Studio 6

1. What parts stood out as most helpful?

“Global Revision: Revising for Purpose, Thesis, and Structure”
“Cut-and-Paste Revision”
2. What parts did you find boring?
“Using a Reader “
“Re-researching”
3. What part did you find least helpful?
“Finding Quick Facts”
4. Did you take any strategies away from the chapter? What were they?
Yes, I liked the “Cut-and- Paste revision “

Margin Outline
Imagine this; you’re the goalie for the varsity lacrosse team. The team is running and shooting
drills. You take a few hits to the head and start to get a splitting headache. You start feeling
nauseas. Then you start losing your footing. Chances are you have a concussion.
a. What is a concussion?
b. Brain damage
c. What multiple concussions can do/ lead to in the long run
d. Baseline testing
The first sentence of the last paragraph describes exactly how I ended up with a concussion.
e. Impact test/ Baseline
f. NFL and NHL concussions
g. Players lying about symptoms
Washington Capitals right wing, TJ Oshie took a hit during the game against the San Jose Sharks
on December 4 ,2017.
a. Oshie’s Stats
Pittsburgh Penguins Center, Sidney Crosby, has had a total of 4 concussions in his NHL career
a. Crosby’s most recent concussion
b. how the most recent one happened
c. How many games were missed
d. NHL Concussion Protocol

The NHL, NFL, NBA and MLB all have concussion protocols that are all along the same
guidelines.
e. Baseline pre-concussion
f. After the concussion
After my concussion symptoms had passed I had to take a second baseline test to make sure I
was able to start the return to play process
a. Return to play
MLB concussions aren’t that common, but catchers are always at risk of getting them.
b. A.J Pierzynski
c. Baseball concussions being looked over
d. Jason Castro
Baseball concussions have had numerous cases where they have ruined a career.
a. Players have received numerous concussions
b. CTE
c. Concussion in baseball being a strike of bad luck
d. Not common for baseball
MLB and NBA concussions aren’t as common as NFL or NHL concussions.
a. Klay Thompson
b. Thompson’s Stats
c. NBA concussion protocol
The NBA’s concussion protocol
a. Removal from participation
b. Multiple evaluations
c. If the player has a concussion layer is prohibited from playing
d. Must be looked at by a physician within 24 Hours
e. NBA uses baseline test
ImPACT testing is a computerized neurocognitive test that helps in evaluating sport- related
concussions.
a. Most accurate
b. Can test numerous things
c. Only FDA cleared aid
athletes who suffered from multiple concussions are now suffering from multiple brain diseases
a. CTE
b. Junior Seau
c. Deceased NFL players
Tau proteins are proteins that help with stabilizing microtubules
a. Linked to Alzheimer’s
b. Dementia
Dementia was another one of the things that athletes who suffered from multiple head injuries
have to deal with in the long run.
a. What is dementia
b. My grandmother
c. Starts out slow and gets worse

players have lied about having a concussion just to stay in the game
a. James Wisniewski
Concussions are a traumatic brain injury that shouldn’t be taken as a joke or lied about.
b. Major leagues
c. Concussions taking away what people love
d. Sports clubs judge an athlete for symptoms
e. Athletes taking care of themselves