To: Professor Nikiciz

From: Shannon Kornegay

Date: April 2, 2018
Subject: Peer review memo (CPR)

Peer Review Memo

In this community problem report (CPR) I did lots of constructive critiquing. To start off
there is a great thesis statement and introductory paragraph. I like how he ended it with a
question it kept me interested in reading more. I noticed how in paragraph 3 it needed more
content in it to make it equal to the other paragraphs. Paragraph 4 needed a better transition
sentence. Paragraphs 5 & 6 were very informative but needed a little more info about the
relevance of the community problem itself. In paragraph 7 it needed a reference to the picture
next to it and also needed to be a little bit longer. Lastly, the conclusion was wrapped up nicely
and the tone is that the writer is more informed of the CPR towards the end.

Thank you,
Shannon Kornegay