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Page: 45 Character: Arielle Line: “Your ass is gonna be so tight, Ian” (You said: Ian, your ass is gonna be so tight)
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Page: 45 Character: Dove Line: “I’m sorry, what the hell do you think you’re doing?” (You said: What the hell are you
doing?)
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Page: 48 Character: Arielle Line: “Miranda doesn’t get down on her knees. Not for anything. Or anyone.”
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Page: 48 Character: Arielle Line: Oh, that was so gross. I think that’s all of it.
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Page: 49 Character: Arielle Line: “Are you gonna eat something?” (You said: have something to eat)
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Page: 49 Character: Arielle Line: “If you’ve done the thing, you put one finger down” (You said: put a finger down)
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Page: 49 Character: Arielle Line: “We’re not in middle school, so if it’s your turn, don’t make it something…”
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Page: 50 Character: Dove Line: “This is dumb” (You said: this is lame)
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Page: 52 Character: Arielle Line: “Okay. Callie, Ian, and Dove” (You said: Callie, Dove, and Ian)
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Page: 58 Character: Callie Line: Have you seen what people at this school are saying about me online?
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Page: 59 Character: Callie Line: About how the whole school is saying I’m (you said: calling me) Bulimic
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Page: 59 Character: Callie Line: telling me to get a life. Telling me I’m gross (you said: telling me I’m gross. Telling me to
get a life)
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Page: 63 Character: Felipe Line: If you looked at this photo (you said: picture) would you think this is a real black eye?
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Page: 66 Character: Miranda Line: I did an insane crash diet (you said: I did one of those insane crash diets)
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Page: 69 Character: Callie Line: Isn’t that what all this recovery shit is about?
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Page: 70 Character: Callie Line: It feels (you said: I feel) like you’re gaslighting me right now.
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Page: 71 Character: Callie Line: I just wish people understood that I don’t do what I do because I feel like it.
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Page: 74 Character: Ian Line: I’m sick of being forced to come here
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Page: 76 Character: Ian Line: It just reminded me why I stopped going on social media in the first place
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Page: 80 Character: Callie Line: And don’t even get me started with (you said: on) the juice junkies
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Page: 80 Character: Callie Line: I told you to stop apologizing (you said: You keep apologizing)
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Page: 82 Character: Callie Line: I don’t know how I didn’t notice (You said: I can’t believe I never noticed)
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Page: 82 Character: Callie Line: I can’t believe I had no idea (you said: didn’t notice)
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Page: 82 Character: Callie Line: Thanks for telling me the truth, though
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Page: 85 Character: Callie Line: like it was going to destroy her life just to take one bite (you said: or something)
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