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Rhetorical Analysis - English 1010
Rhetorical Analysis - English 1010
Rhetorical Analysis - English 1010
Ashley Mathews
Walking Forward
An extremely successful American poet, Maya Angelou has written a wide
spread of well known works, such as “I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings” (1968) and
“On the Pulse of the Morning” (1993). In her short essay “Graduation,” Angelou divulges
an experience of racism from 1840 as a means of describing trail and discrimination.
Most importantly, though, Angelou shares a vital message-- we are human, and things
such as race will never make someone less of an individual.
Throughout “Graduation,” Angelou mostl shares her emotion and daily life
amongst the pandemonium of the event itself. One detail she spends a bit of time
describing is the dress she wore for the ceremony itself. All the girls of her graduation
class wore the same dress, but each outfit’s final look was uniquely modified, as
families in those times were used to making their own clothing. The modifications
helped showcase individuality before Angelou even mentions anything about needing to
stand up for oneself. Her overarching theme of unity and individuality peeps all
Angelou, as a poet, is constantly using tools of figurative language to work in her
advantage. One particularly powerful piece of imagery she uses is the phrase of
“headed for the freedom of open fields” (3). In reference to an individual’s future, this
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phrase allows for visualization of freedom and opportunity. It also allows for
interpretation of career fields, rather than just fantasized meadows with pink sunsets.
This variety of interpretation can be found all throughout the story; Angelou’s point of
view, however, has very sturdy points of speech. Even though she doesn't come right
out and say her opinion until the very end, one can still see glimpses of her emotion all
throughout.
One example of subtle reference to Angelou’s opinion is whenever she
references the white community. Angelou was black, and thus grew up in a black
community. Since she was born in 1928, she also had to deal with all the racial injustice
and constant discrimination before the civil rights movement in the 1960’s. The story of
“Graduation” is placed in the year 1940, so all the cruelty and discrimination she faces
throughout her life is still highly relevant. One experience she mentions is the fact that
even just the design and building of the white versus the colored schools are completely
differnet. Angelou descrbes the colored school as having hardly anyu of the same
decorations as the white school. The white school had “[lawns, hedges, and ivy],”
whereas the colored school was set upon a dirt hill, and had only “rusty hoops on
swaying poles” for their recreational equipment. Even something as simple as an
inadequacy in playground equipment portrays the implication that the colored schools
were inferior. By showing of the proclaimed inferiority of these schools, the white
community was sealing-the-deal, so to speak. After all, who would want to send the
child or money to a school that was inadequate? Unfortunately, the black community
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was not see as in need of the same quality of school, and thus, leaving them in a
crumbling old building just further pushed the ideas of black insignificance.
During the graduation portion of “Graduation,” Angelou shares how Edward
Donleavy, a white man, got up to the stand to give a speech on the success of the
school. However, rather than finding herself filled with pride and joy, Angelou told
herself that she would have rather died-- or even never been born-- to get away from
the injustice and awful attitude of discrimination that this man was portraying. She states
that “it was brutal to be young and already trained to sit quietly and listen to charges
brought against [her] color with no chance of defense.” These emotions and intensities
Angelou, in that moment of terror and anguish, felt utterly and completely
inadequate. Unsuccessful. Unloved. Unworthy of of any means of care. One of her
fellow audience members-- most likely out of habit than anything else-- gave an Amen
to Donleavy's speech. Angelou was livid; why would they be supporting someone who
looked down upon them as inferior beings? Blacks weren’t even allowed to drink from
the same water fountain, much less learn their education from the same building. This
segregation was awful and painful, but for Angelou it was constant. Looking at this
moment, Angelou describes her inner anger: “As a species, we were an abomination.
All of us.” All individuals start from the same fresh start, and yet tradition and history do
their best to intertwine into our lives before we’re even born. Angelou stands up,
determined to halt at least a portion of that philosophy.
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Works Cited
Angelou, Mya. “Graduation.” 50 Essays; A Portable Anthology. 3rd Edition. Ed. Samuel