Revision Checklist

Focus Think About Comments

Small Moment One moment vs the This is where you write evidence
you found in the narrative
whole vacation

Introduction After reading the This is where you write evidence

you found in the narrative
introduction do you know
what the story is going to
be about?

Sequence of events B-M-E chart This is where you write evidence

you found in the narrative

Beginning
Middle
End

Vivid Details Show don’t tell important This is where you write evidence
you found in the narrative
events, use details to
S-T-R-E-T-C-H
Moment out
Strong Emotion After reading do you feel This is where you write evidence
you found in the narrative
something

Like you did after reading

the examples
Ending Does it include 1 of the 3 This is where you write evidence
you found in the narrative
types of endings we
discussed.

Which one?