TIME SKYPE NAME SKYPE ID VIDEO MATERIAL FEEDBACK

4:00 kuni kunihiko.toda YES PROOFREADING Hello Kuni-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.
1538/565
*OVERALL*
You were able to construct good sentences.

*VOCABULARY*
acquire - to get something that is important to you in your job

*GRAMMAR*
You said: Has guided numerous audits and bachelor of the professional
auditors training course.
Correct: Has guided numerous audits and has acquired a bachelor of
professional auditors training course.

You said: Has participated the OIML R49 technical committee as an Israel
representative.
Better: Has participated *in* the OIML R49 technical committee as an Israel
representative.

You said: The applicant stated the following regarding traveling: "I am unable
to travel to Islamic countries".
Better: The applicant stated that *he won’t be able to travel to Islamic
countries. *

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!

4:30 HIKO live:yos.ishiyama YES JISSEN 6-3-4 JISSEN

0/0 Student
-IT consultant
-works in Tokyo
-lives in Saitama
-likes traveling (Singapore, Australia, Italy, Taiwan)

Hello Hiko-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE- 3*
You were able to understand and use the expressions.

*VOCABULARY*
You were familiar with the expressions used in the lesson.
 *GRAMMAR*
You said: I don’t have the experience very much…
Better: I don’t have *much experience in* …

You said: If a project is delay…

Better: If a project is *delayed* …

You said: To solve this problem, we’re increasing the number of air
conditioning units at the factory.
Correct: To solve this problem, we’re *considering* increasing the number
of air conditioning units at the factory.

*PRONUNCIATION*
apology – [ah-PO-lo-jee]
solve
available
filing – [FAY-ling]

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

5:00 NAO SAN naohiro202 YES JISSEN 6-1-1/FC JISSEN

36/3 Student
-29 y/o
-mechanical engineer; designing new machine/parts; help in
assembly/adjustment/installation (6 and a half year; 1st job)
-belongs a to developing departments
-cooking, doing household chores, traveling, playing with his daughter
-has 2 daughters – 15 y/o, 6 y/o
-1st daughter (stepdaughter)

Hello Nao-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE-3*
You were able to understand the expressions.

*VOCABULARY*
What do you do here?

*GRAMMAR*
You said: I am mechanical engineer.
Correct: I am *a* mechanical engineer.

You said: I have been working here 6 and a half years…

Correct: I have been working here *for* 6 and a half years…
 You said: Most important thing is to face
Better:

You said: He plans publicity strategies and campaigns.

Correct: *She* ( Kate ) plans publicity strategies and campaigns.

You said: She was a broadcasting communication network.

Better: She *used to work at a* broadcasting communication network.

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

5:30 KAEDE live:chocokae24 YES Go for it! 2 YL STUDENT
Specific Material or ASK HOMEWORK
Info: Lesson 68 -
99/4
What would you
like for your Student (KAY-de)
birthday? (Writing) -17 y/o
Notes: Page No.7 -3rd yr high school
Exercise No. Item -lives in Niigata
No. -dancing (classic ballet); started learning ballet since 2 y/o

*COMPREHENSION-4*
-you were able to understand the lesson

*ACCURACY-3*
You said: I hope we can give you a gift for your birthday.
Correct: I hope we can *meet again. *

You said: Thank you for the letter about your birthday party.
Better: Thank you for *inviting me to your party.*

You typed: I'm looking forward to going the party.

Correct: I'm looking forward to going *to* the party.

*FLUENCY-3*
-you sometimes hesitated in answering questions

*ATTITUDE-5*
-you actively participated during the lesson
 *MISPRONUNCIATION*
-none

*SELF-EVALUATION*
-3

*HOMEWORK*
-done

6:00 Maki live:x00maki YES DNA INT-ADV

Matsumura NEW RJ STUD
2/1
Student
-lives in the suburbs of Tokyo
-English teacher
-likes animals -especially ducks
-likes eating and traveling
-married but with no kids
-plays piano, flute

Hello Maki-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to understand the article and you were able to give relevant
answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
role play - pretending to be someone else, especially as part of learning a
new skill
comfortable in (one’s) own skin (idiom) – to be confident
sure of oneself - very confident of one's own abilities or views

*GRAMMAR*
You said: She plans to use to distribute more dolls and to
produce new Simply Zoe dolls.
Correct: She *plans to* distribute more dolls and to
produce new Simply Zoe dolls. / She plans *to use it for
 the distribution* of more dolls and *the production of
*the new Simply Zoe dolls.
You said: They uses Lines…
Correct: They *use* Line…

*PRONUNCIATION*
Nickelodeon

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

6:30 mochiki yuneko live:mochiki_family YES FC
-used to be an instructor (making medical documents)
-retired 5 years ago
69/14 -involved in making textbooks; company called her to make new textbooks
again (last February)

Hello Nene-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to express your thoughts well.

