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Unit 14 p5 Feedback Sheet - Abdullah2
Unit 14 p5 Feedback Sheet - Abdullah2
Date 11.6.18
Presentation Details
Abdullah discussed his ideas. He explained that he was creating a campaign for a film
featuring a superhero. He wanted the main image to feature the superhero and had
created his own image in Photoshop. The image has been created from scratch by
Abdullah. He explained that the narrative was about the main character Gravito who
makes mistakes and is clumsy; it is a parody film with comic elements. He wanted to
convey this in the animated style of the design. The choice of font expressed the strength
of the character
Feedback/Changes
The main design is very good and demonstrates impressive graphic skills. The idea that it
is a parody film doesn’t come across in the poster as it looks a bit too serious. To improve
the poster, it needs to convey the spoof element so that the narrative is more clear.