Quality at 00:29-00:30


    - 00:33 halts flow
    -Worms eye shot of walking - 2:33 add brightness over shot

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