The document provides examples of similes and ways to improve them by making the comparisons even more extreme. It suggests updating a simile about a noisy kid from comparing them to an elephant to a herd of elephants. Another simile is improved by comparing something old to the pharaoh's grandmother rather than just the pharaoh. The document encourages improving other similes about smell, danger, and cold in a similar manner by thinking of something even more extreme for comparison.
The document provides examples of similes and ways to improve them by making the comparisons even more extreme. It suggests updating a simile about a noisy kid from comparing them to an elephant to a herd of elephants. Another simile is improved by comparing something old to the pharaoh's grandmother rather than just the pharaoh. The document encourages improving other similes about smell, danger, and cold in a similar manner by thinking of something even more extreme for comparison.
The document provides examples of similes and ways to improve them by making the comparisons even more extreme. It suggests updating a simile about a noisy kid from comparing them to an elephant to a herd of elephants. Another simile is improved by comparing something old to the pharaoh's grandmother rather than just the pharaoh. The document encourages improving other similes about smell, danger, and cold in a similar manner by thinking of something even more extreme for comparison.
thinking of something even noisier than an elephant. Well, what is noisier than an elephant? A whole herd of elephants. And so a better simile might be:
He is as noisy as a herd of elephants.
If you want to say something is old you could say: It's as old as the pharaoh. Some pharaohs are 5000 years old after all. But, how can we improve that? By thinking of someone even older than the pharaoh like the pharaoh's grandmother. So we can improve this simile like this: