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Story Prompt v2
Story Prompt v2
ENGL 205
3/5/16
Audrey Gradzewicz
Marlow’s sword hacked into the stone statue. It may look like an angel, but this monster
had taken 30 of his men already. His eyes burned as he stepped back to survey the three
beheaded statues, their shoulders scraping the red-brown stones of the ally walls. They were
reaching blindly forward now. He blinked for the first time in three minutes, and when he opened
his eyes again, the bodies of the angels were collapsed on the ground, then they disintegrated into
dust as he watched. He closed his eyes and cycled through the visual orbs in his mind. These
were the last ones that had made it to the surface. He knew that these angels would be back, but
He sighed, and replaced his sword in its scabbard. Turning he walked back to the
entrance of the alley, grabbing another sword and a halberd, sheathing the former and leaning the
latter on his shoulder. At the entrance he sighed, took a breath, and drove the butt of the halberd
into the cobble stones of the alley entrance and bowed his head in thanks in front of the weapon.
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Marlow sighed again, and turned to walk back to his house, head bowed. He trudged
through the cobbled back streets, avoiding the crowds, for they would make him feel like he had
failed more people. He had closed the door that they had opened, and banished the last ones to
their plane, but he had lost many of the people who had followed him in that campaign.
Marlow’s clenched fist slammed into the stone wall beside him. “Why. . .” Why was I not
prepared? How could I be prepared? He looked around. no one was in the deserted back streets
at this time of day. Why would they be, especially on a day as bright and lovely as today.
* * *
Marlow woke to hot breath over his bed. “Good Morning, Kyloth.” He said without
“I know you want to sleep, but today you are working with the specialized units.” The
voice rumbled, shaking the bed and the room. Marlow opened his eyes and looked at the gigantic
dragon head, lying beside his bed, its golden scales glinting in the morning sunlight from the
open wall, and the emerald cat’s eye looking at him. Across the room a wood door led deeper
A soft purr from his other side made him grin. “And good morning to you too, Keselth.”
He reached down and lifted the small dragon into his lap as he sat up. After a few minutes he
started to get ready for the day. Stepping behind a screen, he opened a drawer in a large dresser,
pulling out small cloths, a tunic and trousers, and putting them on. All were varying shades of
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brown. Stepping out he looking into the small mirror on the wall. His black hair hung straight
down just past his shoulders. Taking a leather strap, he tied his hair up into a ponytail.
Kyloth withdrew her head from the side of his room and Marlow followed her out. When
he got outside, Kyloth extended a leg and he walked up and onto her broad back, up her neck,
and onto the top of her head. Settling himself between her horns he patted her horns. “Let’s get
going.”
She spread her wings and launched herself into the air. Circling the massive house once,
she flew out over the city. Marlow looked down at the city, the red stone that it was made of
glowed in the mid-morning sun. Kyloth weaved between spires, and people looked up and waved
as she passed overhead. They knew that Marlow was riding on her back, and he stood up and
waved back and the people cheered. He was known to be kind, just, and fair, and he did not stand
They flew to the north side of the city, and landed on a huge tract of hard packed dirt. A
few meters away a dust cloud rose high into the air. Inside was a mass of moving bodies, horns,
hooves, and other extremities. Marlow jumped from Kyloth’s head and moved into the heaving
mass of bodies. A giant spiders leg shot past his face, followed closely in the opposite direction
with a huge hairy fist. The dust was so thick that he could not see 5 feet in front of him. He
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He ran forward, jumping over a flying tail, and sliding under a horse’s body. Turning
sideways he avoided a set of talons. A hoof grazed his back as he rolled between two fighting
bodies. Shouts muffled by the dust filtered through to him as he dodged another giant fist. He
leaped and cartwheeled over a creature with a human upper half and a snake’s tail. In the air he
got to a thinner part of the dust cloud he could see some shapes around him, the hulking form of
Minotaur, the long snake bodies of Lamia, centaurs rearing and kicking, Harpies lashing out with
wing and claw, and the half spider, half human Arachne. Marlow knew that there were many
It’s about time to bring this session to order, he thought. Landing, he dodged around some
hindquarters, over a lashing snake tail, and under another fist. Judging that he had reached about
the center of the melee, he covered his mouth with a piece of cloth, and rocked back on his heels
to avoid a stabbing spider leg. Taking in a deep breath he shouted “LINE UP.” The melee lulled
Suddenly bodies were no longer fighting, but hurrying to line up in orderly rows and
columns. Marlow saw a passing Arachne and vaulted onto his back as he passed. “You were
fighting well, Ardeth.” Ardeth glanced over his shoulder to see why he had gained a weight and
Marlow dropped to the ground as Ardeth came to a stop in the middle of the rank of
Arachne, and walked to the front, nodding and otherwise acknowledging greetings from the
people he passed. “Now I know that you guys like to have fun” he said as he reached the front
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and turned to face the assembled ranks of half human half beasts, “but we need to work on
Keselth, the small dragon, flapped doggedly over to Marlow carrying a heavy leather
satchel. He took the bag and she curled up on his shoulder. “As such, I have taken the time
yesterday to create groups of people and what they need to work on.” He held up the satchel.
“Captains come here and I will give you each a packet to assign people to working groups.” He
smiled at the groans coming from the assembled people. “I know that it is hard, but it will help
you improve.”
