English Talian Hayat

2 | TALIAN HAYAT BAHASA INGGERIS PENULISAN
SECTION A
INFORMATION TRANSFER
PINDAH MAKLUMAT
Step What To Do?

Langkah Apa Yang Perlu Dilakukan?
1 SCAN (IMBAS)
 Read the question and study the given stimulus carefully
Baca soalan dan kaji bahan rangsangan dengan teliti
 Match the identical or almost identical words or phrases
Padankan perkataan-perkataan atau frasa-frasa yang sama atau
hampir sama
2 SKIM (SINGKIR)
 After matching, eliminate the unwanted letters or words
Selepas memadankan perkataan-perkataan atau frasa-frasa,
singkirkan huruf-huruf or perkataan-perkataan yang tidak perlu
3 TRANSFER (PINDAH)
 Transfer and rewrite the chosen words neatly and accurately
Pindah dan tulis semula perkataan-perkataan yang dipilih dengan
kemas dan tepat
4 PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

 Identify the grammatical, structural, spelling, and punctuation errors
Kenalpasti kesalahan tatabahasa, struktur, ejaan, dan tanda baca
5 REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

 Insert the appropriate letters or words into the sentences
Masukkan huruf atau perkataan yang sesuai ke dalam ayat-ayat
 Remove the inappropriate letters or words from the sentences
Singkir huruf atau perkataan yang tidak sesuai daripada ayat-ayat
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TIPS
Study the sticker notes below.

Teliti nota-nota lekat di bawah.
Source : BK3 (JPN Terengganu)
Use the information to complete the text.

Gunakan maklumat untuk melengkapkan teks.
Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books
can be purchased _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only
pay for these books using _____________. Purchasing an e-book is faster
compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people
____________ to read e-books. This is because the materials can be downloaded
and accessed anywhere. E-books are also ______________ because they reduce
the numbers of trees being cut down. It allows us to bring the whole library with us
wherever we go. They are ______________ popularity because of its convenience.
Source : BK3 (JPN Terengganu)
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STEP 1 > SCAN (IMBAS)
 Match the identical or almost identical keywords

Padankan kata-kata kunci yang sama atau hampir sama
2 3
4 7
8 9
6 10
can be purchased (1) _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores (2). We can
only pay for these books using ___________ (3). Purchasing an e-book is faster (3)
compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore (6). Nowadays, more people
_____________ to read e-books (5). This is because the materials can be
downloaded and accessed (7) anywhere. E-books are also ______________
because they reduce the numbers of trees being cut down (6). It allows us to bring
the whole library (8) with us wherever we go. They are ______________ popularity
(9) because of its convenience (10).
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STEP 2 > SKIM (PENCIL)
 Eliminate the unwanted letters and words

Potong huruf-huruf dan perkataan-perkataan yang tidak perlu
2 3
4 7
8 9
6 10
can be purchased (1) _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores (2). We
can only pay for these books using ___________ (3). Purchasing an e-book is faster
(3) compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore (6). Nowadays, more people
_____________ to read e-books (5). This is because the materials can be
downloaded and accessed (7) anywhere. E-books are also ______________
because they reduce the numbers of trees being cut down (6). It allows us to bring
the whole library (8) with us wherever we go. They are ______________ popularity
(9) because of its convenience (10).
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STEP 3 > TRANSFER (PINDAH)
 Copy exactly the chosen words

Salin perkataan-perkataan yang dipilih seperti asal
 purchase on the internet  using credit, debit cards
 publishers or e-bookstores  more faster
 choose to read e-books  environmentally friendly
 from bookstores  can be downloaded and accessed
 bring whole library  gaining popularity
 numbers of trees being cut down  because of the convenience
can be purchased on the internet from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only pay
for these books using credit cards, debit cards. Purchasing an e-book is faster
compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people choose
to read e-books. This is because the materials can be downloaded and accessed
anywhere. E-books are also environmentally friendly because they reduce the
numbers of trees being cut down (6). It allows us to bring the whole library (8) with us
wherever we go. They are gaining popularity because of its convenience (10).
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STEP 4 > PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)
can be purchased on the internet  from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only
pay for these books using credit cards, debit cards X. Purchasing an e-book is
faster compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people
choose to read e-books. This is because the materials can be downloaded and
accessed anywhere. E-books are also environmentally friendly  because they
reduce the numbers of trees being cut down. It allows us to bring the whole library
with us wherever we go. They are gaining  popularity because of its convenience.
STEP 5 > REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)
can be purchased on the internet  from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only
pay for these books using credit cards or debit cards . Purchasing an e-book is
faster compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people
choose to read e-books. This is because the materials can be downloaded and
accessed anywhere. E-books are also environmentally friendly  because they
reduce the numbers of trees being cut down. It allows us to bring the whole library
with us wherever we go. They are gaining  popularity because of its convenience.
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QUESTION B(i)
LISTING
SENARAIKAN
Step What To Do?

1 SCAN (IMBAS)
 Read the question and study the given stimulus carefully
Baca soalan dan kaji bahan rangsangan dengan teliti
 Match the identical or almost identical words, phrases, or sentences
Padankan perkataan-perkataan atau frasa-frasa yang sama atau
hampir serupa
2 SKIM (SINGKIR)
 Eliminate the unwanted words, phrases or sentences
Singkirkan perkataan-perkataan, frasa-frasa atau ayat-ayat yang
tidak diperlukan
3 TRANSFER (PINDAH)
 Rewrite the chosen words, phrases, or sentences neatly and
accurately
Tulis semula perkataan-perkataan, frasa-frasa, atau ayat-ayat
yang dipilih dengan kemas dan tepat
4 PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

 Identify the grammatical, structural, spelling, and punctuation errors
Semak kesalahan tatabahasa, struktur, ejaan, dan tanda baca
5 REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

 Insert the appropriate letters, words, or phrases into sentences or
remove the inappropriate letters, words, or phrases from the
sentences
Masukkan huruf-huruf, perkataan-perkataan, frasa-frasa yang
sesuai ke dalam ayat atau singkirkan huruf atau perkataan yang
tidak sesuai daripada ayat
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TIPS
Study the sticky notes below and answer the questions that follow:-
Kaji nota lekat di bawah dan jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya:-
Source: BK3 (JPN Terengganu)

