This document provides an evaluation of a magazine edit for a band called Zara P. It identifies aspects that went well and could be improved. For what went well, it notes the eye-catching bold title font but suggests centering it better. It praises the pink photo filter but notes the picture could fill more space. For improvements, it recommends changing the red eye-catching font to match others, centering the text more, and repositioning the random-looking picture and social media references for a less crowded and more balanced layout.
This document provides an evaluation of a magazine edit for a band called Zara P. It identifies aspects that went well and could be improved. For what went well, it notes the eye-catching bold title font but suggests centering it better. It praises the pink photo filter but notes the picture could fill more space. For improvements, it recommends changing the red eye-catching font to match others, centering the text more, and repositioning the random-looking picture and social media references for a less crowded and more balanced layout.
This document provides an evaluation of a magazine edit for a band called Zara P. It identifies aspects that went well and could be improved. For what went well, it notes the eye-catching bold title font but suggests centering it better. It praises the pink photo filter but notes the picture could fill more space. For improvements, it recommends changing the red eye-catching font to match others, centering the text more, and repositioning the random-looking picture and social media references for a less crowded and more balanced layout.
What went well What to improve Links to real media text Font/colour Font/colour Font/ colour - Title is bold and big which is - Red font eye catching but - Link to ‘Kings of Leon’ eye catching but its not in the does not match other fonts poster as ‘out now’ was centre of the page as this used. influenced by them and would cover the image - Font is more on the left putting icons for where rather than centre whilst album can be streamed Graphics picture is on the right looks Graphics - Photo has a pink filter over it unbalanced - Photo is not filling the reduces saturation Graphics whole space similarly to - Picture on the right-hand ‘Ed Sheeran’ poster Social Media side looks Social Media - Same as Digipak misplaced/random - Digipak reference Social Media Layout - Move somewhere else Layout - Looks like a magazine advert - Website and tour dates Layout mentioned positioned in - Random placement similar places to ‘Martin - Looks crowded Garrix’ poster