*VOCABULARY*
It’s never too late.

*GRAMMAR*
You said: Maybe I said you…
Correct: Maybe I *told* you…

You said: The company I belong to have to make a new books…

Correct: The company I *belonged to, has to make new* books…

You said: I think almost has finished.

Correct: I think almost *all parts are* finished.

You said: She like fish.

Correct: She *likes* fish.

You said: She have to go…

Correct: She *has* to go…

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

8:00 Kimi kimitaka.watanabe YES Jissen Business JISSEN
Lv.3 HIGH-BEG 1
57/4 Specific Material or
Info: Level3
Chapter1 Unit1 - Student
Pleased to Meet -lives in Chiba
You -married
Notes: Page No. 3 -has 2 sons – 9 and 3 y/o
Exercise No. 4 -watching movies (action movies-MIB, Die hard) and reading books
(Step 1) Item No. (suspense novels-Keigo Higashino), likes
-overseas salesman and manager
-works at Dipsol chemical company (for 18 years)

Hello Kimi-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE- 4*
You were able to understand and use the expressions well.

*VOCABULARY*
colleague - coworker

*GRAMMAR*
You said: My hobby is watching movies and reading books.
Correct: My hobbies are watching movies and reading books.

You said: Have you ever been go to Japan?

Correct: Have you ever been to Japan?

You said: My home is far to Tokyo Disney Land.

Correct: My home is far *from* Tokyo Disney Land.

You said: He is nervousness. Do not trust

better: *He discriminates others and he doesn’t like Japanese employees. He
favors foreign people/employees. *

You said: He live in United states for 17 years.

Correct: He *lived in the* United States for 17 years.

You said: He don’t like Japanese.

Better: He *doesn’t* like Japanese.

*PRONUNCIATION*
teammates
Ronald
 Robert
Carol

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

8:30 Kimi kimitaka.watanabe YES Jissen Business JISSEN

Lv.3 HIGH-BEG 1
57/4 Specific Material or
Info: Level3
Hello Kimi-san,
Chapter1 Unit1 -
Pleased to Meet You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.
You
Notes: Page No. 3 *OVERALL*
Exercise No. 4 You were able to introduce yourself to a coworker.
(Step 1) Item No.
*VOCABULARY*
occupation - job (e.g. accountant, teacher, businessman, etc.)

*GRAMMAR*
You said: Yes, I am web designer.
Correct: Yes, I am *a* web designer.

*PRONUNCIATION*
occupation [ok-yuh-PEY-shuh]

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!

9:00 AYA ayastar50 YES Jitsuyo Eikaiwa Lv. JISSEN
6
98/3 Specific Material or Hello Aya-san,
Info: Level 6
Chapter 1 Lesson You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.
10
*OVERALL*
You were able to give relevant answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
10 pieces per item

*GRAMMAR*
You said: It depends on the people to join the party.
Correct: It depends on the *number of* people *who will* join the party.

You said: We have to think about how decorate the room.

Correct: We have to think *on how we should* decorate the room.

You said: We only buy each ten item.

Better: We *should only buy 10 pieces per item.*
 You said: I can image the situation.
Correct: I can *imagine* the situation.

You said: She must be want to many kinds of bags.

Correct: *Maybe she wants to have* many kinds of bags.

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!

9:30 YUKIO yukimaru0802 YES Jitsuyo Eikaiwa Lv. Hello Yukio-san,
6
Specific Material or You did well in today's Jitsuyo Eikaiwa lesson. Let me share today's lesson
41/3 feedback.
Info: Level 6
Chapter 6 Lesson
*Personalized FEEDBACK*
9 - My brothers
were both jocks, *RANGE*
but I was a drama You said: It was long long day ago.
club nerd. Correct: It was *a* long long *time* ago.
Notes: Page No.
Exercise No.3 You said: I don’t have their list now.
(done) Item No. Correct: I don’t have their *contact details* now.