List three benefits of recycling
Senaraikan tiga faedah kitar semula
i. ______________________________________________________
ii. ______________________________________________________
iii. ______________________________________________________
Recycling becomes easy once you know how to go about it. There are three different
recycling bins. Blue bin is for recyclable waste, brown bin is for kitchen and garden
waste, and green bin is for non-recyclable waste. Papers and cans are recyclable
waste, vegetable peelings and dried leaves are kitchen and garden waste, and tires
and broken bulbs are non-recyclable waste.
Fill in the blank with correct answer. One has been done for you.
Isikan tempat kosong dengan jawapan yang betul. Satu contoh telah diberikan.
Colour Category Type of waste
Blue recyclable paper and _____________
__________ non-recyclable tyres and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and ___________ vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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STEP 1 > SCAN (IMBAS)
Study the sticky notes below and answer the questions that follow:-
Kaji nota lekat di bawah dan jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya:-
Match
(Padan)
Source: BK3 (JPN Terengganu)
i. ______________________________________________________
ii. ______________________________________________________
iii. ______________________________________________________
waste, vegetable peelings and dried leaves are kitchen and garden waste, and tires
Match
(Padan)
Fill in the blank with correct answer. One has been done for you.
Blue recyclable paper and _____________
__________ non-recyclable tyres and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and ___________ vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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STEP 2 > SKIM (PENCIL)

i. ______________________________________________________
ii. ______________________________________________________
iii. ______________________________________________________
waste. Vegetable peelings and dried leaves are kitchen and garden waste, and tires
Blue Recyclable paper and _____________
_______ non-recyclable tires and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and ______ vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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STEP 3 > TRANSFER (PINDAH)

Senaraikan tiga faedah mengitar semula
i. . Less wastage
ii. . Save the environment
iii. . Reduce the greenhouse gases
Blue Recyclable paper and cans
blue non-recyclable tires and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and garden waste vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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STEP 4 > PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

i. . Less wastage X
ii. . Save the environment X
iii. . Reduce the greenhouse gases X
Blue recyclable paper and cans 
Blue  non-recyclable tires and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and garden waste X vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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STEP 5 > REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

i. Less wastage 
ii. Save the environment 
iii. Reduce the greenhouse gases 
Blue Recyclable paper and cans 
Blue  non-recyclable tires and broken bulbs
Brown kitchen and garden  vegetable peelings and dried leaves
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PRACTICE
Read the passage below.

Baca petikan di bawah.
Upin & Ipin is a highly successful Malaysian television series of

animated shorts. It is produced by Les’ Copaque Production in 2007. It
features the life and adventures of the eponymous twin brothers in a
fictional Malaysian village. Upin & Ipin was first introduced on TV9 on
13 September 2007 as a six-episode Ramadan special. As of 2014, the
series has reached its eighth season. That year, Upin & Ipin series
made debut on Disney Channel Asia. Upin & Ipin is now becoming one
of the Malaysian best animated series ever.
Use the information to complete the poster below.

Gunakan maklumat di atas untuk melengkapkan poster di bawah.
UPIN & IPIN

Produced by
Life and adventures of
___________________
____________________
_
Introduced by TV9 Highly successful

_______________ ____________ series
Debuted on
____________________ in 2014
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QUESTION B(ii)
FORMATTED WRITING
KARANGAN BERFORMAT
Step What To Do?

1 PREWRITE (RANCANG)
 Study the question and given stimulus carefully
Kaji soalan dan maklumat yang diberi dengan teliti
 Underline the keywords, build up and organize the ideas
Gariskan kata-kata kunci, bina dan susun idea-idea
2 DRAFT (PENULISAN AWAL)

 Write 12 simple sentences
Tuliskan 12 ayat mudah
 Join the sentences using appropriate conjunctions
Gabung ayat-ayat menggunakan kata hubung yang sesuai
 Make the sentences complex (if necessary)
Bina ayat kompleks (jika perlu)
3 REVISE (UBAH)
 Enrich the sentences by adding adjectives, adverbs, idioms,
proverbs, or simile
Tambah nilai pada ayat-ayat dengan menyelitkan kata adjektif, kata
adverba, perumpamaan, peribahasa, dan simpulan bahasa
4 EDIT (SUNTING)
 Identify grammatical, structural, spelling, and punctuation errors.
5 PUBLISH (TERBIT)
 Count and indicate the written words
Bilang dan tanda bilangan perkataan yang ditulis
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TIPS
Study the notice below and answer the questions that follow:
Kaji notis di bawah dan jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya:
Source: BK3, JPN Terengganu
Your school is organizing a speech competition entitled “Save Our Environment”.

You will take part in the competition. Write a speech text. In your speech, you must
mention at least three ways to save the environment. Write your answer between 50
and 80 words.
Sekolah kamu akan mengadakan pertandingan pidato bertajuk “Jaga Alam Sekitar
Kita”. Kamu akan mengambil bahagian dalam pertandingan tersebut. Tuliskan satu
ucapan. Di dalam ucapan tersebut, kamu hendaklah menyatakan sekurang-
kurangnya tiga cara untuk menjaga alam sekitar. Panjang karangan kamu hendaklah
antara 50 dan 80 patah perkataan.
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STEP 1 > PREWRITE (RANCANG)
Study the notice below and answer the questions that follow:
Kaji notis di bawah dan jawab soalan-soalan yang berikutnya:
BRAINSTORM
BINCANG
Source: BK3, JPN Terengganu
Text Type Topic
Your school is organizing a speech competition entitled “Save Our Environment”.

You will take part in the competition. Write a speech text. In your speech, you must
mention at least three ways to save the environment. Write your answer between 50
and 80 words.
Main Ideas
Audience
Sekolah kamu akan mengadakan pertandingan pidato bertajuk “Jaga Alam Sekitar
Kita”. Kamu akan mengambil bahagian dalam pertandingan tersebut. Tuliskan satu
ucapan. Di dalam ucapan tersebut, kamu hendaklah menyatakan sekurang-
kurangnya tiga cara untuk menjaga alam sekitar. Panjang karangan kamu hendaklah
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PLANNING WRITING
RANCANG KARANGAN
Writer’s Address (or writer’s email address)

Alamat pengirim (atau alamat email pengirim)
Receiver’s Address (or receiver’s email address)
Alamat penerima (atau alamat emel penerima)
Date and Time
Masa dan Tarikh
Salutation
Salam
Subject/ Reference
Perkara/ Topik
Opening
Pendahuluan
Main Ideas + Supporting Details

Idea-idea utama + keterangan-keterangan
Choice & reasons
Pilihan + sebab
End
Kesimpulan
Closing
Penutup
Signature
Tandatangan
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BRAINSTORM AND BUILD IDEAS

