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Target Lockdown First Draft
Target Lockdown First Draft
[SECOND DRAFT]
TARGET:LOCKDOWN
An Original screenplay by
Will Collins
ORIGINAL
A MAD HOUSE MEDIA PRODUCTION
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CAST
GIRL 1 N/A
ASSASSIN 2 N/A
CREED N/A
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SCENE 1: INT.CAR.NIGHT
A BMW DRIVING THROUGH ROADS AT NIGHT, INSIDE THE CAR ARE THREE
PEOPLE. TWO PEOPLE IN THE FRONT AND ONE IN THE BACK. RONERT IS ON
HIS PHONE TRYING TO CALL HIS SON WITH NO REPLY BUT HE HAS NO LUCK.
HE PUTS HIS PHONE DOWN AND HE LOOKS AROUND THE INTERIOR OF THE CAR.
ROBERT:
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ROBERT:
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ROBERT:
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ROBERT:
So this is it then
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ROBERT:
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ROBERT:
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creed:
ROBERT:
CREED:
Goodbye Robert.
ROBERT:
WE SEE HIM SNEAK OUT TRYING HARD NOT TO WAKE THE GIRL AND HE PUTS UP
HIS HOOD, AND IT BECOMES VERY CLEAR THAT HE IS TRYING TO BE VERY
CAREFUL TO NOT BE SEEN BY ANYONE.
INT.BUS.DAY
ELIJAH:PHONE
JIM:PHONE
At the hotel with a new friend of mine, where the hell are you?
ELIJAH:PHONE
JIM:PHONE
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ELIJAH:PHONE
Seriously, I’ve been gone the whole night, woke up in some girl’s
hotel, remembered nothing, with a bruise on my head.
JIM:PHONE
ELIJAH:PHONE
Dude?!
JIM:PHONE
Well you were always into that shit (Girl in background: Babbeee)
ELIJAH:PHONE
JIM:PHONE
Uhh yeah, umm I gotta go, Just uuhh send me a text for where you
wanna meet up and Ill uhh meet you there for 12.
ELIJAH:PHONE
JIM:PHONE
SCENE 3: INT.CAFE.DAY
INT/EXT.PICADILLY.DAY
MATTHEW GETS OFF THE BUS AND RESUMES TO THE TUBE STATION. AS HE GOES
DOWN THE ESCALADE WE SEE THE BACK OF THE MAN GOING DOWN THE ESCALADE
SLOWLY BEHIND MATHEW.
ELIJAH:
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MYSTERIOUS CALLER:
ELIJAH:
MYSTERIOUS CALLER:
Jim’s dead, he will be found dead by the police in the next twenty
minutes, strangled and castrated.
ELIJAH:
MYSTERIOUS CALLER:
Shut up and listen Elijah Green, there are two people to your right
by the coffee shop,
DON’T LOOK. They’ve been following you since you got on the train,
into every shop, every street.
ELIJAH:
MYSTERIOUS CALLER:
If you hang up right now, they will kill you before you get back on
that train to Piccadilly.
ELIJAH:
MYSTERIOUS CALLER:
PHONE HANGS UP
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TOILETS. THE TWO PEOPLE AT THE COFFEE SHOP SEE ELIJAH FASTLY FOR THE
TOILETS AND THEY WALK AFTER AS A UNIT.
SCENE 4: INT.TOILET.DAY
THE TOILET DOOR OPENS AND THE TWO STRALKERS WALK IN.
VICTOR:
PETROVA:
On budet v tom zhe meste otets
(He’ll be in the same place as his father soon)
THE TWO BEGIN TO SEARCH, MATHEW IS IN THE MIDDLE CUBICLE AND WE SEE
HIM TRYING TO QUIET HIS BREATHING. PETROVA STEPS TOWARDS THE
CUBICLES AND SHE ONE BY OPENS THEM WITH FORCE
SLAM, SLAM, SLAM. WE SEE MATHEW CLOSING HIS AND SEE HIM FLINCH AT
EVERY SLAM. PETROVA OPENS THE FOURTH CUBICLE AND WE SEE HER BEING
JUMPED BY A HOODED FIGURE. THE HOODED MAN PUSHES HER WITH FORCE INTO
VICTOR WHO IS JUST BEHIND HER. THEY ARE DISORIENTATED AND WE SEE THE
HOODED MAN AGRESSIVELY ATTACK BEFORE VITOR FORCES HIM BACK INTO THE
CUBICLE AND THE ENGAGE WITHIN THE CUBICLE. THE HOODED FIGURE PUSHES
AND PUNCHES HIS WAY BACKOUT OF THE CUBICLE WHERE HE IS NOW REVEALED
INTO THE OPEN, SQUARING OFF VICTOR AND PETROVA.
THEY ARE EITHER SIDE OF HIM AND ENGAGE. VICTOR TARGETS THE BODY WITH
THE HOODED MAN DENYING AND COUNTERING AND PETROVA AIMING FOR HIS
BACK KNEE WITH FULL FORCE, FORCING THE HODDED MAN TO HIS KNEES.
