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Hortatory:

Thesis:

Do you know what is the meaning of AIDS? What is relation beetween HIV and immune? Well, AIDS
is a disease that caused by the proliferation of the Human Immunodeficiency Virus (HIV) in the
human body, where it attacks white blood cells (CD4 cells), so that it damages the immune system.
And it makes a decreasing endurance, so that the patient is easy to be infected the various diseases
including minor illness though.

Argument 1:

Based on sources trustworthly is WHO, since the beginning of the epidemic, more than 70 million
people have been infected with the HIV virus and about 35 million people have died of HIV. Globally,
36.7 million [30.8–42.9 million] people were living with HIV at the end of 2016. An estimated 0.8%
[0.7-0.9%] of adults aged 15–49 years worldwide are living with HIV, although the burden of the
epidemic continues to vary considerably between countries and regions. Sub-Saharan Africa remains
most severely affected, with nearly 1 in every 25 adults (4.2%) living with HIV and accounting for
nearly two-thirds of the people living with HIV worldwide.This is because that country mostly have
unhealthy sexual relationships plus lack of knowledge about this HIV / AIDS disease.

Argument 2:

When the human body is exposed to the HIV virus, it does not directly cause or suffer from AIDS, but
it takes a long time even years for the HIV virus to cause AIDS or HIV positive deadly. The sign and
symptoms that appear in people with AIDS are as bellow: respiratory tract (TBC), Digestive tract
(vomiting, loss of appetite, choronic diarhea), body weight (malnutrition), the sustainer system (lack
of memory, headaches, difficulty concentration), system integument (herpes zoster), urinary and
reproductive tract (syphilis, pelvic inflammatory disease, and abnormal menstruation period).

Recommendation:

- No multiple sexual partners


- Prevention of blood contact, eg prevention of repeated needle syringes
- With the formula A-B-C:

ABSTINENSIA means not to have sex before marriage


BE FAITHFUL means that if married just have sex with her partner only.
CONDOM means prevention by using condoms

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