LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass & Pass

Current Grade for LO2: Distinction

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade and
Learning outcome 2 is a Distinction Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any
minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: Some great work here Matthew! You have showed a sound understanding of how to
research existing products in order to generate solid and feasible ideas for your own product.

LO1: You have conducted good research on media publishing companies and their
products before using them to generate ideas for your own media product. Annotations of
front covers and double page spread also correctly analyse the conventions of magazines
and newspapers.

LO2: You have created a detailed proposal that contains all necessary and vital
information regarding your media product. You have discussed how your media product
would overcome any legal and ethical issues whilst explaining how you will generate
content that appeals to a number of target audiences.

The resubmission deadline is: 27th June 2018.