Kyloth snorted and rolled her eyes to the far end of the field where some figures were just
coming into view. “I also brought some help. It will make the work more fun and interesting!” as
the group drew closer it became apparent that it was a large group of kids being led by several
The groups gathered and the children dispersed between them to help complete a myriad
of tasks. Marlow worked his way through all of the groups, advising, participating, and
connecting with the kids and the soldiers. One group of minotaurs and children were working on
stacking stones to make small towers. The size of the stones was smaller than the minotaur’s
fingers, and they were having trouble stacking the stones. Another group made of centaurs and
children were having a sideways walking races. All of them were getting their legs tangled and
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This lasted all day and the tasked were completed and mastered. The robed wizards
teleported the kids and half humans back to the city as Marlow rode Kyloth back. “Today was
productive.”
“They were perfect for the tasks that many of the groups were working on. I’m sure that
both the soldiers and the parents appreciate you having them taken care of.” Kyloth tilted her
head slightly, jostling Marlow. As he sat up to something brushed over his head. Instincts made
him duck back down, and curiosity made him reach up and grab. His hand felt stone and he was
no longer on Kyloth’s head. Looking up he saw he was hanging onto the foot of one of the
gargoyles that sat atop one of the churches. He knew for a fact that they were not enchanted and
The gargoyle looked down to see the weight it had gained and snarled. It spun in the air
and Marlow could not hang on. Still spinning he tried to get a sense of where he was going to
land. By the time he got a fix on where he was landing the slate roof was only 100 feet away, and
he was too late to try to slow down. In the few seconds he had he maneuvered so that he would
be rolling down the roof to reduce the damage to his body as much as possible.
Impact.
The roof collapsed from the force hitting it, and so did the wood floor below it. He went
through two more floors before one held. Marlow tried to move out of the path of the falling
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debris above him, but one of his legs was not responding so he was only half way off the pile of
rock and wood before the rest of the ceiling and floors slammed down around him. As the floor
gave way the carpet of the room ripped, and as he fell through he managed to grab a strip,
Marlow managed to swing to the side of the rubble pile, but as soon as he hit the floor he
collapsed, his right leg folding weirdly. With the adrenaline still pumping through his veins, he
started to take stock of his injuries. He tried to move his left arm, but it was not responding. It
felt like he had shattered the top part of his bone from landing on it. On the other hand he had
dislocated his right hip, and that was going to be a problem. Feeling his chest, he had at least one
broken rib. He was lucky. It had not stabbed into his lung, and no other bones had broken. Aside
from that he had several jagged pieces of stone and wood sticking out of him in various places
Laying back, he steeled himself for what needed to be done. Using his right hand, he
grabbed his right leg and violently rammed it back into place. He let his breath hiss between his
teeth.
Suddenly a scream echoed through the house. He looked to the door of the room to see
the disappearing hem of a maid’s skirt. The scream continued to echo through the halls as he sat
up and arranged his leg into a more recognizable state. As he finished, a huge shape appeared in
a window of the room, opened the window, reached in and scooped him up, carrying him out of
the second floor of the building, and into the night as screams continued to echo through he halls
of the house.
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Looking up he saw it was a statue from the colosseum, three stories tall, a legend
remembered in stone. But this one was moving. The colosseum was as protective of their statues
as the church. This one carried twin swords, one of which was sheathed to carry Marlow.
“Who . . . are . . . you?” Marlow managed to crock out between the jolts of pain he
* * *
Marlow woke in a strange room. sitting over him was one of the statues of the many gods
“I am his likeness, yes.” The statue motioned to another figure in the room. A nun stepped
into Marlow’s view holding a cup, and held it to Marlow’s lips. “Drink.” Marlow sipped
gratefully at the water in the cup, and immediately felt stronger. As he sat up, the nun backed
away, bowing.
He was in no pain. He threw away the thin cover on him, and discovered that all of his
cuts, bruises, and broken bones were gone. Not a trace was left. His arm had been healed and
“I know you have questions, and I am willing to answer them, but first there is a story
that may answer many of them.” The statue of Diath said. “I will start with something that you
may or may not have realized. There is a hidden war happening even as we speak. This war is
taking place between the humanoid statues and the non-humanoid statues.”
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“Are you from this plane of existence?” Marlow asked.
“Yes.” The statue of Diath said. “we are not the same as those Time Eaters.”
“Time Eaters?”
“Now that is a more complicated question. I do not have an answer for that, but I have a
theory, the creators of the statue leave just a small piece of life in all the statues they craft. This
also feeds into the reason for the war. The statues that are made in the close likeness of a
civilized creature also take a little bit of soul. Those statues that were not made in a close
likeness of a civilized creature do not have this and are looking to fill this void by killing those
“So the statue of the founder of the Ten Swords clan has been fighting with you?”
“Yes until a few nights ago, when he sacrificed himself to save a group of new statues.”
Marlow sat back and laughed. “There is a legend in our clan. It talks about how the clan
was created, but one part that I really enjoyed when I was young was how the first leader would
stand behind, protecting, holding back, and stopping any force while a group of innocent people
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ran away. A few days after they were sure he had died, he would come strolling up to wherever
they had stopped, smiling. He was very good a defying all expectation, and making it out alive.”
“I am assuming you want me to coordinate your troops and the clan head used to be your
general. He was very good and lead you to many great victories. Now you hope his blood will be
the same. I would guess that you have seen my work. The clan head was many times better than
me.” Marlow looked into the statues eyes. “He will be back. No one can beat his will to survive,
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