Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Bài S A - Advanced 01
Bài S A - Advanced 01
Bài S A - Advanced 01
side of this argument will be discussed in my essay below. Commented [Office3]: Both sides
uncomplicated but also enables them not to waste time for doing Commented [Office7]: They need to absorb
Commented [Office8]: Helps
something with bad aims. For examples, some students use their free Commented [Office9]: Sai
time for playing video games or going to the places where are not
suitable for their age. (Đoạn này em ko có linking words để chuyển
các ý nha em. VD: first, second, …)
On the other hand, some people believe that students have not to do
the school assignments by their lecturers because they always think
that children feel tired and stressful. If children spend their time for Commented [Office10]: Câu topic sentence của em quá dài
=> It is also undeniable that a huge pile of homework is not
always appropriate method applied in education.
doing homework, they do not have time to play outside or take part in
their favorite activity. Sometime children feel very tired if they have Commented [Office11]: Sometimes
met a deadline because of their school assignments. As a result, Commented [Office12]: Cái này là câu đkien loại mấy vậy
em ?
more experience in life and become an active person. Commented [Office14]: RUN ON sentence
better score in their tests, they have to practice more and more before Commented [Office21]: Score ko đi với better => higher
doing their tests. Secondly, some higher education nation as American, Commented [Office22]: Thừa
after class, children need time to relax and play after school stress. Commented [Office24]: Bỏ
On the other hand, however,I believe that it is more beneficial for Commented [Office25]: Trước HOWEVER là ; nha em.
homework is indispensable in the education systems in each other Commented [Office29]: Each thôi em
On the one hand, the setting of homework also has an important role
to play in the education system. The biggest advantage of homework Commented [Office31]: Plays an important role in …
also learned the lessons once again at home and this will definitely
improve their grades. Furthermore, home assignments are of great Commented [Office34]: Câu này thầy ko hiểu ý em
they are already exhausted and full of stress by the time. If they take
their time to do home assignments, they do not have time to relax
their mind or join in their favorite activities such as hanging out,
playing video games, surfing the Internet or even spending time with
their family. Moreover, when students are forced to do homework,
they are less likely to focus on what they do. They are able to cheat by
copying answers from their notebook or Internet. This action will not
give the benefit for them in any way. ( em xem lại cách diễn đạt nhé,
quá DÀI DÒNG và LÊ THÊ)
To summarize, giving a large number of homework definitely be
discouraged. However, abolishing homework is not the solution. I
personally believe that giving a reasonable amount of homework is
certainly beneficial to their children.
Nguyễn Gia Huy
Some people think that teachers should not give homework for
their students, while others believe that homework will benefit
students with their education. Both sides of this argument will
be discussed in my essay below.
On the one hand, homework have many benefits. Firstly, it helps Commented [Office37]: Has nha em , HW không đếm được
train their academic skills. They have to do homework by drawbacks through completing those extra activities. This
helps student carve and put theory in practice without any
applying the knowledge that they have learn in school, they hesitance.
Commented [Office39]: Have learned
must find the way to solve the tasks by themselves, they have
to arrange their time to complete exercises before they go to
school, as a result, when they do seminar test or final test, they
can have appallingly good grade. Commented [Office40]: Em viết lại đoạn này vì nó quá dài
On the other hand, it is think that homework is an unnecessary Commented [Office41]: Sao hai độg từ bên cạnh nhau vậy
em ?
relax, improve their health and ready for the next school day. Commented [Office43]: Run-on sentence
experience in life, they will be useful things for them when they
have to stand on their own feet.
methods in education.