RANCANG DAN BINA IDEA
Greeting Dear ________________

Salam Good ____________ ______________, and _________________
Opening Write 2 sentences
Pembuka Tuliskan 2 ayat
1 Ask about well being/ Express thoughts/ Introduce oneself

Tanya khabar / harapan kepada penerima/ perkenalkan diri
2 Present the purpose
Nyatakan tujuan
Content Write 7 sentences
Idea Tuliskan 7 ayat
3 State the topic sentence/ choice

Nyatakan ayat topic / pilihan
4 Main idea 1 / reason 1
Idea utama 1 / sebab 1
5 Supporting details 1
Keterangan sokongan 1
End Write 3 sentences
Penutup Tuliskan 3 ayat
10 Restate the topic

Nyatakan semula tujuan
11 Post a question / reminder to receiver
Poskan satu soalan / peringatan untuk penerima
12 Close the text
Tutup teks
MORE TIPS >> FUNUSUAL WRITTEN COMMUNICATION
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STEP 2 > DRAFT (PENULISAN AWAL)
+ = Sequence Marker
+ = Time Marker
+ = Clause
S = Subject
V = Verb
O = Object
C = Complement
Simple Sentence
Ayat mudah
+ S V O-C
1 I am Elena.
2 I want to give a speech.
3 The topic is “Saving Our Environment”
4 Environment is very important
5 we must take care of it.
6 First, we should plant trees.
7 They reduce green house gases.
8 Second, we should collect rain water.
9 We can water plants and clean drains.
10 Finally, we must unplug the electrical devices when not

in use.
11 Remember, Environment is our responsibility.
12 That is all from me now.
Note : Band 2 to Band 3
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STEP 3 > REVISE/ ENRICH (TAMBAH NILAI)
+ = Sequence Marker
+ = Time Marker
+ = Clause
S = Subject
V = Verb
O = Object
C = Complement
Compound or Complex?
Ayat majmuk atau ayat kompleks
+ S V O-C
1 I am Elena.
2 I want to give a speech.
3 The topic is “Saving Our Environment”
4 Environment is very important and we must

take care of it.
5 We must take care of it
There are many ways we can do to
save our environment
6 First, we should plant more trees.
7 They helped to reduce green house gases.
9 We can use it to water plants and clean

drains.
10 Finally, we must unplug the electrical devices when
not in use. We are not using
them.
11 Saving our is our responsibility.
environment
12 That is all from me now.
Note : Band 3
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STEP 3 > REVISE/ ENRICH (TAMBAH NILAI)
+ = Sequence Marker
+ = Time Marker
+ = Clause
S = Subject
V = Verb
O = Object
C = Complement
Compound or Complex?
Ayat majmuk atau ayat kompleks
+ S V O-C
1 I am Elena.
2 I want to give a speech entitled “Saving

Our Environment”
take care of it.
4 There are many ways we can do to
protect our environment
5 First, we should plant more trees around our
villages.
6 They helped to reduce green house gases that
causes global warming

drains.
we are are not using them.
10 Consequently, we can save more electrical energy.
11 Remember! Saving our is our responsibility.

environment
12 With that, I conluded my speech.
Note : Band 4 - Band 5
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STEP 4 > EDITING (SUNTING)
+ = Sequence Marker
+ = Time Marker
+ = Clause
S = Subject
V = Verb
O = Object
C = Complement
122 words – Exceeding!!

(Reduce to 80 words)
+ S V O-C
1 I am Elena. 
2 I want to give a speech entitled “Saving

Our Environment” 
take care of it. 
4 There are many ways we can do to
protect our environment 
5 First, we should plant more trees around our
villages. 
6 They helped to green house gases that
reduce causes global warming 
7 Second, we should collect rain water. 

drains. 
we are are not using them. 
10 Consequently, we can save more electrical energy. 
11 Remember! Saving our is our responsibility. 

environment
12 With that, I conluded my speech. 
Note : Band 4
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STEP 5 > PUBLISH (TERBIT)
Dear everyone,
I want to give a speech entitled “Saving Our Enviroment.
There are many ways we can do to save our environment. Firstly, we can
plant more trees in our neighbourhood. They can reduce the effect of global
warming. Seconly, we should collect some rain water. We can use them to water the
plants and clean the drains. Finally, we must switch off the electrical appliances
when they’re not in use.
“Saving Our Environment” is our responsibility. With that I conclude the

speech.
Note : Band 5
(82 words)
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“MAKING A CHOICE AND GIVING REASONS”

BUAT PILIHAN DAN NYATAKAN SEBAB
Your father is planning for a vacation at a local destination. Write a message to him
recommending a perfect place to visit. You may include all the relevant information
about the place. Write your message between 50 and 80 words.
Bapa kamu sedang merancang untuk bercuti di sebuah destinasi tempatan. Tuliskan
satu mesej kepadanya dan cadangkan satu tempat menarik untuk dikunjungi. Kamu
boleh menggunakan maklumat berkaitan tentang tempat tersebut. Panjang jawapan
kamu hendaklah antara 50 dan 80 patah perkataan.
Destination Cameron Kota Bharu Kuala Lumpur

Highlands
Distance 480km 150km 380km
Weather cold hot hot
Places to visit Strawberry Farm Pasar Siti Khadijah KLCC
Boh Plantations KB Mall Sunway Pyramid
Places to stay Desa Anthurium Hotel Perdana Hotel Vistana
(RM250 per night) (RM180 per night) (RM200 per night)
Dear Dad,
I would recommend _______________ because ____________________________
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Your father is planning for a vacation at a local destination. Write a message to him
recommending a perfect place to visit. You may include all the relevant information
about the place. Write your message between 50 and 80 words.
Bapa kamu sedang merancang untuk bercuti di sebuah destinasi tempatan. Tuliskan
satu mesej kepadanya dan cadangkan satu tempat menarik untuk dikunjungi. Kamu
boleh menggunakan maklumat berkaitan tentang tempat tersebut. Panjang jawapan
Main Idea
kamu hendaklah antara 50 dan 80 patah perkataan.
Isi utama
Cameron Highlands Kota Bharu Kuala Lumpur

Distance 480km 150km 380km
Weather cold hot hot
Places to visit Strawberry Farm Pasar Siti Khadijah KLCC
Boh Plantations KB Mall Sunway Pyramid
Places to stay Desa Anthurium Hotel Perdana Hotel Vistana
(RM250 per night) (RM180 per night) (RM200 per night)
Dear Dad,
I would recommend _______________ because ____________________________
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BRAINSTORM AND BUILD IDEAS

RANCANG DAN BINA IDEA
Main Ideas / Choice Supporting Details / Reasons

Idea Utama / Pilihan Keterangan/ Sebab
I would choose _______________ because ______________________

1)
2)
3)
4)
5)
6)
7)
8)
9)
10)
11)
12)
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SIMPLE SENTENCE
AYAT MUDAH
Sentence Main Ideas / Choice Supporting Details / Reasons

Ayat Idea Utama / Pilihan Keterangan / Sebab
1 I would recommended because of many reasons.
Cameron Highland
2 I like Cameron Highlands.  It has many amazing places.

