This document contains feedback and suggestions for improving several students' thesis proposals and drafts. Key points addressed include revising titles and statements of problems to better align with the research topic, adding details about methods, results and comparisons to related work. Students are advised to strengthen introductions by discussing benefits of their research topics, cite related literature properly, and construct theoretical frameworks. Formatting and stylistic issues like page spacing are also noted for revision. The goal is to help students strengthen various aspects of their work to produce high quality final theses.
This document contains feedback and suggestions for improving several students' thesis proposals and drafts. Key points addressed include revising titles and statements of problems to better align with the research topic, adding details about methods, results and comparisons to related work. Students are advised to strengthen introductions by discussing benefits of their research topics, cite related literature properly, and construct theoretical frameworks. Formatting and stylistic issues like page spacing are also noted for revision. The goal is to help students strengthen various aspects of their work to produce high quality final theses.
This document contains feedback and suggestions for improving several students' thesis proposals and drafts. Key points addressed include revising titles and statements of problems to better align with the research topic, adding details about methods, results and comparisons to related work. Students are advised to strengthen introductions by discussing benefits of their research topics, cite related literature properly, and construct theoretical frameworks. Formatting and stylistic issues like page spacing are also noted for revision. The goal is to help students strengthen various aspects of their work to produce high quality final theses.
“AN ASSESSMENT OF THE SOCIO-ECONOMIC IMPACTS OF THE MEMBER BORROWERS
OF BASUD DEVELOPMENT COOPERATIVE (BADEVCO), IN SELECTED BARANGAYS OF LABO CAMARINES NORTE” Provide the copy for BADEVCO Statement of the problem should anchor/related to the survey questionnaires, objectives, and recommendation. Search the information about 4C’s (Character, Collateral, Condition, Capacity, ) , principles of credits which 30% is the loan limitation for borrowers. (Add in Introduction) Use the words “Member borrowers” instead borrowers or lending. 12 to 15 words is the words limitation of thesis title Revise the Abstract, Problems, Results and Discussion, Findings, and Recommendation should only be cited. Get the Baseline of Data (Zensus), in barangay of each member in BADEVCO for profiling of borrowers and attach these in Appendices. Ex. Barangay BS1, list of respondents, barangay BS2, list of respondents, etc. The data should be updated at least 5 years backward. Age limitation of borrowers must be discussed in introduction. Always supplement the source or back up references and use the words; therefore, according, stated that, for introducing a person. (Also, to prevent plagiarism). Mostly used in Chapter 4 (Result in Discussion) and Chapter 2. And if you only get the website just also cited. Ex. According to Mr. Villalun of his study in …… or www.jlgjkn,n .(put in the last paragraph/sentence). Add related literatures and related studies. Always updated when you search in internet. Change the page spacing. In the last paragraph of each related study, discuss the comparison or differences of their studies to your study. (Look the 2017 Batch thesis for your additional info. and reference). Make a theoretical framework 02/28/2018
RIAN JOY DOMER
“POTENTIAL OF Cytosperma chamissonis GIANT SWAMP TARO AS SWEET DELICACY”.
Change the questionaires Adjust the Statement of the Problem to the new title Put Page numbering Look your following related studies, analyse it and use it to your present study including; Manner 2011, Hopkins 2012, and Merino 2009. Cancel the Quota Sampling located in Population of the Study Always put the researcher of your related studies and literatures in the first sentence of the paragraph and always have the year when they were conducted their studies. (Look the format of 2017 batch thesis.), Ex. Webb Stranghero 2010. THEN, Title of his study, followed the discussion, then the last paragraph explain the comparison or differences in your study. Atleast 3-4 pages of introduction. (Add the benefits of product of your study, the place where you market it, where the place is most abundant of Giant Swamp Taro, what is economic impact of your product or your study, etc.) , (Always put the person or website when you make search for your additional information, to prevent plagiarism) ,(Use the words; According to, based on, stated of , when you pinpoint the person who made the study). Always take a document/picture for your evidence, mostly when you’ll survey and process your product. The scientific name should always italized and has double underline. Change the page spacing Change your Conceptual Framework , it should be; Input, Process and Output Make theoretical framework 02/28/2018
JOHN LUIS MALIGAT
“Xanthosoma sagittifolium SAN FERNANDO AS ALTERNATIVE BY-PRODUCT IN
PRODUCING HOMEMADE CHIPS IN THE SELECTED BARANGAYSIN MUNICIPALITY OF VINZONS, CAMARINES NORTE” Benefits and purpose of your study add in introduction. Target respondent should add on chapter 3, and scope and limitation 150 respondents, 50 each of selected barangay Detail the process Specific what are the best dryer for your product it’s either, sundry or heater machine. Make the data of harvesting San Fernando and describe it in chapter 3, to know if it is sustainable for your raw material. Add in introduction, what and where san fernado is abundant Comparison of tannia chips in other chips including banana chips, etc to make comparable as to crunchiness, appearance, taste and aroma, to prove that it may alternative chips. Discussed the overall costing of San Fernando it must be competitive existing to other product, including labor, raw materials, fuel, etc Your product must prove that it is cheaper and quality than other chips to make it competitive. How many chips will you get in I kl of San Fernando, discuss specifically. Also discuss the age limit that can be eating the chips of San Fernando. Change the questionnaire and revised the statement of the problem (Consult to Mr. Edwin Oro) (09158555125) Change the page spacing Add your foreign literatures Make theoretical framework 02/28/2018
JAYJOHN D. TORAZO
“ALTERNATIVE INDIGENOUS FLOUR FROM “Xanthosoma sagittifolium SAN FERNANDO
: AS COMMON ROOT CROPS IN CAMARINES NORTE” Adjust the statement of the problem to the research title also the discussion of chapter 1,4, and 5 Remove number 1 recommendation Arrange your chapter 2, always site the year implemented of their studies in each researcher. And add your related literature and related studies, 5 each for foreign and local and explain their differences or comparison to your study locate in last paragraph. (Look the thesis of Batch 2017 graduates, for your additional references and info.) Change the page spacing Add the benefits of your product in terms of health and economic and place where it is abundant, site in introduction. Make a theoretical framework 02/28/2018
JAY I. DE VELA
GERMINATION RATE OF “ Swietenia macrophylla LARGE LEAF MAHOGANY SEEDS ON
DIFFERENT GROWING MEDIA Purposes of growing media, discuss in introduction Apply the formula of high germination rate Add for recommendation; “the best treatment of the study is treatment #? Because _____? . Therefore it may help? 15 days how many sprouts were existed?.. (discuss) for chapter 4 Rate the germination to know the mortality using the G.R formula Supply the formula for additional reference After 20 days what is the growest mahogany? (discuss chapter 4) Reference of Philippine mahogany challenges, why have lower plantations of mahogany, (Additional information for introduction) Arrange your Bibliography separate the references for book, internet, journal, etc. (make a research for the format of this) Change the # 3 statement of the problem “what is germination rate for each treatment?”. Change your page spacing Make a theoretical framework 02/28/2018
VIRNIE V. OPALDA
COMPARATIVE STUDY OF COCONUT PULP AS ALTERNATIVE Cocos nucifera COCONUT
PULP COFFEE AND Coffea liberica BARAKO COFFEE Look for another format of conceptual framework Add on recommendation “ the suggestions for future researcher the health of benefits according to your product” Discuss the benefits of sapal in introduction Described the duration of your product (Expiration) Discuss the storage required of your product What kind of coconut use in your study. discuss in your process Make a theoretical framework Change page spacing