On the one hand, many people denied doing exercise at home
because of some reasons. Firstly, curriculum at school is enough, Commented [Office48]: Is … enough ?
homework make children more tired instead of relax after school. Commented [Office49]: HW makes
Commented [Office50]: Relaxing
Obviously, sitting extra class is a trend in Viet Nam, student usually Commented [Office51]: Joining extra classes is…
exhausted after school and these classes, so homework seems as Commented [Office52]: Students are usually exhausted
On the other hand, however, homework still play an integral role in Commented [Office54]: ; however,
Commented [Office55]: still plays an integral part
educating child. Children spend time on homework instead of
immersing in video game. As a result, it reduce youth crime. Besides, Commented [Office56]: cái này về ý của con diễn chưa khéo
ðSpending most of time on HW instead of video game is
also seen as helpful method to prevent them from eye
children can learn how to manage their time as doing exercise. They diseases or skipping meal that may affect their health
seriously.
must know how to balance between doing exercise and
entertainment. Applying what they learn at school in real life seem as
a good method also. It is clear that homework is irreplaceable but the
among of exercise should be considered.
In short, from my point of view, doing exercise at home is a good
method in education. But homework should be not too much to avoid
stress for child.
HỒNG PHÚC
While some people still think that homeworks for children are not Commented [Office57]: HW không đếm được nha em
essential in schools, others see homework as a key factor in the Commented [Office58]: Consider
education of children. Both sides of this argument will be discussed Commented [Office59]: Bỏ of children nha em
in my essay below.
On the one hand, there is no question that it is not appropriate to Commented [Office60]: Em đã đặt giả định ở đầu rồi=>
there is no question that HW should not be assigned to…
spend a much of time to do homework, they will be pressured to Commented [Office62]: Spend + Ving
score due to the hopes of their parents, which is really dangerous in Commented [Office63]: With the hope of
that when a child has plenty of time to thinking, experience life and
is not pressured for some deadlines to focus on what they are
interested in, they will be able to work their full potential that can
help them find their passion sooner. Commented [Office65]: It is also understandable that
student could use up their potential to reach the highest
target providing that they were not put in pressure or
imposed any limitations in their study.
On the one hand, homework has brought many benefits and has
become an integral part of our education of children. Just studying Commented [Office66]: There are many cases that HW is so
beneficial with paramount importance role in education.
homeworks will help kids get used to the pressures of their future
lives, such as working environment as they grow up without being
distracted. Beside that doing homework will help children increase Commented [Office68]: Moreover, doing HW enables
student get acquainted with adapting the new environment
and enhancing their social skills effectively.
their logical ability and give them the ability to think better.
In conclusion, i would argue that teacher should not encourage to
give homeworks to children at school, but it should not deny the
indispensable role of homework.
Full name: Phan Thi Nga
Date: Feb. 4th, 2018
WRITING ASSIGNMENT
There are many people think that homework has a great impact on
student’s education development, while other people argue that
homework is not a compulsory task that should be given. I will
discuss both views in the following essay.
In one hand, completing homework brings many benefits to Commented [Office69]: On the one hand
in life and educational environment as well. To be detailed, Commented [Office73]: Hai cái này ko liên quan nhau
In another hand, the practice at home sometimes influences the Commented [Office75]: On the other hand
Commented [Office76]: Practicing at home
student’s developmental process negatively. One clear example is
the lack of school and family activities. Basically, educating
children is not only about knowledge but also about physical
activities which are created from collective activities or daily living
activities. Furthermore, taking a lot of time for study at home Commented [Office77]: Thầy chưa hiểu ý bạn
Commented [Office78]: Studying
sometimes make students being overload if they have to complete Commented [Office79]: Makes
As the result, every educational method has its own advantages and Commented [Office82]: In conclusion,
disadvantages whether or not school should give homework. But in Commented [Office83]: Dài dòng
Commented [Office84]: Hạn chế dung BUT vì nhiều nguyên
my view, homework should be an elective task that students can nhân
and pass their tests easily. Besides that, homework affects Commented [Office87]: Pass này động tư của CHU NGU nào
?
significantly self-studied skills in students. They know how to Commented [Office88]: Câu này vô nghĩa rôì
assign their tasks and how to manage their time by themselves to Commented [Office89]: Organize nha em
Commented [Office90]: Nên gom cụm lại, không được viết
avoid missing deadline. By this way, they enable to apply for a new lung tung ra
job easily and success in future. Commented [Office91]: Em xem lại ý này nhé
have studied all day at school, they need a break or need to take
part in outside activities to relax. Furthermore, homework also Commented [Office93]: Lặp từ
lot for children in their study process. Firstly, if children finish Commented [Office97]: Support children effectively in…
understand more about the lecture of teachers. Secondly, homework Commented [Office99]: Having a good preparation before
entering into class enables students to absorb new lectures
easily.