*ACCURACY*
You said: Every morning there is a few people…
Correct: Every morning, there *are* a few people…

You said:Hans was more of science nerd.

Correct: Hans was more of *a* science nerd.

1. You said: She was game nerd.

Correct: She was *a* video game nerd.

You said: But the track and field club lack all the members.
Correct: But the track and field club *lacked some* members.

*FLUENCY*
You only had minimal pauses.

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

10:00 taka motetakayo YES Jissen Business JISSEN

Lv.6
249/30 Specific Material or Student
Info: Level6
Chapter1 Unit3 - -has a daughter -11 y/o; son – 6 months old
Company -job: cigarette development division
Background -has been working in the company for 11 years
 Notes: Page No.
Exercise No.3 Item Hello Taka-san,
No.
You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE- 3*
You were able to give relevant answers to the questions.

*VOCABULARY*
appliance - a device, machine, or piece of equipment, esp. an electrical
one that is used in the home, such as a refrigerator or washing machine

*GRAMMAR*
You said: I can hardly English.
Correct: I can hardly *speak* English.

You said: LogicTechno Corporation founded in 1978.

Correct: LogicTechno Corporation *was* founded in 1978.

You said: LogicTechno was founder by John Miller and Susan Lewis.
Correct: LogicTechno was *founded* by John Miller and Susan Lewis.

*PRONUNCIATION*
realized
broadened
appliances – [ap-PLA-yan-ses]

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!

10:30 Ken nakajima.kenichi2011 YES JISSEN 4-3-1 JISSEN
SHORT INTRO
29/31 SPEAK SLOWLY
70-30

Student
-lives in Tokyo
-46 y/o
-civil servant
-will be dispatched to another organization; will work in Thailand next year

Hello Ken-san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL SCORE- 4*
You were able to understand and answer questions about the meeting
agenda.
*VOCABULARY*
agenda – the things you talk about in a meeting
figures – amount of money received by a company
concise - expressing what needs to be said without unnecessary words;
short and clear

*GRAMMAR*
You said: Our manager of the team gave the presentation.
Correct: Our *team manager* gave the presentation.

You said: We discussed some of the company’s strategies.

Correct: We discussed some of the company’s *sales* strategies.

You said: It was about new product.

Better: It was about *the* new product.

You said: We discussed new product’s design.

better: We discussed *the* new product’s design.

You said: We discussed our target of this year.

Correct: We discussed our *targets for* this year.

*PRONUNCIATION*
You were able to pronounce your words clearly.

Have a nice evening ahead and see you next time!

YL STUDENTS
ALWAYS ASK ABOUT THE HOMEWORK
*COMPREHENSION*
-

*ACCURACY*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*FLUENCY*
-

*ATTITUDE*
-

*MISPRONUNCIATION*
-

*SELF-EVALUATION*
-

*HOMEWORK*
-

Hi ,

You did well in today's class. Please see today's lesson feedback below:

1) Comprehension -
You were able to understand the lesson well.

2) Accuracy -
You made some mistakes like:

3) Fluency -
Student hesitated in answering some questions.

4) Attitude -
Student actively participated during the lesson.

5) Homework -

6) Self Evaluation

7) Mispronunciation:

Please do not forget your homework. See you in our next lesson.
JISSEN
Hello -san,

You did well in today's lesson. Let me share with you the lesson feedback.

*OVERALL*
You were able to use the expressions fluently.
For you to get a score of 4, please practice your L&R sounds.

*VOCABULARY*

*GRAMMAR*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Better:

You said:
better:

You said:
Better:

*PRONUNCIATION*

Have a nice day ahead and see you next time!

JITSUYO EIKAIWA
Hello -san,

You did well in today's Jitsuyo Eikaiwa lesson. Let me share today's lesson
feedback.

*Personalized FEEDBACK*

*RANGE*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*ACCURACY*
You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

You said:
Correct:

*FLUENCY*
Pauses: SOMETIMES in between sentences
Fillers:

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