OH, SISTER…

WRITTEN BY
KRISTELA AGALLIU

JKR PRODUCTIONS
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Establish shot of the house

SCENE 1

FADE IN:

INT. KITCHEN/DINING ROOM AT NIGHT

TILLY (10) writes a letter to the one person she loves

more than anyone else, the person she lost and is
grieving. She cries whilst writing this letter as this
person meant everything to her, loved her and will carry
on loving her.

TILLY
Tracking of Tilly
Over the shoulder To my Love,
writing in her
shot of Tilly You mean so much to me
diary.
opening her diary. Your warm hugs, encouraging words,
An embrace I need.

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TAYLOR (17) walks in the dining room and sees that her
little sister is upset, she goes up to the table and sits
down. She places her hands on top of TILLY’S hands whilst
she is writing. TILLY stops writing a looks up.

CUT TO:

TAYLOR
What’s wrong?
Close up of Tilly. Close up of Tilly.
TILLY
Sighs Nothing.

TAYLOR
Over the shoulder shot of It will be okay.
the sisters speaking.
CUT TO:

TILLY gets up, she takes her diary and starts to get up,
and she hugs her sister.
TILLY
And every time you see me cry
I know your heart bleeds

CUT TO:
Extreme close up of TILLY
Tilly crying. I'll see you in the morning.

CUT TO:

Close-up of Taylor’s face

when Tilly hugs her.
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Long shot
SCENE 2

EXT. BEDROOM MORNING

TILLY and TAYLOR are sleeping; the alarm goes off. TILLY
wakes up and switches off the alarm, she gets out of bed
and goes over to her sister’s bed.
Over the shoulder shot
TILLY
Medium shot Alarm rings day after day,
I wake up and you are there for me

TILLY wakes TAYLOR up. TILLY goes to the wardrobe, gets

her clothes out and walks towards the bathroom. She gets
changed in the bathroom then goes back to her room to
brush her hair and put lip-gloss on her lips. TILLY then
goes back towards the bathroom but TAYLOR comes running
in the bathroom instead. Medium shot
Medium EXT. CORRIDOR AFTERNOON
Point of View
shot
TILLY goes down the stairs towards the corridor; she puts
her trainers on, her jacket as well as her purse and
diary.
Close-up
EXT. OUTSIDE SIDE ROAD AFTERNOON

TILLY has left the house; TAYLOR is outside waiting for

her. TILLY hugs TAYLOR, puts her purse on herself then
holds TAYLOR’S hand. They start walking on the side road;
TILLY looks up at TAYLOR and smiles. They head towards
the park.
Medium shot
Point of View TILLY
I don’t know what the day will bring,
But you are beside me,
Holding me dear,
There is nothing I can’t do or be.
Long shot Extreme close up
EXT. BARKINGSIDE PARK AFTERNOON

TILLY
In every trial that comes my way,
I know I’ll never be alone.
A hand to hold, a friend to confide in,
A caring voice on the phone,
You are my rock, my support, Extreme close up
It’s the way it’s always been.
Point of View And although life seems to spin,
One minute you are there,
The next you’re not.

Long shot
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Long shot Close-up

You still come back to comfort me,
You never desert me,
It’s the way a true sister should be.

EXT.