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Jacob Storer LO3 Feedback. 3/1/2018

Current Grade for LO3: Fail

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Grade, even
if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Jacob, there is a vast amount of work missing here. As a result this learning outcome cannot
pass. Your Risk assessment is on the blog, and is fair - but it does require more detail.
Please write in short paragraphs. Try to identify more risks that could pose a problem to your
work.

You will need to come in your own time to get caught up by the deadline specified below. I
expect to see you in Enrichment for support. This is not the standard i’d expect from any
student, there is clearly a problem with time management and organisation here. If you
require help please see me. You are missing the following work:
Storyboard, Shooting Script, Contingency Plan, Budget, Recce.

The final deadline is: 19th January 2018