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Maui Ocean Safety Data Collection and Awareness Project
Maui Ocean Safety Data Collection and Awareness Project
For my senior project, I had a few main focuses. For one, I wanted to do
something that related to skills that I have. Secondly, I wanted to do something that
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benefited the community and had the ability to help people. Lastly, I needed to do
Since I’m very interested in technology and my internship was primarily focused
on computer science, I realized that this had to be a driving point of my senior project. I
decided to use programs I had experience with during that time. However, despite the
fact that I’m proficient in the programs I will be using, there is still a lot for me to learn. I
didn’t want to start from scratch and learn new software. I am drawing from skills that I
have, but also building them and acquiring new ones. Next, I needed to meet my
I learned a lot from Junior Projects. Perhaps the most important thing being that
my project had to be something that is made with an intention to help the community. It
can’t be something that could possibly help out. Intentions are important with this
project. With this in mind, I looked inward and outward. What did myself and other
people need that I could help them acquire? After much pondering, I reviewed my
smaller scale, this means taking care of the Aina. To do this, we need to look after the
woods, the air, and the water on Maui. The latter of which is perhaps the most important
out of the three. Living on a small island in the middle of a large body of water, the
ocean is what our lives are based around. Therefore, I decided to make my project
reflect my love for the ocean. I thought of something that I could do that helps the
The answer, in summary, is an interactive map of Maui and all of its beaches
where you can click on each one and easily find out information about the quality of the
water and more. I would both collect my own information and work with other groups
that observe water quality around Maui. Then, I would program it into a ArcGIS map on
a self-made website. My driving question is: “what is the best way to inform the
community of the quality of water at beaches and streams around Maui.” My project will
answer this.
The goal of my project is to make a fully functioning map that anyone on Maui
can easily access. I want to collect the most accurate information possible. If possible, I
also want to come up with reasons why the water quality might differ (on different
beaches around the island) and share that information as well. While bacterial
information is already collected around Maui, it is not easily accessible to the public. My
This project is important because it regards public health and safety. The more
informed that people are, the better. I want to give people an opportunity to make a
more informed decision regarding the places that they swim. It is peoples right to know
what they are exposing themselves to. Additionally, I hope that if people know where an
excess of pollutants exist, they can do something to reverse that phenomenon. If this
The concepts that my project will be covering are: water quality on a bacterial
data input, and effective marketing. There may be additional concepts along the way.
For my project, I must learn the different types of enterobacteria and their effects
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on the human body. I need to explore various news outlets and possibly attend the
public meetings of various governmental agencies to find out about existing and future
laws regarding swimming water. The sensor I will learn how to build is an Arduino run
PPM (parts per million) pollution and conductivity sensor. I will need to program HTML,
Python, and possibly Javascript. I need to use the arcgis software to input data in an
effective way. Most importantly, when my project is finished, I want people to see it.
Therefore, it is important for me to market efficiently and let people share in the
The main 21st century skills that my project will use are: information skills,
communication skill, self directional skills, and civic literacy and engagement. I will use
computer technology to my project. I have to use communication skills due to the fact
that I will most likely be working with organizations on Maui that do similar work to mine.
I will use self directional skills due to the sheer workload that my project entails. I need
to stay focused and get everything done in the required amount of time. Finally, I will
use civil literacy and engagement because my entire project is made for my community.
There are many setbacks that I can and most likely will face. My biggest setback
goes back to last year. In 2017, I applied for and received chemistry and pollution
monitoring equipment for school. Since then, however, the organization that I worked
with to get the products for our school will now begin charging for us to use them. When
I was first planning my project, I was counting on being able to use the tools that I
acquired for school. However, I have been forced to overcome this adversity and come
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up with a comparable solution. My idea is too build the tools. This, however, leads me to
more potential setbacks. I am worried that the sensor I am building will not work as I
intended to, or that it won’t be possible to build at all. The instructions I found are over
10 years old, and I have yet to explore if that technology has shifted. Also, I am
expecting the hardest part of my project to be sharing my findings with the community in
have my map and a key to make my findings as easy as possible to understand. I want
there to be a data scale that makes the information easier to understand. People aren’t
going to know what a raw reading means. Additionally, I may have investigative articles
or videos to turn in with my project. These would be completed over the course of my
project, and would further invoke the community’s understanding of my data. Lastly, my
Annotated Bibliography
“LEARN: Human Health at the Beach.” EPA, Environmental Protection Agency, 26 June
2018, www.epa.gov/beaches/learn-human-health-beach.
