LO3 & LO4 FEEDBACK

LO3 & LO4 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO3: Distinction

Current Grade for LO4: Merit

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome 3 is a Distinction
Grade, and learning outcome 4 is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any
minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Corey, you have completed LO3 and LO4 to a great standard however your pitch could be
improved slightly with the feedback I have provided below.

LO3: Your proposal, running order and edit log are detailed and cover all aspects from the
editing process your broadcast underwent whilst in its development stages to how your
broadcast will appeal to its target audience. With regards to your radio broadcast itself,
you have paid particular attention the fundamental aspects included within sport radio
shows. Your jingle and use of soundtracking is a particular highlight and the tone of this
compliments the dynamics of the presenting voices. Interviews and vox pops are also well
used and are intelligently introduced by the sound of a short jingle which complements
the theme of your radio show.

LO4: Your pitch included relevant information and you also elaborated on the audio
materials you used to a good standard. However your pitch could have benefitted from
being more fluid and by speaking about your broadcast with enthusiasm and confidence.

The resubmission deadline is: 26th February 2018.