 It has a cold weather.
 I have never been there before.
 It has a magnificent scenery.
3 We can visit many places.  We can go to Strawberry Farm, Boh

Plantation, and Rose Garden.
4 We can visit Strawberry  There, we can pick the strawberries.

Farm.  We can eat strawberries.
 We can buy the strawberries.
5 We can go to Boh  We can see how tea is made.

Plantations.  We can buy some tea.
 We can buy some souvenirs.
 We can take some pictures.
6 We can stay in Hotel  It is located in Tanah Rata.

Anthurium.  It is a state-of-the-art hotel.
 It is a luxury hotel.
 It is near Strawberry Farm.
7 At RM ______, the price is  It is reasonable, for Cameron Highland

considerably low. is a popular destination.
 It is reasonable.
 It is affordable.
 You afford it.
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8 Even though it is far,  It is worth-choosing.

 It is a perfect place for vacation.
 Cameron Highlands offes value for
money.
9 I’m certain Cameron Highlands is the prefect place

I think for a holiday.
In my opinion, It is the perfect place to visit.
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This book is property of

ABDULLAH BIN MAT NOOR
Attempt to copy or redistribute any part
of this book by any means is prohibited.
Softcopy Price: RM15.00
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STEP 3 > REVISE (UBAH)
Dear Dad,
I would choose Cameron Highland because I like the place.
I would choose Cameron Highland I like it very much.
There are many exciting places in Cameron Highlands.
Cameron Highlands is a very exciting place.
We can go to Strawberry Farm.
We can visit Strawberry Farm, Boh Plantations, and Rose Garden.
We can eat strawberries.
We can pick and eat some fresh strawberries at Strawberry Farm.
We can visit Boh Plantations.
We can buy and drink fragrant tea at Boh Plantations.
We can take pictures of roses at Rose Garden.
At Rose Garden, we can take pictures with varieties of roses.
We can stay in Hotel Anthurium.
We can overnight in Hotel Anthurium.
The price is RM250 per night.
The price is high but it is reasonable. Join
Even though Cameron
The distance is 480km.
Highlands is far away, I am
Cameron Highlands is 480km away. certain that it is the perfect
place to visit.
The weather is cold.
Cameron Highlands has a cold climate.
I think Cameron Highland is perfect.
I am certain that Cameron Highland is the perfect place to visit.
Note: Band 4 to Band 5
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STEP 4 > EDIT (SUNTING)
I would choose Cameron Highlands because I had never been there before.
Cameron Highland is a cold and exciting place. Firstly, we can go to Strawberry
Farm. There, we can pick and eat some fresh strawberries. Secondly, we can visit
Boh Plantations. We can buy and drink fragrant tea. Next. We can stay in hotel
Anthurium. The price is RM250 per night and it is reasonable for it is a popular
destination. However, Cameron Highlands is 480km away from our town. I think it is
a perfect place to visit.
(90 words)
Note: B3
(No paragraph, exceeding word limit)
I would choose Cameron Highlands because I had never been there

before. Cameron Highland is a cold and exciting place.
Firstly, we can go to Strawberry Farm. There, we can pick and eat some
fresh strawberries. Secondly, we can visit Boh Plantations. We can buy and drink
fragrant tea. Next. We can stay in Hotel Anthurium. The price is RM250 per night
and it is reasonable, for it is a popular destination.
However, Cameron Highlands is 480km away from our town. I think it is a

perfect place to visit.
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Note : Band 4 - 5
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SECTION C
GUIDED WRITING
KARANGAN BERPANDU
Step What To Do?

1 PREWRITE (RANCANG)
 Study the question and given stimulus carefully
Kaji soalan dan maklumat yang diberi dengan teliti
 Underline the keywords, build up and organize the ideas
Gariskan kata-kata kunci, bina dan susun idea-idea
2 DRAFT (PENULISAN AWAL)

 Write 15 simple sentences
Tuliskan 15 ayat mudah
 Join the sentences using appropriate conjunctions
Gabung ayat-ayat menggunakan kata hubung yang sesuai
 Make the sentences complex (if necessary)
Bina ayat kompleks (jika perlu)
3 REVISE (UBAH)
 Enrich the sentences by adding adjectives, adverbs, idioms,
proverbs, or simile
Tambah nilai pada ayat-ayat dengan menyelitkan kata adjektif, kata
adverba, perumpamaan, peribahasa, dan simpulan bahasa
4 EDIT (SUNTING)
 Identify grammatical, structural, spelling, and punctuation errors.
5 PUBLISH (TERBIT)
 Count and indicate the written words
Bilang dan tanda bilangan perkataan yang ditulis
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TYPE OF WRITING
JENIS KARANGAN
Types Narrative Descriptive

Jenis Cerita Keterangan
Definition Tell about a story, often about Describe a thing, event, person,
Takrif one’s experience or process
Memberita satu cerita, biasanya Menerangkan sesuatu benda,
tentang pengalaman seseorang. peristiwa, seseorang, atau proses
Plot  Exposition  Thesis statement

Jalan Cerita Setting – character, place, Sentence that states the main
time, event idea and controls the whole
Set watak, tempat, masa, dan ideas of essay. Often, it is a
kejadian writer’s opinion or judgment
based on his/ her personal
 Rising Action experience
Chronological events lead to Ayat yang menyatakan
climax idea utama dan dapat
Susunan kejadian sebelum mengawal semua idea di
klimaks (kejadian utama) dalam sesebuah karangan.
Selalunya ia adalah
 Climax pandangan penulis
Turning point of the story berdasarkan pengalaman.
Kejadian utama
 Body
 Falling Action Contains the main ideas and
Chronological events after the supporting details.
climax Mengandungi idea utama dan
Susunan kejadian selepas keterangan sokongan.
klimaks (kejadian utama)
 Restate
 Resolution Summary of the ideas
Lesson learned (moral value) Ringkasan seluruh idea
from the story
Pelajaran (nilai murni )
daripada cerita.
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TYPE OF STIMULI
JENIS BAHAN RANGSANGAN
Type Stimulus Example

