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Note: Refer To The List in The Document Called "Concept Unit Lesson Plans"
Note: Refer To The List in The Document Called "Concept Unit Lesson Plans"
Note: Refer To The List in The Document Called "Concept Unit Lesson Plans"
Content Requirement Satisfied: Writing Instruction, Instruction that uses text as a model
(Note: Refer to the list in the document called “Concept Unit Lesson Plans”)
SWBAT:
Cognitive (know/understand):
Students will understand that they have stories that are important to them and others. (4, 6A)
Students will know that focusing on imagery improves expository writing. (1B)
Methods of Assessment:
[How will you know if the intended learning occurred?] List all methods of assessment used in
this lesson or which are related to this lesson and come in a future lesson. After each assessment,
indicate in brackets the number(s) and letter(s) of the unit objective and the related lesson
objectives that the assessment is evaluating.
Procedures/Instructional Strategies
[Note: Any words that represent what I would say directly to students appear in italics.]
Beginning Room Arrangement: The students will be arranged in pods during the entire class
period. The teacher will be at the front of the room, with a laptop and projector.
[Changes in this arrangement that become necessary later will be noted in the plan]
3. [_60__mins.]
. [15 minutes] Self-reflection and Sentence starting
The students will now begin reflecting on their lives and begin to create their
sentences and brainstorming their stories. I will be circulating the classroom,
asking questions of students that seem behind, and helping any students that
may have writer’s block. Alright, you guys have about two minutes left to think
about the stories you will be sharing. Make sure you are thinking of some
imagery to put your listeners in the moment with you. Okay that’s time. If you
are the person sitting closest to the door, raise your hand. Alright, you all will
begin and then move clockwise.
[10 minutes] Sharing of each other’s stories
During this part of the class, I will be circulating to listen in on students’
stories and their storytelling ability. I will be informally assessing students
based on their ability to create an image orally and make their story
understandable for the listeners. At about 2:30-2:45 intervals, I will tell them
that they should be moving along to the next person if they haven’t already.
[10 minutes] Second part of mini-lesson: Thank you guys. I heard some
wonderful stories with a few very nice images. In our next part of the
lesson, we will begin writing down these stories. As you guys start
thinking about what you’d like to write down about these stories, I want
to make sure you are injecting them with enough images to truly put the
reader into the moment with you so they can really understand what it
was like to live and really experience that time. So, at this point in our
English careers, we should have been at least exposed to imagery. Let
me refresh your memories by telling you that it is language that activates
the reader’s five senses. See, hear, smell, touch, and taste. I know that
can be hard to think about at first. A lot of us just want to put down the
facts of the story of the page but that ends up sounding really boring.
This happened. And then this thing happened. And after that thing,
another thing. And then it ended. We don’t want that; it will put a reader
to sleep. Let me go first and then you guys can try during workshop. I
will now model the process of drafting a story with imagery. Okay, so
let’s write about my mom’s potato soup. I want to include some
important images for me: our wooden dining table, the light coming in
from the kitchen window, the flowers my mom always gets from the
grocery store, the creamy texture of the soup, the warm comforting smell
of potatoes, and the loving smile on my mother’s face. This is something
you guys can do. When you’re thinking of your story, object, or moment,
you can create a list of the things you want your reader to take away
from it. This will help you actually create the story. Now, let me jot down
a few sentences. “Jay, dinner’s ready,” my mom called out from the
kitchen. I put my legs into the air and slammed them down on the edge
of the bed so that I would land on my feet all in one motion. I walked
down the hallway and into the kitchen to see my mom had made my
favorite dish, potato soup. It was great to be back from school. I quickly
ladled some soup into a paper bowl and made my way to the table.
Okay, so here is a paragraph of my story. It’s not perfect. I could include
way more images but I have a few and that is a good start. I want you
guys to make a good start on your stories and try to include as much
imagery as you can. Go ahead and get started.
. [25 minutes] Writing workshop
Students will now begin the drafting process. I will be circulating and having
one-on-one conferences with students. As I survey the room, I will be looking
for students to have some pre-writing by having a list of images they may
include in their story. If they seem to be struggling putting pen to paper, I
will suggest that they think of these images first before they start writing the
story. I will tell them that the images tend to drive their thinking forward as
their writing and the images make them remember things about the moment
that they may have forgotten. My one-on-one conferences will focus on
getting students started, asking students about their moment and their
images, and making sure students have motivation to write down their story.
4. [_20_mins] Closure: Alright guys, put your writing away and let’s get started on our
SSR for the day. We will be expanding on those stories more tomorrow so be sure to
keep those stories fresh in your mind and reflect on the images you want to include.