Athul Dev, Jayadevan Nair Beena (DEV)

Answers to Proofreading and Editing- Assignment— Stars

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1. 12 a million earths’ inside a million Earths’ inside

2. 24 gravity, and a great deal of time. gravity, and time.

3. 17 Canis Majoris. It’s Canis Majoris? It’s
4. 19 Each nebulae is Each nebula is
5. 18 yellow, and the colour blue. yellow, and blue.
6. 3 unique, and are at a great distance. unique, and are distant. /
and are far away.
7. 13 enormous, however; our Enormous; however, our
8. 13 in diameter our in diameter, our
9. 2 of life: stardust. Quite of life: Stardust. Quite
10. 14 For example Eta For example, Eta
11. 35 we are, quite literally, made of stars. we are quite literally made of stars.
12. 27 At the centre, gravity At the center, gravity
13. 9 close our sun. Seen Close: our sun. Seen
14. 23 the spitzer, we the Spitzer, we
15. 30 approximately a half a million approximately half a million
16. 28 the centre. With the center. With
17. 5-6 In our Milky Way galaxy, there are over In our Milky Way galaxy, there are over
100 billion stars, and there are over 100 100 billion stars and galaxies in the
billion galaxies in the universe. universe.
18. 23 able to see finally the able to finally see the
19. 18 different colours: red, different colors: red,

*Stars” in How the Universe Works (2010) on the Discovery Channel, Discovery Science. Episode: 1 Original Air Date: 10-05-10;
Record Date: 10-01-16