Jenis Bahan rangsangan Contoh

1 A composite picture
Satu gambar komposit ?
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan

Satu gambar komposit ?
 Questions
Soalan-soalan

Gambar komposit ?
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan
 Begin your story with:
Mulakan cerita kamu dengan:
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
4 Composite picture
Gambar komposit ?
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan
 End your story with:
Akhirkan cerita kamu dengan:

5 Series pictures
Gambar-gambar bersiri ?
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan

6 Series pictures
 Questions
Soalan-soalan
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7 Series pictures
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan
 Begin your story with:
Mulakan cerita kamu dengan:

8 Series pictures
 Words
Perkataan-perkataan
 End your story with:
Akhirkan cerita kamu dengan:

9 Series pictures
 Blank pictures (?)
Gambar kosong (?)
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TIPS
Write a story about the picture below. You may use the given words to help you.
Write in between 80 and 100 words.
Tuliskan satu cerita tentang gambar di bawah. Kamu boleh menggunakan

perkataan-perkataan yang diberikan untuk membantu kamu. Panjang karangan
kamu hendaklah antara 80 hingga 100 patah perkataan.
Yusof – helped – father –curtains
Elena – flowers – Hakim – cushion

covers
Amar – mother – kitchen - cooking
Begin your story with:

It was Sunday morning. Yusof and his family were ……………………….
Pada suatu pagi Ahad, Yusof dan keluarganya berada …………………………….
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USING QUESTION LEADS

MENGGUNAKAN SOALAN PANDU

Mulakan cerita anda dengan:
1. Where were Yusof and his family? 9. What was Hakim doing?
Dimanakah Yusof dan keluarganya Apakah yang sedang dilakukan oleh
berada? Hakim?
2. What did they do? 10. Who is Amar?
Apakah yang dilakukan oleh mereka? Siapakah Amar?
3. Where were Yusof and his father? 11. Where was Amar?
Dimanakah Yusof dan bapanya Dimanakah Amar berada?
berada? 12. What was Amar doing?
4. What did Yusof do? Apakah yang sedang dilakukan oleh
Apakah yang dilakukan oleh Yusof? Amar?
5. What did Yusof’s father do? 13. What was Amar’s mother doing?
Apakah yang dilakukan oleh bapa Apakah yang sedang dilakukan oleh
Yusof? ibu Amar?
6. Who is Elena? 14. What did Amar’s mother cook?
Siapakah Elena? Apakah yang dimasak oleh ibu
7. What was Elena doing? Amar?
Apakah yang sedang dilakukan oleh 15. Did Yusof’s parents thank Yusof and
Elena? his siblings?
8. Who is Hakim? Adakah ibu bapa Yusof berterima
Siapakah Hakim? kasih kepada Yusof dan adik
beradiknya?
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USING SIMPLE SUBSTITION TABLE

MENGGUNAKAN JADUAL GANTIAN MUDAH

Sentence Subject Verb Object - Complement
1 Yusof and his family were at home.
2 They tidied the house.
3 Yusof and his father were in the living room.
4 Yusof helped his father.
5 His father hang the new curtains.
6 Yusof’s sister, Elena arranged the flowers.
7 She put the flower into the vase.
8 Hakim, her brother changed the cushion covers.
9 Yusof’s brother, Amar was in the kitchen.
10 He helped her mother.
11 He blended chillies using a blender.
12 Puan Siti, his mother were busy cooking.
13 She cooked beef rendang.
15 Yusof’s parents were thankful.
16 They were proud of their children.
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PLOT
JALAN CERITA

How To Write?
DESCRIPTIVE
S1 time It was Sunday morning

S2 character Yusof and his family were at home.
S3 event They decided to clean their house.
S4 place Yusof and his family were busy doing their chores.
S5 Action 1 Yusof and his father were in the living room.
S6 Action 2 They wanted to tidy it.
S7 Action 3 Yusof helped his father to hang the curtains.
S8 Action 1 Elena, Yusof’s sister arranged the flowers.
S9 Action 2 She put the flowers into a vase.
S10 Action 3 Her brother, Hakim helped her changing the new cushions.
S11 Action 4 Yusof’s little brother, Amar were in the kitchen.
S12 Action 5 He helped her mother to cook.
S13 Action 6 He blended some chillis using a blender.
S14 Action 7 Yusof’s mother were cooking beef rendang,
S15 Action 8 Amar helped her to taste it.
S16 Action 9 The beef rendang was delicious.
S17 Moral 1 Yusof’s parents were thankful.
S18 Moral 2 They were proud of Yusof and his siblings.
S19 Promise They promised to treat their children that night.
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Stage Sentence
Fasa Ayat
Preamble It was Sunday.
Pendahuluan Yusof and his family were at home.
They were busy doing their chores.
Picture 1 Yusof and his father were in the living room.
Gambar 1 He stood beside his father.
Encik Jamal, his father sat on the ladder.
He wanted to hang the curtains.
Picture 2 Elena, his sister arranged the flowers.
Gambar 2 She put them into the beautiful vase.
Yusof’s brother Hakim sat on the sofa.
He changed the cushion covers.
Picture 3 Amar, Yusof’s little brother was in the kitchen.
Gambar 3 Puan Siti, her mother was there too.
Amar helped Puan Siti to blend some chillies.
Puan Siti was making the beef rendang.
Conclusion Yusof and his siblings finished their tasks.
Kesimpulan Encik Jamal and Puan Siti felt proud with their children.
They promised to treat them dinner.