This source is a group of national government formed articles delving into the
safety aspects of water at the beach. It’s main idea is to inform the public, and it can be
a useful source for any beginner. The main topics are beach related illnesses, beach
safety, and healthy swimming. This is a starting point for anyone wanting to know more
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about beach safety, but doesn’t delve as much into the molecular aspects of water
quality.
This source is at the top tier of reliability, as it is .gov website, and provides
insight from the Environmental Protection Agency and the Center of Disease Control
and Prevention. It is useful to an end, with it gazing the surface of an expansive subject.
The author isn’t provided, but whoever wrote the article can be contacted with feedback.
The information is objective, and a resource that the public can use to do their own
research. The site isn’t trying to convince you of anything. Lastly, the target audience is
a general crowd.
I believe I can use this research to help me discover what I should look and
watch out for in my paper and throughout my project. It helps me understand what the
baseline safety is. It also provides insight as to why problems exist, allowing me to have
This source is a report in the form of a book written by the National Research
aquatic microbial ecology, microbial risk assessment, water quality standards and
methods, epidemiology, and public health. The main idea is expressed by the title. This
assessments, and many more. Summarized, this book is all about waterborne
National Committee, which is an author’s equivalent of a .gov website. Also, the book
organization. The authors are all professionals in their fields and from what I can tell, the
I believe that this will be one of my most helpful sources, as It is stuffed full of
information about what my project will be based on finding. I can use this information to
write my argumentative essay and to better prepare myself for when I’m on the ground
collecting information. This information will help me decide what is most harmful about
This source is a book examining the chemistry of water quality in a broad sense.
It analyzes physical, chemical, and biological factors in doing this. It is a basic book, and
an average college student would be able to read and comprehend the book with no
problems. If someone were to ask me what this source was about, I would say that it’s a
textbook explaining what water quality means, and what water should be if it’s clean and
safe.
The author of this book is Claude Boyd, a Aquaculture and Aquatic Science
professor at Auburn University. I believe that this book would be very useful in
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introducing me to the topic of comprehensive water quality. From what I’ve read, he’s
teaching the reader, so the book isn’t biased. At the same time, being that he’s a
professor, he is probably a master in his field. This, along with the book’s 19 additional
I can use this information to start out my consideration of water quality. I believe
that this source will give me a well rounded well of information that might not shift my
driving question, but will certain shift my main argument. It will give my point reason and
make it factual.
www.octiva.net/projects/ppm/.
measurements are both important in finding pollution in a body of water. The tutorial
itself shows you how to build the circuit for the sensor, how to construct the sensor, how
to make a reading solution to see your findings, and how to show what you find on the
computer. There are a list of steps to follow, as well as an update log to see what you
can do better.
While the source doesn’t pull from any research papers or thick books, it is still a
well researched and informed source. The author, giving only her email, comes up with
how to make something new that will assist a person that doesn’t want to buy an
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expensive sensor. The source is neither objective or biased, as it is a self made tutorial.
The only thing that clearly worries me about the validity of this website is that it looks to
have been made for 2006. This isn’t a huge problem, but technology may have changed
and I don’t want to buy the wrong parts for my circuit board.
This source covers a clear aspect of my driving question and project. I want to
include building a sensor as part of my workload, and this will be my only source telling
me how to do so. Finding this online confirms to me that building my sensor is going to
work. It shows me that this is a good thing for me to do. This is self explanatory, but I
can use this information to test water, gather data, and therefore add to the totality of my
project.
Vancouver, Canada, and the rest of North America. It is directed, written, and produced
by one person. The film is available for purchase online but is also available in full on
youtube. As well as examining water pollution and contamination, it also researches the
water rights and control. Being that it is completely made by one person, there is a
biased lean towards equal water rights, but I believe that this is an important
is with many movies on pollution. The person who made this film is obviously seeking
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change. Overall, the film is well researched and the fact that one of its main directions is
argumentative point. My initial project was going to be purely scientific, but I’m intrigued
by this new direction. This source is also helpful to my project due to the fact that it’s
case study looks heavily into sources of water pollution. I believe that I can reflect this
Young, Rick. “Poisoned Waters.” PBS, Public Broadcasting Service, 21 Apr. 2009,
www.pbs.org/wgbh/frontline/film/poisonedwaters/.
