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1 Miss G Eugster
Beale, Tara 11DVS 119/ 131
Excellent Excellent
Mature work ethic and ability to think critically have combined to produce commendable
results.
Should continue to develop her ability to make more in-depth connections in her essay
writing.
Excellent Excellent
Committed, independent and skilled student whose examination results reveal the
significant progress she has made in her formal essay writing skills and her extensive
content knowledge of both the Irish and WWI topic.
Jaiya is encouraged to consistently provide more supporting evidence and make more
generalisations and in-depth connections in her essay writing.
Joel is a capable student whose exam result for the causes and consequences essay
demonstrates that he can achieve good results if he puts in the effort, but in order to do so
he must develop more consistency in his study habits.
With more thorough revision Joel will be able to provide more facts and examples in his
responses in his final NCEA examination.
Natalia has made an impressive effort to improve in history as demonstrated in her pleasing
exam results and the confidence she has gained in essay writing.
Thorough preparation for the final NCEA examination will ensure she is able to provide the
depth and supporting evidence required in her external achievement standards.
1 Miss G Eugster
Burger, Ashley 11MCL 125/ 131
Good Inconsistent
Ashley is a polite and personable student who has shown interest in the content of the topics
studied this year, however her practice examination results are not a true reflection of her
ability and did not match the pleasing standard achieved in her two most recent internal
assessments.
Ashley needs to prepare thoroughly for the final NCEA examinations and ensure that she is
able to provide depth in her answers to the shorter questions and the essay.
Quiet, personable student whose examination results demonstrate that she can achieve good
results if she puts in the effort.
Iona needs to continue working on ensuring she is thoroughly prepared for external
examinations by memorising more factual evidence.
Inconsistent Inconsistent
Shay shows interest in the historical content and ideas studied this year and has shown
considerable improvement in his work ethic and homework habits as reflected in his recent
examination results.
Shay should ensure he is prepared to provide more factual evidence in the final NCEA
examination.
Has excellent content knowledge and often makes insightful contributions to class
discussions.
1 Miss G Eugster
Genn, Natalia 11MON 63/ 131
Inconsistent Inconsistent
Good Consistent
Atikah is a quiet and self-motivated student, whose prepared essay in the recent
examination was well structured and demonstrated sound understanding of the content.
Atikah needs to ensure that, in the final NCEA examination, she is able to provide
substantial detailed evidence and examples for both achievement standards.
Has an excellent knowledge of the history content and is prepared to debate issues, testing
ideas in group and class discussion.
Needs to practice preparing formal paragraphs in order to improve the standard of written
responses.
1 Miss G Eugster
Mahuika, Piper 11DVS 124/ 131
Excellent Excellent
Conscientious in all aspects of her work, prepared essay in the recent examination was well
structured and demonstrated sound understanding of the content.
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and take care to follow all assessment
requirements in order to achieve to her potential.
Excellent Excellent
Demonstrated a total commitment to studies, prepares meticulously for assessments and all
aspects of work are of a high standard.
In the final NCEA examinations Kaze needs to provide greater depth of explanation and a
wider range of factual evidence in written responses.
Good Consistent
A conscientious student who regularly contributes to class discussion with insightful and
knowledgeable responses.
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and provide greater depth of explanation and a
wider range of factual evidence in written responses in order to achieve to her potential.
Excellent Consistent
Conscientious in all aspects of her work, prepared essay in the recent examination was well
structured and demonstrated sound understanding of the content.
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and improve written responses by developing
arguments in a logical manner, incorporating more supporting evidence and examples.
1 Miss G Eugster
Prasad, Prashil 11MON 124/ 131
Good Consistent
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and take care to follow all assessment
requirements in order to achieve to his potential.
Excellent Excellent
High achieving student, diligence towards class work and homework has been exemplary.
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and take care to follow all assessment
requirements in order to achieve to her potential.
Needs to carefully interpret exam question and take care to follow all assessment
requirements in order to achieve to her potential.
Inconsistent Inconsistent
1 Miss G Eugster
Wright, Harry (Harrison) 11YA 118/ 131
Shows a keen interest in the subject and internal assessment result suggests he has the
potential to achieve well. Unfortunately, in the recent school examinations answers were
incomplete or not attempted and lacked depth.
Harry needs to develop mature study habits and prepare thoroughly for the final NCEA
examination particularly the essay assessment which he did not attempt in the practice
examination.