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Nervous
Face- Face becomes red, eyes turn into an odd shape.
Body- Body becomes shaky, breathing quickly and
loudly, heartbeat is getting faster, and the person is
shivering.
Voice- Voice becomes shaky, sometimes cracky.
Tired-
Face- Eyes are sleepy, face is pale.
Body- Body is weak, pale, can’t do many things at all,
sleepy.
Voice- Voice is soft, sleepy.
Cold-
Face- Eyes are in an odd shape, face is freezing.
Body- Body is shaky getting goosebumps in your skin,
hair follicles are going up.
Voice- Voice is freezing with an air forming after.