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Essay 1 Final
Essay 1 Final
Grace Wells
Prof. Vaughn
English 2089
2 February 2018
“Resolve never to quit, never to give up, no matter what the situation.”
– Jack Nicklaus
Being literate means learning and mastering the skills or techniques required for a
particular subject. Literacy is present in every aspect of our life: school, sports, jobs, or hobbies.
All literacies are unique and have differing degrees of difficulty. To successfully master a
literacy, determination is a necessity. This applies to golf as well. The literacies for golf include
terminology, scoring, etiquette, or the act of swinging a club properly. The sport is filled with
tumultuous ups and downs, and frustrations are bound to arise and hinder progress. My drive to
improve my game arose out of my frustration from my swing. With the help of a professional, I
Preseason was in full swing by July, and my practice scores showed I was going to be of
no help to my team once the season started. Time and time again I counted my score after a
round and calculated over 50 strokes for 9 holes; most of the courses we played were par 31.
Double and triple bogeys became my norm, and pars were scarce. My frustration grew after
every practice. I was not making solid contact with the ball; I “chunked,” “topped,” or sliced the
ball on every shot. “Chunking” is hitting the ground before the ball and “topping” the ball caused
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it to line drive down the fairway. I longed for a pretty shot, but my coach and I were not able to
fix my swing. This called for a private lesson with the Meadowlinks golf professional, Matt.
To say I was nervous would be quite an understatement. My stomach was in knots at the
thought of a professional watching and correcting my swing. It was daunting, and I did not want
him to judge me based upon my poor golf skills. I was automatically more at ease when my golf
coach offered to come along and take notes as reminders for me later in the season. When I
arrived to Meadowlinks, I anxiously introduced myself to Matt and met up with my coach.
Butterflies fluttered in my stomach as we drove back to the empty, secluded private lesson area
Matt began the lesson by simply asking me to hit the ball like I normally would; he
observed my routine and swing before getting out his phone and recording my swing from a few
different angles (Figure 1). After getting a feel for my weaknesses, he began with small changes.
Throughout the lesson, he continuously referenced the video he took previously; it was
enlightening to watch it in slow motion and pinpoint the flaws of my swing. Matt reviewed all
the basics of golf with me and fully explained his reasoning behind his corrections. He
understood I had been playing golf for over a year now but knew I needed a stronger foundation
He started with posture. “Stand with your feet shoulder width apart, back pockets up in
the air and chest to the ground. This gives you a more athletic stance.” This was a simple
correction compared to the rest, but it was difficult trying to remind myself of this posture. Next,
he altered my backswing. “Turn your belt buckle so it is behind the ball. Keep your elbow tucked
in. Stop your backswing when your left shoulder hits your chin.” Referencing the video, he
showed my club always went past parallel on my backswing. Going past parallel made it nearly
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impossible for my club to be positioned correctly when I made contact with the golf ball.
Stopping my backswing earlier created a more compact swing, which dramatically improved
Matt then described the path of the club through a swing. While guiding me through my
swing, he paused to observe the club head at the bottom of the arc. “Control the club face – feel
the club face rotate more closed or pointing to the left through impact to help keep the ball
straighter and on line.” In addition to my slice, the position of the club head was forcing the ball
to the right immediately. Matt also mentioned there should be a divot in front of where the ball
was after my swing. This concept repositioned the bottom of my arc and decreased the chance of
To finish the lesson, Matt instructed me “to swing out more to the right and finish high.”
Swinging to the right causes the ball to draw slightly to the left, which is more desirable than a
severe slice to the right. Finishing high ensures I follow through without losing momentum on
impact. To condition my new swing path, Matt placed a large, orange traffic cone in front of me,
slightly to the left. If I hit the cone, I knew I was not swinging correctly and had to swing out
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right more. I utilized this practice later in the season, when I started to struggle with my swing
again.
uncertain, but our team made it. Every year, the match is held
at the Ohio State University Golf Club on the Scarlet and Gray
I could not keep from smiling during the practice warm up. A grin was plastered to my
face for the two hours before my tee time, but the second they called my group, my smile quickly
faded. My hands were clammy, and the butterflies swarmed back. Tee off was intense; the rules
were strict, officials were circling the course like hawks, and my opponents were intimidating
and impersonal. I felt extreme pressure to play a perfect round to prove to my opponents (and to
myself) that I deserved to be there alongside them. But anyone familiar with golf knows
The first few holes at state went smoothly, a few bogeys. But soon my game plummeted.
My heart sunk as I realized my swing was off, and I was unable to identify the exact reason why.
My ball was soaring all over the course and I was not making good contact. Some would blame
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it on the inclement weather conditions, the soggy golf course, or the pressure from the posse of
family and friends following, but I knew I had slipped back into my rut from a couple years
earlier. Frustrated, I took a few deep breaths and reflected upon the basics Matt taught me. His
words were engrained in my head and my mind reeled trying to solve my current problem.
Like any other literacy, at first glance, golf can be overwhelming. Finding a start amongst
all the rules and techniques can be tricky. And practice one day could be entirely different from
the next. Not all the problems encountered have simple fixes; the solutions take hard work and
determination. This is a truth across all literacies. Stephen King wrote about the literacy of
writing and said, “you can come to the act with your fists clenched and your eyes narrowed,
ready to kick ass and take down names” (106). As with writing, mentality and attitude have a
major impact on success. Playing golf with a confident and resolute attitude allowed me to
overcome my weaknesses and improve my game. And although attitude plays a key role, having
a trustworthy and informed literacy sponsor present throughout this process is just as important.
Matt inspired me to continue playing the sport I loved and to not give up hope when I hit a rough
patch. To this day, I still utilize techniques he taught me as well as recall the reminders he
repeated throughout my lesson. Just like Sherman Alexie, “I refused to fail” (Alexie 365). Alexie
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was determined to prove he was more than just an Indian boy on his reservation; he wanted to
learn to read and expand his knowledge. I wanted to master my swing technique to prove my
worth as a teammate. Although our literacy goals were different, a persistent attitude is crucial to
achieving those goals. With tenacity and dedication, I was able to learn more about my golf
literacy.
Golf is an endless rollercoaster, with highs and lows fluctuating day to day. Without the
help of my literacy sponsor Matt, I would have easily succumbed to the frustrations and quit
playing the sport. Watching your ball fly in the wrong direction time and time again is
disappointing. With the help of a private lesson, I was able to relearn and improve techniques
where my weaknesses lie. The patience and work ethic I gained during this literacy lesson has
stuck with me for over two years and continues to be a reminder that dedication can overcome
any challenge.
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Works Cited
Alexie, Sherman. "The Joy of Reading and Writing: Superman and Me." Writing about Writing:
A College Reader. 1st ed. Ed. Elizabeth Wardle and Doug Downs. Boston: Bedford/St.
King, Stephen. "What Writing Is." On Writing. New York: Scribner, 2000. 103-107. Print.
Park, Ryan. “50 Best Golf Quotes of All-Time.” Colorado AvidGolfer, 19 June 2013,
www.coloradoavidgolfer.com/50-best-golf-quotes-of-all-time/.