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STEP 3 > REVISION (UBAH)
Stage Sentence
Fasa Ayat
Preamble It was Sunday.
Pendahuluan Yusof and his family were at home.
Picture 1 Encik Jamal and his three children gathered in their spacious living
Gambar 1 room.
They work hand-in-hand to tidy up the room.
Encik Jamal took off the old curtains.
He replaced them with the new ones.
Picture 2 Meanwhile, Elena arranged the beautiful flowers.
Gambar 2 When she finished arranging them, she put the flowers into a vase.
Hakim, her brother sat on the sofa beside him.
He helped her changing the dirty cushion covers.
Picture 3 Puan Siti and her youngest child, Hakim were in the kitchen.
Gambar 3 They were busy cooking.
Amar helped her mother to blend some chillies.
That morning, Puan Siti cooked delicious beef rendang
Conclusion Yusof and his siblings finished their tasks by noon.
Kesimpulan Encik Jamal and Puan Siti felt proud with their children.
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STEP 4 > EDIT (SUNTING)
It was Sunday.
Yusof and his family were at home.
Encik Jamal and his three children gathered in their spacious living room.
They work hand-in-hand to tidy up the room. (-3)
Yusof helped Encik Jamal took off the old curtains. (+2)(-4)
He replaced them with to hang the new ones curtains. (-6)(+1)
Meanwhile, Elena arranged the beautiful flowers.
When she finished arranging them, she put the flowers into a vase. (-12)
Hakim, her brother sat on the sofa beside him. (-6)
He helped her changing to change the dirty cushion covers. (-2)(+2)
Puan Siti and her youngest child, Hakim were busy in the kitchen. (+1)
They were busy cooking. (-4)
Amar helped her mother to blended some chillies while her mother was cooking. (-
4)(+5)
That morning, Puan Siti cooked delicious beef rending
Yusof and his siblings finished their tasks by noon.
Encik Jamal and Puan Siti felt proud with their children.
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- 41 words
+ 11 words
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It was Sunday. Yusof and his family were at home. They were busy doing
their chores.
Encik Jamal and his three children gathered in their spacious living room to tidy it up.
Yusof helped Encik Jamal to hang the new curtains. Meanwhile, Elena
arranged the beautiful flowers. Hakim, her brother helped to change the dirty cushion
covers.
Puan Siti and her youngest child, Amar were busy in the kitchen. Amar
blended some chillies using a blender while her mother was cooking delicious beef
rendang.
Yusof and his siblings finished their tasks by noon. Encik Jamal and Puan Siti
were proud of their children. They promised to treat them dinner.
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Note : BAND 3 – BAND 4

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WRITING IDEA
NARRATIVE
1
Setting – Character, Time, Place, Mood)
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
Rising Action (Picture 1)

2 1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
Climax (Picture 2)
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3
3. ________________________________
4. ________________________________
5. ________________________________
Falling Action (Picture 3)

1. ________________________________
4 2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
? Resolution (Picture 4)
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
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Exposition
character There is a boy named Arif.
adjective He is a good and kindful person.
time It was Sunday and the weather was hot and sunny.
place Arif’s parents decided to go to Port Dickson for a picnic.
Rising Action
Action 1 Arif and his family left home at 8.00 a.m.
Action 2 They went there by car.
Action 3 Two hours later, they arrived at the beach.
Mood Arif and her sister were very excited.
Climax
Action 1 Arif’s father looked for a perfect spot.
Action 2 Arif’s mother a the mat under a tree.
Action 3 They ate the food they brought from home.
Action 4 Arif and his family saw many picnickers.
Action 5 Arif flew his kite and it soared in the sky.
Action 6 Arif’s parents and his sister talked to each other.
Falling Action
Action 1 It was 5.00 p.m.
Action 2 Arif’s parents decided to go home.
Action 3 Arif helped his parents to pack the things.
Resolution
Action 1 They returned home.
Action 2 They were tired but happy.
Action 3 They promised to go there again.
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TEST 1
SECTION A
BAHAGIAN A
Read the notice below and use the information to complete the text.
Baca notis di bawah dan gunakan maklumat tersebut untuk melengkapkan teks.
SK KUALA TELEMONG
ROAD SAFETY CAMPAIGN
SAFETY
FIRST
Date : 13 September 2017 (Monday)

Time : 8.00 a.m. – 1.00 p.m.
Objective : To raise safety awareness among the pupils

Activities : Drawing Competition
Spot Quiz
Making Poster
Speech by ASP Arif
Prize : Cash, hampers
Based on the notice, choose the best answer

Berdasarkan notis, pilih jawapan yang terbaik
SK Kuala Telemong is going to organize the ________________.

A. ROAD SAFETY CAMPAIGN
B. Road safety campaign
C. Road Safety Campaign
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It will be held ___________________

A. 11 SEPTEMBER 2017
B. 11 September 2017
C. 11/09/2017
It will start at _____________________

A. 8.00 am
B. 8.00 a.m.
C. 8.00 a.m. – 1.00 p.m.
D. 8.00 a.m. to 1.00 p.m.
The objective of the campaign is to raise ______________ among the pupils.

A. To raise safety awareness among the pupils
B. Safety awareness
C. safety awareness
D. awareness
Two activities will be carried out on that day are __________ and ______________.
A. Drawing competition
B. Drawing Competition, Spot Quiz
C. Drawing competition and Spot Quiz
D. drawing competition and spot quiz
Winners will bring home ____________ and hampers.

A. money
B. cash and hampers
C. cash, hampers
D. money, hampers
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Tulis semula
Dear Hazila,
I have some exciting news to share with you.
SK Kuala Telemong will organize the ____________________________ on
________________________. The campaign is going to start at 8.00 a.m. and will
end ____________ hours later. It is aimed at ___________ safety awareness
among the pupils.
On that day, few activities will be ________________ such as drawing
competition, making poster, and speech by ASP Arif. Winners of those activities will
bring home ____________ and hampers.
If you are ____________ on that day, please join us.
Your friend,
________________
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BAHAGIAN B
Question B(i)
Use the information to complete the text.

Gunakan maklumat berikut untuk melengkapkan teks.
Spa
Free Parking
Wi-Fi
 Friendly and multilingual concierge
Gymnasium  Complimentary breakfast for two
 Family and group packages
30% Laundry available
 Riverview
 Fun activities at the pool
HOTEL SERI BERANG
List three things you will enjoy when you are at Hotel Seri Berang.
Senaraikan tiga benda yang kamu akan nikmati bila kamu menginap di Hotel Seri
Berang
I. _________________________________________________
II. _________________________________________________
III. _________________________________________________
Fill in the blank with correct words. One has been done for you.
Type of package group and _______________________
Free breakfast for ________________________________
Discount for laundry service ________________________________
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Question B(ii)
visit Kenyir Lake
visit Sekayu Waterfall
river cruise
Fun
Activities go shopping
bird watching
visit Elephant Sanctuary
Your pen-friend, Hrithik Roshan is going to visit Terengganu next month. He wants to
stay in Hotel Seri Berang. Write a postcard to him. In your postcard, you need to
state at least three activities he can enjoy during his stay. Write your answer
between 50 and 80 words.
Sahabat pena kamu, Hrithik Roshan ingin melawat Terengganu bulan depan. Dia
ingin tinggal di Hotel Seri Berang. Tuliskan satu poskad kepadanya. Di dalam
poskad, kamu hendaklah memberitahu sekurang-kurangnya tiga aktiviti yang boleh
dilakukan oleh Hrithik Roshan ketika menginap di sana. Panjang jawapan kamu
hendaklah antara 50 hingga 80 patah perkataan.
BRAINSTORM
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Translate (alih bahasa)
Yang dikasihi Roshan,
Apa khabar? Saya berharap agar kamu baik dan sihat.
Saya sangat gembira apabila mendengar kamu akan

datang ke Malaysia dan bersetuju untuk menginap di Hotel
Seri Berang. Kamu boleh melakukan banyak aktiviti di sini
seperti melawat Sekayu, Tasik Kenyir, dan Taman Peliharaan Hrithik bin Roshan,
Gajah. Selain itu, kamu juga boleh menikmati BBQ di tepi 1596 Shah Avenue,
sungai dan melihat burung-burung tempatan.
Mumbai 123,
Saya berharap kamu dapat menikmati percutian yang India

menyeronokkan di sini. Saya akan berhubung semula dengan
kamu.
Sahabat
kamu,
Arjun Rampal
Rewrite
Tulis semula
Dear Hrithik,
Stamp
Hrithik bin Roshan,

