LO2 FEEDBACK

Laura Hall LO1 Feedback. 14/01/18

Current Grade for LO1: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Distinction
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Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

You are missing all of the pre production except some charts (primary research). You have
until the deadline stated below to get this work on your blog. This has meant that I have not
been able to provide you with interim feedback, you are as a result in danger of not
achieving the grade you are capable of. You need to manage your time better Laura. I am
going to book you in with a student mentor to assist you with this work.

The resubmission deadline is: 31st January 2018