also enhances their academic achievement in school. Teachers give
homework to the students is a way to encourage them to work hard
when exams draw closer, so that children could keep all the lessons in
mind. Commented [Office100]: Secondly, doing homework is also
useful in enhancing academic performance especially as the
exam is coming. It is no exaggeration to state that the more
careful students prepare for their homework, the better
On the other hand, homework is seemed to be an unwanted performance they may get, which makes HW recognize its
vital role in improving student’s learning capacity.
burden. Children always spend hours in school with all the strain so Commented [Office101]: Unpredicted
homework is seen as their best enemy. Children work with motivation Commented [Office102]: Run on sentence
thus all the result would become really bad if they are forced. Beside
that homework even occupies so much time of the children. Many Commented [Office103]: Besides that
children have to sit still for hours just to finish their homework
meanwhile all the outdoor activities and family meeting are no longer
appear in their free time.
In conclusion, homework absolutely make children memorize all the Commented [Office104]: Makes
lessons and improve their grades in class. But everything has its pros
and cons, homework does too, too much homework is not always
good; children also need physical activities that helps brain work
effectively to boost grades indirectly.
Name: NGUYEN VU ANHTRUNG TOPIC 2 WRITTING
Some people believe that children should not be given homework
by their teacher whereas others ague that homework plays an
important role in the education of children. Discuss both view and
give opinion.
they much knowledge and skills to serve for their life . While there Commented [Office107]: Thứ nhất much chỉ đi với danh từ
k odd => skills ?
for children , exercises makes they overloaded and tired. Particularly , Commented [Office112]: Exercises make
Commented [Office113]: Them
they do not have spare time for other development activities such as
relaxing , playing sports , participating extracurricular activities.
Secondly , homework also affects their health because they have to
spend constantly hours to do it . As a result , student will feel Commented [Office114]: Doing
depressed , they will find many reasons to avoid trying to do Commented [Office115]: Avoid doing
students, others believe that it is a vital part for educational Commented [MOU121]: Lặp cấu trúc
On the one hand, the idea that school children should not be
given homework by their teacher does have a number of benefit. Commented [MOU128]: Run on
Firstly, they can spend time on doing another thing. Students can
examine their favorite subject in free time instead of doing homework
which has been taught by their teachers in class. Secondly, having a
number of thing between exercise in homework and it in examination.
Sometimes, teachers give hard exercise to their students, so it makes
school children passive in thinking when they do easy exercise in the
examination.
There are many debates between the family and the school about the
homework assignment. While people suppose that homework is
necessary for their child, some others against. In my opinion, I quite
agree with the first consider.
One the one hand, the parents do not agree about their child’s task at
home around a variety of reasons. Firstly, they believe that study in
extra class is only exit in the nation with obsolete education. In fact, in
developed countries where have the advanced education in the world
such as Finland, Switzerland, ... students almost no homework.
Morever, learning is essential but just only a part of the formation and
development of the child. The proof is that, outside the class, they need
to be activitive, entertained, or even assisted for their family.
On the other hand, schoolwork can bring a lot of benefits behind what
is called a mission. First, by reinforce the knowledge learned in the
classroom through doing homework assignment, It will help children
remember longer lesson, stimulate the ability to think creatively as well
as able to apply as instructed by teacher. Futhermore, from the
assignments, the school also wants to train children to manage their
time properly by arranging their own schedule. A smart kid will know
how to adjust his time so more and more time spent playing. In this
particular section I strongly agree with this.
In conclusion, if the amount of homework is too much, it will become a
burden not just for any child. However, if the distribution is reasonable,
I think it will significant improvement both the learning and the
arrangement skill for the future of the child.
Topic 2: Some people believe that school children
should not be given homework by their teachers whereas
others argue that homework plays a important role in the
education of children. Discuss both of these views and
give your own opinion.