1596 Shah Avenue,
Mumbai 123,
India
___________________
___________________
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SECTION C
BAHAGIAN C
Write a story based on the picture below. You may use the words given to help you.
Write your story between 80 and 100 words.
Tulis satu karangan berdasarkan gambar di bawah. Kamu boleh menggunakan
perkataan-perkataan untuk membantu kamu. Panjang karangan kamu hendaklah
Preparation – event – evening – beautifully –

parents – excited – started – crowd - successfully
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100-WORDS
MODEL
COMPOSITION
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If you spot errors the text, please ignore as

the writer typed them with purposes. It is meant for
the high achievers to identify the language errors
and re-correct them.
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Model 1
MAKING A CHEESE CAKE

(Descriptive)
Making cheese sandwiches is as easy as ABC. It is very simple

and doesn't take a long time to prepare.
Firstly, you must prepare all the ingredients like bread, cheese,
butter, cucumbers, salt and pepper and onions. Secondly, slice the
cucumbers and onions thinly. Spread the butter on the bread evenly. Put
the cheese on top the bread and sprinkle with salt and pepper. Put
another slice of bread onto it and cut into two.
The sandwich is now ready to serve. You can try it at home.
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Model 2
A VISIT TO AN AIRPORT
(Narrative)
It was a crispy Sunday morning. Encik Karim took his family to the
airport. Her mother accompanied them.
In the airport, Encik Karim and his family went shopping. They
bought some chocolate, perfume, and souvenirs from the duty-free
shop. Later, they went to the arrival hall. They saw a fleet of planes in
the hangar. Maria was excited as she watched the planes landing and
taking off the runway. Encik Karim and his family were hungry so they
walked to the food court. The food were scrumptious and the price were
reasonable.
After that, they returned home.It was a marvelous day and they
promised to go there again.
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HELPING A MAN TO CROSS A STREET
It was a hot sweltering afternoon. Alia, the kind and helpful girl,
was at the bus stop. She was waiting for her father.
Out of blue, she saw a blind man. He was holding a walking stick. The
man stopped at the junction. He wanted to cross the road. All of a
sudden, he walked straight on. The incoming cars honked him. Alia was
shocked.
She immediately ran towards him. She held his hand tightly and
helped him. The man profusely thanked her. She was thankful the man
wasn't injured.
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Model 4
MEETING J.K ROWLING
Aril has nose in a book. He loves reading.
One day, Aril was in Kino Bookstore. He wanted to buy some

novels. He saw many people gathering at the corner of the store. He
approached them. He couldn't believe his eyes. There was JK Rowling,
his favourite author. She was signing her new books. Aril couldn't utter a
word. He then went to the shelf, took the book, paid for it, and lined up
before her. Finally, he had JK Rowling to sign his book. He was thrilled.
Before he left the store, he took some picture with her. It was
unforgettable experience for him.
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FAMILY REUNION
(Narrative)
It was a breeze Saturday morning. Pak Samad's family were at his

home. They were having a family reunion. It was the first family
gathering and he was very elated.
On that day, his sons organized some games while her daughters
threw out a big party for him. They had three-legged race, sack race,
musical chairs and water balloon toss games. Later, all the family
members enjoyed the food. While eating, they shared their stories. They
greeted each other and enjoyed the reunion.
The reunion party ended late in the evening. Pak Samad's family
returned home the next day. They promised to visit him more often.
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BEACH CLEAN UP DAY

(Narrative)
It was a perfect sunny morning. Nizuwar and his classmates were

on the beach. They were participating in International Beach Clean-up
Day.
That morning, Nizuwar and his friends brought along rakes and
plastic bags. As soon as they arrived there, they strolled along the
beach. They collected rubbish and broken corals. Later, Nizuwar and his
friends cleaned up the dirty beach using rakes. Nizuwar and his friends
then threw the rubbish into the big dustbins. Nizuwar and his friends
stopped cleaning before noon. The beach was clean.
They felt satisfied. The next day, their headmaster praised them
during the assembly.
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Model 8
HOMEMADE CAKE
(Narrative)
It was Sunday and it was Marina's mother birthday. Marina was in

the kitchen. She was flipping a recipe book. She wanted to bake a
homemade cake for her mother.
Marina then took out the ingredients from the cabinet. She
carefully read the cooking instruction. Firstly, she mixed the butter, sugar
using a mixer. Then, she poured in baking powder, flour. Then, she
added a spoon of vanilla extract.
A little later, she put the batter into the oven. When the cake was
perfectly cooked, she decorated it. Later that night, her mother tasted it.
She praised Marina for her cooking skills.
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Model 9
LATE TO SCHOOL
(Narrative)
Kamal was late again to school. A night before, he watched the

horror movie until wee hours.
He got up at 7.30a.m. Kamal jumped out his bed, had a little

shower, got dressed and hurriedly ran to school. He reached there 30
minutes after. Kamal wanted to enter the school compound but the gate
was closed. Kamal climbed up the fence. The discipline teacher saw
him. He scolded him.
Kamal was punished. He regretted. He promised not to come late

again.
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Model 10
SPORTS DAY
(Narrative)
It was a fine morning. Hafizi and his schoolmates were at the

school field. They were taking part in the Sports Day.
On that day, many parents came to support their children. They sat
under the big tents. The tents were decorated beautifully with colourful
balloons. Hafizi participated in the blue ribbon. Before he raced against
his friends, he did a little warm-ups. He ran as fast as a cheetah so he
won his race.
A moment after, he received his trophy from the headmaster.