HOWEVER THE HOODED MAN RE-ADJUSTS AND SPINS HIS LEGS TO KICK PETROVA
OFF BALANCE. SHE CRASHES TO THE FLOOR.
HE AIM TO VICTOR AND WORKS HIS INNER BODY AND THROWS SEVERAL HARSH
BLOWS TO HIS TORSO AND RIBS, VICTOR COUNTERS AND CATCHES THE HOODED
MAN OFF GUARD WITH A SHARP SLASH TO THE STOMACK WITH A KNIFE. THE
HOODED MAN SHAKEN BY THIS, RAISES HIS HANDS IN A DEFENSIVE STANCE
AND WAITS FOR VICTOR TO ENGAGE. VICTOR STRIKES AND BEGINS TO JAB,
AND TESTS THE HOODED MAN EXPERTISE, HOWEVER THE HOODED MAN CATCHES
HIM AND SLOWLY DISARMS HIM AND VICTOR TRIES TO GET FREE OF HIS
GRASP. PETROVA GETS TO HER FEET AND COMES TO FEND OFF THE HOODED
FIGURE. THE HOODED MAN USES VICTOR ASA SHIELD TO FEND HER OFF BEFORE
FLIPPING OVER TO THE GROUND WITH IMMENSE FORCE.
PETROVA ATTACKS AND GRAPPLES ONTO HIM AND ATTEMPTS TO CHOKE HIM OUT,
HE ATTEMPT TO THROW HER OFF AND BASHES HER AGIANST WALLS, WHILST
TRYING TO KEEP HIS FACE GUARDED FROM HER. HE MANAGES TO ROLL TO THE
GROUND AND GRABS HIS ARM AND DISLOCATES IT. THE HOODED MAN GRUNTS IN
PAIN. IN ANGER HE REPOSTIONS AND SLAMS HER AGAINST A WALL. HE GET
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BACK UP, ANGER IN HIS EYES AND HE SLAMS ARM AGAINST A WALL TO PUT
HIS ARM BACK INTO PLACE. THE TWO ARE ALARMED AS HE PICKS UP THE
KNIFE, AND REINGAGES. THE HOODED MAN ROARS OUT AND SWIFTLY BREAKS
DOWN VICTOR WITH JABS TO THE MID AND THEN AS PETROVA ENGAGES, HE
DISPATCHES OF VICTOR AND DROPS HIM TO THE FLOOR. SHE GROWLS IN ANGER
AND GOES TO DISARM HIM, SHE HITS SEVERAL TIME TO THE MID AND HEAD
AND THEN THE HOODED MAN GRAPPLES HER AND TAKES HER DOWN TO THE
GROUND, THE KNIFE SLOWLY IS FORCED TO HER CHEST, SHE TRIES TO RESIST
, BUT HIS RAGE BESTS HER AND THE KNIFE SLOWLY ENTERS AND SHE LOSES
HER STRENGTH.
NOAH:
(RUSSIAN)
PETROVAS EYES FADE AND NOAH REACHES OVER AND CLOSES THEM. HE TRIES
TO GEET AND THEMN FUMBLES TO THE FLOOR HOLDING ONTO HIS STOMACH
WOUND.
NOAH:
Ah Shit.
HE LOOKS AT HIS WOUND, GETS UP AND GOES TO LOOK AT THE WOUND IN THE
MIRROR. HE TARES HIS SHIRT OFF AND REACHES FOR HIS BAG, AND TRIES TO
GET ALCOHOL TO CLEAN THE WOUND. AT THIS TIME ELIJAH WALKS OUT AND
PICKS UP THE KNIFE IN DEFENSE.
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
ELIJAH HESITATES, HIS HANDS SHAKING, NOAH STEPS TOWADS HIM AND ELJAH
SLASHES. NOAH CATCHES IT DISARMS HIM AND THEN STAMPS THE BACK OF IS
LEG TO PUT HIM DOWN.
NOAH:
(GRUNTS IN PAIN)
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I save your life, and you try and stab me, you are little spoilt
piece of shit, I should have let those two kill you. Would’ve made
this a lot easier.
ELIJAH:
You’re a monster
(Confused)
NOAH:
ELIJAH:
Orphan?!
NOAH:
ELIJAH:
BEGINS TO FURIOUSLY PUNCH NOAH IN THE CHEST AND NOAH LETS HIM TAKE
IT OUT BEFORE GRABBING HIS HANDS UNTIL HE CALMS.
NOAH:
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
No, now you can stay here and die or you can come with me
ELIJAH:
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NOAH:
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
NOAH:
We have 48 hours till the bounty runs out, People will keep the
bounty running but it gives us a window, one chance. Police,
security, people. DON’T TALK… DON’T MAKE EYE CONTACT… WALK TO THE
STATION… ACT NORMAL… IF YOU ARE ENGAGED…DON’T RUN.
NOAH:
DO YOU UNDERSTAND
ELIJAH IS SILENT
NOAH:
DO YOU UNDERSTAND!
ELIJAH:
Yes (Quietly)
NOAH:
Phone now.
