Concluding Paragraph (5)

1. Summary of Ideas

Ex: In conclusion, through the use of foreshadowing, conflict, and characterization, Jackson
effectively makes a statement about the dangers of mob mentality.

2. Revisit and Restate Theme

Ex: The literary work demonstrates how easily humans can preserve problematic traditions
simply because they have become accustomed to them. Through the game of the “the lottery”,
Jackson portrays how far peer pressure can go, and how immoral things can get when one
follows the status quo without question.

3. Personal Thought

Ex: I believe this short story truly demonstrates the power, and danger, of peer pressure.
Although the events of the story may seem extreme, the way in which they are presented
demonstrates how easy it is to get carried away when one is part of a group. The literary work
teaches a lesson to readers in a manner that is shocking, yet easy to understand. Because of
this, the work leaves a lasting impact on readers and makes one question one’s own actions.
One might even start to ask oneself; would I have reacted in the same way, had I grown up in
this town?

Completed Concluding Paragraph

In conclusion, through the use of foreshadowing, conflict, and characterization, Jackson

effectively makes a statement about the dangers of mob mentality. The literary work
demonstrates how easily humans can preserve problematic traditions simply because they have
become accustomed to them. Through the game of the “the lottery”, Jackson portrays how far
peer pressure can go, and how immoral things can get when one follows the status quo without
question. I believe this short story truly demonstrates the power, and danger, of peer pressure.
Although the events of the story may seem extreme, the way in which they are presented
demonstrates how easy it is to get carried away when one is part of a group. The literary work
teaches a lesson to readers in a manner that is shocking, yet easy to understand. Because of
this, the work leaves a lasting impact on readers and makes one question one’s own actions.
One might even start to ask oneself; would I have reacted in the same way, had I grown up in
this town?