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Caitlyn Pyle - Beowulf Final Project
Caitlyn Pyle - Beowulf Final Project
English IV
Ms. Cook
26 September, 2017
True happiness
“Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh” the ear piercing screaming coming from the castle gates
terrifies the Queen Clara. One late afternoon Clara the queen was bathing.
Suddenly she heard a horrific scream! It startled her so bad that she jumped out of
the tub and put on her fox's fur robe, which made
off. As they left the bathing room, all she could smell was burning flesh. He rushed
her down a narrow cold hallway. The smell faded away as he carried Clara down
When they were out of the castle Clara yelled, “PUT ME DOWN YOU Maggitt!” But
the Guard refused to do as she wished. Once she started fighting him, he throw her
over his shoulder. When he did that, she saw once a peaceful and beautiful castle in
flames. He ran throughout the night he didn't stop to take breaks at all. When the
sun came up from the direction of the castle it was
when he realized she was wide awake he climbed it faster. While throwing the
clothing at Clara.
Clara threw the clothing back at the guard saying ,“I am not going anywhere until
you tell me what is going on.” She demanded the guard to tell her what's happening
In a calm voice, the guard said, “My name is Isaac Prince of the future America’s.
Your uncle said if I save you that I would get the ship and money I need to travel.
Your kingdom is uprising against you because of your heartless actions. I will
dress you like a servant so we can get through the land safe and unnoticed.” Clara
was appalled to what Isaac said to her. How could this be happening to her she
thought to herself. Clara got up and took the rags clothing from the floor and
Clara said in a giggle voice, “ What have you never seen a naked lady?”
Isaac said in a shaky voice swallowing his words, “My mother taught me to be
The clothing she was wearing made her stunning. Her green eyes matched her
dress and the contrast with the red hair and the green was blinding. Before Isaac
could say anything the old farmer came in with two horses saddled up. The horses
were brown with a deep black maine. Isaac climbed down the ladder first and then
Clara walked up to the old wrinkling farmer saying in a grateful voice, “ Thank you
The farmer looking down in a deep but raspy voice says, “ I don't need anything, I
am happy the way I live. You can just be thankful. That’s all I need”
Isaac came up touching Clara's shoulder speaking in a loving voice, “ It’s time to go
before the people notice you’re not dead and start looking for you!”
Clara kissed the older man on the cheek and hopped on the horse. Isaac thanked
As Clara and Isaac road for many days and nights to get to her uncle’s
kingdom. Clara saw all the pain and helpless her people were in. It broke her heart
to see them in so much pain. Over the time of traveling Isaac and Clara started a
friendship. The last night Isaac and Clara stopped to get everything in order. It was
starting to get dark in the forest. Isaac was cooking a rabbit he shot with a bow and
arrow that afternoon. Isaac handed her a chunk of the rabbit meat.
Clara pushed it slowly to the fire. She was upset with her people.
Isaac spoke in a loving voice, “ Clara are you okay? I’m worried about you.”
Isaac brushing her tears away while holding her face, “ No you're not a bad ruler
Clara. You were blind by your riches to see what's really going on with your
people.”
Clara said in a sweet way, “ You are the only person who has been real with me
So Clara looked into Isaac’s soft brown eyes. She leaned in to kiss him, Isaac kissed
Clara back. This kiss was interrupted by the noblemen associated with Clara’s
uncle.
Clara was yelling and fighting at the huge man, but every thing she did was nothing
compared to the man's strength. When she got to her uncle’s castle she barged into
his quarters.
The door swung open, she yelled with anger in her voice, “How dare you treat me
The king was in his bed smiling in a creepy way, “Because you were taking too long
my darling.”
He got out of his bed he walked toward her with open arms. Clara stepped back in
In the matter of seconds, the king snapped back like an aggressive dog, “ I don't
care what you want, you tramp you're going to be my next queen. I need a son by the
time I die!” The king pushed her against his brick wall.
The uncle was kissing her neck like some old creepy dog. Clara pushed him off
with her foot. He went flying into his the bed. The uncle giggled saying, “ I like it
of the room. It was Isaac with blood and cuts on his white baggy shirt. His black
to her neck.
Isaac ran with his eyes locked on his prey and shot the knife right out of his hand
when the arrow hit the back of his hand. arrow right of his hand. The uncle
Clara took the knife from the floor and stabled her uncle. She ran to Isaac’s arms
crying her eyes out! He took her and jumped through the window into the ocean
A hairy man grabbed Clara and pulled her onto the boat saying, “Here you go, my
Queen.”
With tears in his eyes, Isaac climbed in the boat and said, “ I love you Clara. I was
never so sure in my life about this. I love your caring heart and hard headed
choices. As you left with your uncle’s men, my breath slowly left my body. I jumped
on my horse and got my crew ready. When I heard you screaming. It confirmed my
The hairy man came up behind Isaac yelling,” Anchor up... we got to go!”
Clara grabbed Isaac and kissed him. Isaac kissed her back holding her sides.
As they sailed farther and farther from the castle. Clara thought back to her
The Farmer explained, “ I don’t need anything I am happy the way I live.” She
learned she doesn’t need riches to be happy. As the ship sailed toward the sun rise
continued…….
Excellent job describing your characters and the scenes using sensory language and imagery.
You incorporated dialogue, flashbacks, and theme very well. Your story has a very good
beginning, middle, and end. Good job using pictures to help communicate your ideas! There are
some punctuation errors throughout, but you’re getting better using compound and complex
sentences.
Introduction: 5
Mechanics: 4