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The Canberra Editor May 2008
The Canberra Editor May 2008
The Canberra Editor May 2008
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he inaugural meeting of accountant with experience in not-
the IPEd Council, held in for-profit organisations, and seek
Committee members 2007–08 Canberra in mid-April, appropriate suppliers of banking
President appointed Virginia Wilton of the and insurance by the end of May.
Ted Briggs Canberra society as chair and Janice
6161 4924; 0407 018 433 The Council commended
Bird of Tasmania as honorary the Accreditation Board on its
tedbriggs@grapevine.com.au
treasurer until the annual general remarkable progress in developing
Vice-President meeting later in 2008. Following
Ann Parkinson the accreditation scheme, particularly
6282 1993
consideration of a duty statement in managing the intense activity since
Ann.Parkinson@atrax.net.au for the paid part-time position of the end of 2007. Councillors, having
secretary, Ed Highley, who has studied the board’s budget, were
Immediate past President
Virginia Wilton
done a wonderful job as unpaid concerned at the likely significant
6273 3048 (w) secretary since 2005, was appointed shortfall between revenue and costs
virginia@whh.com.au temporarily; the position will be for the first exam. They have begun
Secretary advertised before the annual general work on a rigorous, revised budget
Alan Roberts meeting. and a broader business model for
6251 2172 Each councillor has taken accreditation so that the examination
alan.roberts@velocitynet.com.au responsibility for a particular can be offered at an acceptable fee
Treasurer area: budget, finance and risk without jeopardising IPEd’s overall
Margaret Millard management, Virginia Wilton, Ed objectives and operations. As a
6288 6754 (h); 0402 029 552 Highley and Janice Bird; website, result, the Council has reluctantly
margaret.millard@ozemail.com.au communication and PR, Rosemary decided to postpone the first exam
Web minder, membership files Luke; professional development until later in 2008. It maintains the
Peter Judge and standards, Anne Surma and commitment to provide members
6296 6211 (w/h/fax)
Robin Bennett, who is also on with four months’ notice of the date
peter.judge@bigpond.com
the Accreditation Board; policy of the exam.
Membership Secretary development, Rosemary Noble;
Gil Garcon The Accreditation Board and the
dispute resolution and governance, Assessors Forum have continued
6216 6572 or 04 1470 1470
gil.garcon@ato.gov.au Michael Lewis, who is also Council to hold teleconferences to discuss
representative on the Accreditation preparations for the exam. The
Public Officer
Helen Topor
Board. Councillors will prepare board has appointed a team of highly
6207 3414 (w) issues papers on their respective experienced editors to develop the
helen.topor@afp.com.au areas for discussion at their next exam paper, with Meryl Potter as
Training coordinator meeting in Adelaide at the end of lead writer and Janet Salisbury,
Kerie Newell May. Shelley Kenigsberg and Stephanie
6121 3470; 0412 042 974 Conscious of their responsibilities Holt as reviewers. Alan Ernst as
kerie.newell@dewr.gov.au under the Corporations Law, the exam coordinator will oversee
General meeting coordinator councillors devoted a lot of time the conduct of the exam. The first
Janet Salisbury to IPEd’s finances. They have set priority is to revise the sample exam
6282 2280; 0416 167 280 the annual levy for 2008–09 at $20 and post it on the website so that
janet@biotext.com.au per society member, and agreed candidates will know exactly what
Catering coordinators on policy and procedures for the to expect.
Dallas Stow and Damaris Wilson costs of meetings. The Council
6247 3111 (h)
will obtain advice on budgeting, Janet Mackenzie
wilsondidi@aol.com
taxation (particularly GST) and Liaison Officer
IPEd delegate other financial matters from an
Virginia Wilton
6273 3048 (w)
virginia@whh.com.au
IPEd Accreditation Board
New members
Larissa Joseph Welcome to new members who have joined us recently:
6161 5216
larissa.joseph@gmail.com Kevin Maguire (associate); Wendy Elliott, Carmen Kovac, Jack Bowers
Chris Pirie and Nicholas Craven (full); Shirley Byrne, Barbara Coe and Sharon
6282 3730 Eacott (upgrading from associate).
cpirie@netspeed.com.au
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hat a great meeting we had in April. Not looking forward to this since
only was it entertaining but it also raised I’m confident it will really
some important issues that many Australian help us improve our ability to
editors will face. For those who missed out, Gil Garcon meet members’ needs.
has written a fairly comprehensive report on Dr Heiss’s In setting up this exercise,
talk and I encourage you to check out the resources she as well in various other
pointed us to. activities we’ve conducted
On a slightly sad note, I’m sorry to announce recently, a word has
that Peter Judge has resigned from the position of emerged describing one of
newsletter editor. I’d like to thank Peter for his untiring the characteristics of our
work over the last few years in producing such a members. That word is ‘self-effacing’. We seem to be
professional newsletter. The newsletter and the web a really shy bunch, reluctant to put ourselves forward.