docu series Frontline. It is a 2 hour long adventure into America’s clean water act and
what that has resulted in. It’s main idea is to show that America hasn’t cleaned our
waters in the way we have wanted to in the past. It explores current and past perils, as
While this source is technically part of a television series, I still believe that it is
valid and helpful to my project. The network is PBS. Due to their reputation and
obligations to their financiers, I can trust that everything they say is well researched and
accurate. The author of the documentary isn’t clear, but I can tell that it is
knowledgeably worded. This makes me think that the intended audience for this source
is the older crowd that tunes into PBS on a normal basis. Meanwhile, the information is
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objective, but in the way of a news article. It is up to each watcher to interpret this and
The makers of this documentary thoroughly foray into reasoning behind poor
water quality, which is part of my project and something that I’m interested in. Watching
this documentary will make me better researched and show the reasons behind my
findings. It hasn’t changed my views, but reaffirms my stance that we need to protect
the ocean!
"Board of Water Supply Agendas & Minutes." Maui County, HI - Official Website.
Web. <http://www.mauicounty.gov/Archive.aspx?AMID=121>.
This source is a database containing the minutes and agenda of every Maui
Board of Water Supply meeting since the year 2000. The website itself is just a list of
pdfs, but inside the documents is where the quality information is located. For the
Agendas, there is a review of everything the board will talk about for the upcoming
meeting. The minutes of each meeting discuss everything that was talked about during
Website, and what is their to falsify about the account of a mundane meeting. That
would be illegal. There is a person who attends the meetings just to take notes. The
information is an account, so it’s purely objective. The target audience isn’t anyone in
I can review the meeting minutes to understand what is currently happening with
water regulations and what has been done in the past. There is so much purdenant
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information for me to find. The one drawback of this source is that it is technically made
by the Board of Water Supply, and a big part of my project is the ocean, two different
things. However, through researching the documents, I find that they intertwine in many
ways.
Sugidono, Chris. "Nearshore water-quality data collection expanded." The Maui News
This source is an article from the Maui News. It is titled “Nearshore Water-Quality
Data Collection Expanded.” The purpose of this article is to report how the group Hui O
Ka Wai Ola, a volunteer group who test ocean water, recently expanded their testing
sites from 36 to 48 along Maui’s southern and western coasts. Simply put, it’s a news
It is commonplace for those who write the news to let their bias slip into their
reporting, but this source looks to be an objective story carved out by the people who
were being interviewed. The author is Chris Sugidono, a staff writer for the Maui News. I
can trust him because of his position at the paper. The intended audience for this piece
is everybody. The Maui News doesn’t aim to please any certain group of people.
Finding this newspaper led me to discovering the group that this article is about. I
think that it would be extremely beneficial to my project if I was able to work with them.
Therefore, reading this news article gave me a new plug of information that I wouldn’t
have had without it. Additionally, this article goes into Maui-specific water problems and
Como Estas? I was wondering whether you'd be willing to look over my senior project with me and give
me some feedback.
I can come by after school anytime if you tell me when and where.
Thanks,
Aidan ”
“ Aloha,
My name is Aidan Griffin and I am a senior at Kihei Charter School in Kihei, Maui. I'm interested in
volunteering and was wondering if this was the right place to email if I wanted to ask a few questions.
Mahalo,
Aidan ”
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● ArcGIS Program
● Laptop
Budget
Resistors $10
Diodes $3
Rectifiers $5-8
PCB $15
Probe $1
Timeline
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Advisor Meeting
Q2W1
Meet With Advisor / Work on Argumentative Essay / Organize parts
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Mentor Meeting / Arg Essay / Build Sensor
Q2W3
Test water in South Maui / Arg Essay
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Test water / Arg Essay
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Arg Essay / Prepare Presentation
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Thanksgiving / Test
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Arg Essay Due / Meet with Advisor
Q2W8
Test / Present
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Test / Document
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Test / Document
Q3W1
Test / Document
Q3W2
Test / Document
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Organize documentation / Begin mapping
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Mapping / Additional testing
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Mapping
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Build Website
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Market Product
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Prepare to present / Meet with advisor
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Prepare Presentation
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Present
Q4W1
Preparing for senior grad defense / sharing with lower grades.
Q4W2
Preparing for senior grad defense / sharing with lower grades.
Q4W3
Preparing for senior grad defense / sharing with lower grades.
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Preparing for senior grad defense / sharing with lower grades.
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Preparing for senior grad defense / sharing with lower grades.
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Grad Defense
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Prepare for exhibition
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Exhibition
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Graduation!
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