What to improve? What went well?

What went well?
- The dissolve and cross-dissolve
flashes match with the song
(Andrew Goodwin ‘can see the
beat’)
- Put more flashes at 1:42 to create
an editing style
- Repeatability (Goodwin)
- Could have added a flash/transition - 0:09 purple theme consistent throughout
at 1:37 - Similar Locations have similar colour grading such as umbrella shots are
all grey emphasis on sad mood(Goodwin)
Editing
Mise En Scene
What to improve?

- Costume at 0:14 black thread on coat.

Talk About
Me Final

What went well?

What went well? Lighting - 0:59 brightness reduced instead builds
- Camera and narrative in up anticipation to the exciting and
Camera bright dance scenes
sync in some sections
(0:14-0:15) - Bright sunlight- Technical aspects
- Lyrics and Camera match (Goodwin) and visually aesthetic focus
‘Mask of Lies’ on star image (Carlsson) at 1:25

What to improve?
What to improve?
- Camera Movement ‘panning’ at 1:29 looks abrupt
- Add more blue light at 2:00 to emphasis sadness of break-up