site are extremely important as they are the public face Maybe this is because of the nature of the work we do,
of our society. I’d particularly like to thank Peter for the fact that many of us work in relative isolation, or the
his patience in coping with my considerable flexibility personality type of people who are attracted to editing.
in meeting deadlines! Fortunately Peter is not handing In any case, no-one should feel shy about putting
over the other critical roles he performs—looking themselves forward to help in any way no matter how
after our website and maintaining the membership small—in fact this is the only way the society can
database. function. So I urge you all to get involved and volunteer
However, this represents a terrific opportunity for to pitch in to help out wherever you possibly can, even
one or more of our members to get more involved in the if it’s in a very small way. Every bit counts!
society as our new newsletter editor (see advertisement We have another interesting meeting lined up on the
on the back page). 28th. I look forward to seeing you all there.
Joe Massingham will be conducting focus groups
with some of our members over the next week, and he Ted Briggs
expects to have his report to us shortly thereafter. I’m
A
n issue yet to be resolved is the accreditation
of the publicity campaign for which we all, Canberra
of existing editors who have academic
Society of Editors members, will foot the bill, whether
editing qualifications from official tertiary accredited or not.
institutions. Where do these editors stand? Should
they be automatically accredited? Should they Accreditation seemed a good idea fifteen years ago.
provide evidence of work like the others? Do tertiary The increasing number of editors who avail themselves
qualifications mean nothing without the IPEd seal of of the new tertiary courses now offered make it less
approval? Where does it stop? compelling. I suggest that within another 15 to 20
years, most editors will have a formal editing degree.
Let’s also keep in mind that accreditation will not What then would be the use of accreditation? The cynic
always be needed nor useful, and might help only in me prompts: ‘To show that you’re a nice member of
a few. Those of us who apply for editing positions the club? To provide closed-shop workplaces?’
in federal and state public services, and apparently
The exploratory effort put in by our fellow editors
increasingly in business, are assessed on the now
towards accreditation has not been in vain. It had to
widespread integrated leadership system. Concrete
be done. They deserve our respect. Should we proceed
evidence is what is required there, and accreditation
with the exam, there still are key issues to be addressed
from IPEd, as nice as it might be, will contribute little
before it takes off. In addressing the practicalities of
if anything to the selection process. As things stand,
an exam, let not blind excitement lead us to ignore the
it would appear that a large number of professional fundamentals.
editors in those entities are not members of the
societies which make up IPEd, and IPEd accreditation Gil Garcon
will mean nothing to them and these employers, with
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hat if I had written make it plural.
Grammars in style Exceptions to this rule are rare, but here are three:
…? Would that mean Dot your i’s and cross your t’s, Mind your p’s and q’s,
the same thing as Grammar’s in and There are four s’s in Mississippi. The apostrophe
style? is used in these sentences because they would be
There are some who would confusing to read without them.
like to get rid of the apostrophe What about pronouns? Personal pronouns have
altogether, but our language and a case system, a relic of Old English and Latin. In
the meaning we attach to what English we do have all the cases that were in Latin:
we say and write would suffer. nominative, vocative, accusative, genitive, dative,
Grammars in style tells us that ablative. We just don’t have different endings on
‘style’ has a variety of ‘grammars’ and perhaps that words to indicate those cases. In English we depend
each one imparts some different meaning to the style in on word order to understand the case of nouns: Paul
which we are writing. loves Mary is not the same as Mary loves Paul. In
On the other hand Grammar’s in style is intended Latin we could write Paulus amat Mariam, Mariam
to mean that grammar is stylish, fashionable, the ‘in’ amat Paulus, or Mariam Paulus amat, and they would
concept in writing. I hope that’s the meaning you got all mean exactly the same: Paul loves Mary, because
from what I intended. It is short for Grammar is in the endings on the nouns tells us that Paul is the subject
style—it is a contraction. I believe it too—grammar (nominative case) and Mariam is the object (accusative
is talked about more now than for many years because case), no matter what order the words appear in. The
a lot of people in Australia, particularly those under genitive (possessive) case is seen in English in personal
about 45 years old, are realising that they missed out pronouns only:
on learning English grammar at school. If they learned my, mine
another language at school, they probably learned the your, yours
grammar of that language. If they were very lucky, they his/her, his/hers, its
realised then that their own language must also have our, ours
a grammar. And if they were extremely lucky indeed, your, yours
they managed to learn some English grammar, either by their, theirs
consulting their parents or by studying it on their own.