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
They’re tracking it
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NOAH:
Go to the station, get on the train, and run it to the end of the
line.
Message me when your there and go to this address, I’ll meet you
when I can.
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
NOAH:
Oh shit…
REPORTER:
Hey Hey, wow, what are you doing, Mr Green can I get your views on
these terror attacks, Mr Green
ELIJAH RUNS BACK INTO THE CROWD AND ANOTHER HAND TOUCHES HIM ON THE
SHOULDER. HE TURNS ROUND
ELIJAH:
No commen…
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THE MAN IS NOT THE REPORTER AND GOES TO STAB ELIJAH AS ANOTHER
ASSASSIN COMES UP AND STABS HIM FIRST.
ELIJAH FLEES AND THE ASSASSIN CHASES HIM AND HE RUNS THROUGHT THE
STATION AND HE STORMS TO THE FLIGHT OF STARIS TO TRY AND EVADE
CAPTURE. HE LOOPS BACK AROUND TO THE PLATFORM AND RUNS FRANTICALLY.
HE ISNT LOOKING WHERE HES GOING AND HE KEEPS RUNNING TO WARDS THE
MOVING TRAIN ARRIVING AT THE PLATFORM. AN ARM STOPS HIM IN HIS
TRACKS. ELIJAH COMES TO A COMPLETE HAULT SPPOKED. HE LOOKS UP TO SEE
NOAH
NOAH:
Careful
ELIJAH:
NOAH:
HE TAKES ELIJAH BY THE ARM AND DRAGS HIM INTO THE TRAIN. THE TRAIN
DOORS CLOSE.
ELIJAH:
Where we going
NOAH:
Somewhere safe
ELIJAH:
No where’s safe?
NOAH:
ELIJAH:
What!?
NOAH:
Your learning
SCENE 6: INT.TRAIN.NIGHT
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THE TRAIN, STOP AFTER STOP THE TRAIN HAD LESS AND LESS PEOPLE ON IT.
NOAH LOOKS AROUND AND OBSERVES, HE SLOWLY CATCHES HIS ATTENTION TO A
MAN SITTING OPPOSITE THEM. HE SLOWLY SEES THE MAN, REACHING INTO HIS
POCKET, AND SEE HIM SWEATING.
NOAH:
THE MAN SLOWLY TURNS HIS HEAD FACING NOAH WITH HIS HAND STILL IN HIS
POCKET.
NOAH:
Now you have one chance you get off on this next stop, I will not
try to find you. But there will only be one person dying on this
train today. And if you don’t get off at this next stop it will be
you.
AS NOAH SAYS THIS HE FINALLY MAKES EYE CONTACT WITH THE MAN. ELIJAH
TENSES UP. THE TRAIN SLOWS DOWN AND IT GOES TO HAULT, THE TRAIN
DOORS OPEN. NEITHER BUDGE. THE DORRS SLOWLY CLOSE AND AS SOON AS IT
CLOSES THE MAN JUMPS UPAND GOES STRAIGHT FOR ELIJAH. NOAH STEPS IN
AND QUICKLY DISARMS HIM. THEY THROW EACHOTHER ROUND THE CARRIAGE.
NOAH QUICKLY GETS HIM TO THE FLOOR HOWEVER HE SWINGS HIS LEGS ROUND
AND HAS NOAH STRAIGHTTO FLOOR. THEY TUSSEL AND GRIP ON THE FLOOR.
THE DOORS RE OPEN. ELIJAH ATTEMPTS TO REACH FOR THE KNIFE. AND HEADS
TOWARDS THE MAN.
NOAH:
NOAH:
Goo Elijah!
THEY ARE STILL TUSTLING WHEN THE DOORS CLOSE. ELIJAH IS STUNNED, THE
FIRST TIME THAT HE FINALLY FEELS ALONE, LIKE THERE IS NO ONE LEFT.HE
BEGINS TO WALK ACTING NORMAL, BUT SADNESS IN HIS EYES, THE THOUGHT
THAT NOAH MAY HAVE SACRIFICED HIMSELF FOR HIM. ELIJAH FINALLY GOT TO
THE ADDRESS. HE FINDS HIMSELF AT A LARGE LOT WITH SEVERAL DIFFERENT
PLOTS AND HE GOES AND SEARCHES FOR THE PLOT THATNOAH HAD WRITTEN
DOWN. AS HE GOES TOWARDS THE PLOT WRITTEN DWON, ELIJAH NOTICES A
BULKY MAN WITH GREEN GARDENING BOOTS AND SPADE DIGGING UP ROOT
VEGETABLES. THE MAN SLIGHTLY TURNS HIS HEAS AS FOOT STEPS APPROACH
HIM. ELIJAH STEP CLOSER WITH CAUTION. THE MAN STAND UP SLOWLY
WHILSTE TURNING ROUND TO FACE HIM. ELIJAH IS VERY GUARDED AND
UNSURE. THE MANS FACE WAS REVEALED, A MAN WITH DARK HAIR AND A SCAR
GOING DOWN HIS RIGHT EYE.
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CREED:
HE SMIRKS
ROLL CREDITS
THE END.
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