Those schoolchildren are now in middle management Not an apostrophe in sight! Remember its means
and even more senior administrative positions, having ‘belonging to it’ whereas it’s is a contraction and
to write reports and all manner of documents at work, means ‘it is’ or ‘it has’. An example: It’s ours! I know it
and perhaps wanting to learn another language where because of its colours; there’s theirs.
the teacher expects a working knowledge of aspects How about a sentence like this: This is Sydney Boys
of English grammar. They are seeking training in High School; it is this boy’s school? Why no apostrophe
basic English grammar; they are talking about it; they after Boys but an apostrophe in boy’s? Once upon a
have made the word ‘grammar’ fashionable—yes, time, there used to be an apostrophe after Boys’. It was
Grammar’s in style. thought that there was ownership involved—that the
Last month I wrote about Apostrophes. So what’s boys owned the school. As time has gone on, people
Apostrophe’s? It could be a contraction too, as in The have decided that Boys is really just an adjective
apostrophe’s a little squiggle. But more commonly it is modifying High School, so they have now removed the
a mistake, as in the list of specials at the greengrocery: apostrophe. However, the apostrophe remains in boy’s
because this time there is ownership intended—the
onion’s
school of this boy.
potatoe’s
Brussel’s sprout’s The apostrophe is often over-used in writing. In
formal writing, such as business letters (including
Little wonder that this kind of usage is known as the emails), reports, business manuals and so on, it is best
grocer’s apostrophe! The writer is under the impression to avoid contractions such as can’t, don’t, I’ve etc.
that the apostrophe has to be used to indicate plural. They may have a place in more informal writing, such
This is not true, except in a very few instances. If there as in the speech of fictional characters in a novel, for
is more than one TAFE college in a town, we write example I didn’t get to the shops, so I haven’t bought
There are three TAFEs in this town, not ‘TAFE’s’. any bread. It is never a good idea to have more than
The example Brussel’s sprout’s above is wrong on two one apostrophe in a word—multiple contractions such
counts—first, the apostrophes are not needed because as wouldn’t’ve are frowned upon.
there is no possession intended and, if there were, it
Apostrophes sometimes drop right out of words.
would have to be Brussels’ or Brussels’s because the
Would you ’phone for a ’cab to get you to the ’plane in
name of the city is Brussels, not Brussel; and second,
it is not necessary to put an apostrophe in sprouts to
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he next IPEd conference will be in Adelaide in became more complicated with
October 2009. It’s so far away over the horizon time, nowhere more so than in
that you probably didn’t think to follow up Japan, where it was used by the
the reference in our April newsletter to the website merchant marine and armed
at <www.iped-editors.org/content/conferences>, so services. Their writing system
you’ve missed the charming conference logo with the involves a syllabary of about
little people wagging their flags. twice the number of characters
In terms of the theme, ‘Getting the message across’, in the Latin alphabet, so that
most characters took two or
three wags to complete.
While we are thinking about
early communication it seems
logical to look at its next development, the electric
the logo may not be an unmitigated success! Unless telegraph. The inventor here was Samuel Morse, he of
you were a keen Girl Guide or Boy Scout and got the code. A more surprising pioneer in this field would
your Communicator Badge and remember which flags be hard to imagine. A clergyman’s son born in 1791,
mean what, the little flag waggers won’t be doing their he completed his education in Yale where he attended
stuff for you. The little Guides in the chart spell out some lectures on the new ‘electricity’. He then went
the semaphore alphabet so that you can decode the to work for a publisher, but his real interest lay in art
message. and his parents supported him to
With a bit of help, there’s no go to England to study. On his
problem. But where on earth did return to America he became a
all this come from? portrait painter, increasingly in
demand and eventually painting
The semaphore’s use on land
‘some of the finest portraits ever
goes back to 1791. The inventor
done by an American artist’.
was a Frenchman, Claude
Chappe, so you might expect At the age of 40 Morse again
that the word has French origins went to Europe for further art
and indeed ‘sémaphore’ enters studies, and when returning by
the French language in 1812, ship in 1832 heard about the
defined as ‘a kind of telegraph’. newly discovered electromagnet
But Chappe’s system went far and conceived the idea of the
beyond little flags. He used a set telegraph. He was then earning
of giant wooden arms worked his living by teaching art at New
by levers at the top of a tower. York University, but gave this up
Towers were built on hilltops in 1837 to work full-time on his
within sight of each other, up invention and, of course, on his
to 10 kilometres or so apart; the code of dots and dashes. It took a
message was read by telescope and repeated to the few years to convince Congress
next tower. An experienced operator could send at that this was an important development deserving
the rate of three symbols a minute, not very fast, but support, but in 1844 a telegraph line was completed
when the alternative was a messenger on horseback it between Washington and Baltimore and Morse sent the
seemed a great leap forward. Initially they were set up first message, ‘What God hath wrought!’
along the coast to give ships at sea information about The invention brought Morse fame and fortune and
tides or the weather. But they very soon spread far and changed the world. The code that he first worked out for
wide—for example, the news of Napoleon’s defeat the English language was simplified and expanded by a
of the Prussians at Jena in 1806 reached Paris in 24 European consortium in 1851 to suit other languages,
hours, then tremendously fast for a distance of about a particularly those requiring letters with diacritic marks,
thousand kilometres. and to add punctuation and other symbols—over 50
Just what does semaphore mean? The sema- part is characters, compared with the original 26 letters and
from the Greek word for a sign or signal, and the -phore ten numbers. A variety of ‘Morse’ codes has also
from the Greek for ‘carrying’. The word first turns up been worked out for other alphabets, such as Greek,
in print in English in 1816, with the news that ‘the Cyrillic, Hebrew, Japanese and Chinese. But after his
improved semaphore has been erected on top of the death in 1872 the telegraph was superseded first by the
Admiralty’. The system stayed in vogue until well into telephone, then by radio and television. As the memory
the 20th century, mainly used at that time by the world’s of his inventions fades into history, his reputation as a
navies (in point of fact, the navy was already using
signal flags or lights by the 16th century). It inevitably (Continued on page 7)
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portrait painter continues to grow, a paradox that Morse was originally short for radio-telegraphy or radio-
would not have appreciated. telephony, from the Latin radius meaning a ‘ray’. And
All those inventions starting with tele- owe this now our Adelaide friends have brought semaphore
prefix to a Greek word meaning ‘far off’, so that onto their website, the oldest with the newest—the
telegraph is writing at a distance, telephone hearing at wheel has turned full circle!
a distance and so on. Television comes from a mixed Peter Judge
marriage—the tele- has Greek parents and vision
Latin. This verbal miscegenation is seen as inelegant Sources: The Oxford English Dictionary Second Edition on
by linguistic purists, but to keep it all Greek television CD-ROM v.3.0. Encyclopaedia Britannica 2007 Ultimate
would have to be telescope, a name already taken by Reference Suite. Le trésor de la langue française at http://
Galileo for another instrument in the early 1600s—we atilf.atilf.fr/tlf.htm. The 27 flag-wagging Girl Guides from
acquired it from his Italian telescopio. And radio? That <www.winterbourne.freeuk.com/semaphore.gif>.
I
have read with great interest Gil Garcon’s thoughts as instructional designers, technical writers or
on accreditation in previous issues of The Canberra publications officers. The assessors would therefore
Editor. As the chair of the (now-dissolved) have to make judgements on portfolios that differ
Accreditation Working Group, I would like to comment widely in content and scope.
on the points he raises. • The assessors are acutely aware that their decisions
I thank Gil for devoting considerable thought to the may ultimately affect candidates’ livelihoods
matter; indeed, his arguments and conclusions resemble and are determined that their assessments will be
the course of discussions in the Accreditation Working fair, transparent and consistent. Because exam
Group. The model he suggests is very like the portfolio answers are easier to compare than portfolios the
assessment that was put forward in 2004. Since then, judgements of different assessors are more likely to
feedback from prospective candidates and assessors be consistent, especially over a period of years.
has shown that a portfolio is unsuitable for the basic • The assessors, as senior professionals, expect
level of accreditation for several reasons: reasonable remuneration for advancing the careers
of other editors. The thorough assessment of a
• Some prospective candidates have said that they
portfolio – even brief evidence of competencies
could not provide evidence of competency such as
such as Gil proposes – could require several hours’
marked-up drafts and correspondence for reasons
work by each panel member, and the cost of this
of confidentiality (both personal and commercial)
would raise the application fee to an unrealistic
and copyright. If authors or employers refuse
level.
permission to use material, some candidates will
• It is expensive to convene a national peer-review
be disadvantaged. A few of our members work on
panel. Even if assessors give up their weekends
documents that are classified for national security
and charge only for time worked, they must be
and could not provide such evidence.
reimbursed for airfares, accommodation and
• It is difficult to assess the quality of editing unless
out-of-pocket expenses. Again, this increases the
one knows the brief and the constraints that applied
application fee.
to the job. Thus candidates would have to provide
documentation to support their samples of work, I agree with Gil that the examination model is
and the process of gathering all the evidence not perfect, but overall it is fairer, more consistent,
and obtaining permission to use it was felt to be less onerous and less costly than any reasonable
onerous. alternative.
• Editorial practice is richly varied. Some prospective
candidates specialise in fields such as biological
sciences, young adult fiction, maths education Janet Mackenzie
or web publications; others work in allied areas
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