During the closing ceremony, the headmaster congratulated him. Hafizi
felt so proud.
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CAMPING TRIP
(Narrative)
Last week, my friends and I went to the waterfall near our school.
We went there for a camping.
At the campsite, we pitched the tents together. Later, we collected

some firewood. Then, we cooked. After that, we had lunch together. At
night, we set a campfire. We sat around it. I sang my favourite songs
while one of my friends strummed his guitar. While I was singing, my
friends clapped their hands. That night, we slept in our tents.
The next morning, we packed our belongings and returned home.

We enjoyed our camping trip.
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Model 12
A SCARY NIGHT
(Narrative)
It was a cold dark night. Farhan was in his bedroom. He was

studying for he had examination the next day.
After finishing his homework, he immediately went to his bed. He

was about to sleep when he heard a glass crashing on the floor. He
jumped out the bed and saw outside the windows. Suddenly, he
captured a glimpse of a man climbing on the balcony. Without further
delay, he told his father. Then, his father called the police.
A little later, the policemen came and nabbed the man. Farhan
was thankful.
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Model 13
A SCHOOL CONCERT
(Narrative)
It was Saturday. SK Tanggol organized a school concert. It was

held at Dewan Khawarizmi. A day before, pupils and teachers worked
hand-in-hand. They swept the floor, arranged the chairs, and decorated
the stage with colourful balloons and flowers. Many parents came to the
concert next day.
During the concert, pupils looked great in traditional Malay

costumes. Amira sang the songs sweetly while her friends danced
gracefully behind her. The audience enjoyed the show. They clapped
their hands. Some of them donated some money too.
The concert was successful. At the end of the concert, RM2000.00

was collected. The headmaster thanked the donors profusely.
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A HEART OF GOLD
(Narrative)
Mr. Kumaran lives next door. He is a taxi driver. He is a kind and

helpful man. One crispy morning, Mr. Kumaran went to Subang Airport
to fetch tourists.
At the airport, a male tourist boarded his car. Mr. Kumaran took
him to Hotel Malaya. On the way to the taxi station, he saw a black
wallet on the backseat. He took and opened it.
Mr. Kumaran made u-turn and drove back the hotel. There, he returned
the wallet to the owner. The tourist gave him RM300.00 but he refused.
The tourist thanked him. He has a heart of gold.
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A LITTLE GIRL WAS ABDUCTED

(Narrative)
It was a blazing hot afternoon. Mira was walking home from

school. Suddenly, she heard a girl screaming.
She was curious. She saw a man wearing a mask. He pulled a

little girl into the backseat of his white car. Maya immediately shouted for
help. The villagers came to help but the man escaped. The villagers
called the police.
That afternoon, the police had a massive road block. An hour later,
the man was nabbed. The police saved the girl. Mira watched the news
later that night. She was thankful.
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A VISIT TO OLD FOLK HOME

(Narrative)
It was a bright sunny morning. Nancie and the classmates of SK

Kuala Telemong were in Cahaya Old Folk Home. They were having
gotong royong.
Nancie and her friends were accompanied by their teachers. At the

old folk home, they cleaned up the compound, tidied up the rooms, and
even cooked for the elders. After having lunch together, Nancie and her
friends decided to call it a day. The home manager thanked them
profusely.
After shaking hands with all the residents, the girls guide
immediately left the premise.
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HOUSE ON FIRE
(Narrative)
It was a hot sweltering afternoon. Shahrul was walking home from

his school. Suddenly, he smelled the smoke. He looked around. He saw
smoke oozing out his neighbour's windows.
Shahrul immediately shouted for help. The villagers then carried

pails of waters. They tried to put the fire. Few minutes later, the firemen
arrived at the scene. They then sprayed the water using a long water
hose. Finally, they managed to stop the fire. Shahrul was thankful.
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HAFIZ’S DREAM
(Descriptive)
Hafiz has an ambition in life. He wants to be a successful football

player. Hafiz is a die-hard of Terengganu Team. He watches every
matches of his favourite team on his cozy couch at home.
Sometimes, his father takes him to the stadium to watch the

play.He is elated when he meets his favourite players. During the match,
Hafiz and his father cheer their favourite team loudly.
Hafiz is twelve years old but he set a terrific goal. He hopes, one
day, he can wear the national jersey. He wishes to play for Malaysia.
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CARWASH CHARITY
(Narrative)
Hafiz is a kind and helpful boy. He is a member of boy scouts at

his school. One day, the boy scouts organized a carwash charity. They
wanted to raise funds for Mentari Old Folk's Home.
The event was held at their school. Many teachers and staffs sent
their cars there. Hafiz and his friends managed to wash 40 cars and they
could collect RM500.00. The next day, Hafiz and his scouts friends went
to the old folk's home. They were accompanied by Puan Laili. They
donated the money to the home.
The caretaker was elated and he thanked them profusely.
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A KITE STRUCK ON THE TREE

(Narrative)
It was a breeze Sunday afternoon. Jamal and his bosom friends

went to the field. They wanted to fly their kites.
At the field, Jamal launched his kite. He enjoyed watching his kite
dancing in the sky. Out of the blue, the wind became stronger. Jamal
then pulled his kite line. His kite tangled with his friend's kite. The kite
line was broken. The wind blew his kite. A little later, the kite struck on
the tall tree.
Jamal could not climb the tree. He was devastated. Hia friends
promised to buy him a new kite.
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A BULLY INCIDENT
(Narrative)
It was the recess. Azmi and his friends were at the canteen. They
were having some snacks. Suddenly, a big fierce looking boy neared
him. He demanded some money from him. Ali and his friend did not
entertain his requests.
The boy was angry. Out of the blue, he punched Ali on his face. Ali
was in pain. He cried for help. The school prefect saw the incident. He
immediately reported the matter to the headmaster.
The headmaster then punished the boy. He was regretted his

action.
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LOST IN THE JUNGLE

(Narrative)
It was a cold breeze Sunday morning. Fahmi and his friends were
in the jungle. They were having a jungle trekking.
They walked slowly along the narrow path. Fahmi and his friends
were mesmerized by the beauty of the scenery. It was late in the
evening. They decided to return home. However, they lost. Fahmi and
his friends were tired and scared. The boys did not reach home that day.
Their parents were worried.
They went to the police station and lodged the report. The police
immediately conducted a rescue exercise. They found the boys near the
river.
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NATIONAL DAY CELEBRATION

(Narrative)
It was a bright Sunday morning. Alif and his family were in Dataran
Merdeka. They celebrated the National Day.
At Dataran Merdeka, they saw thousands of people from all walks

of life. Alif were delighted. A little later, the King and the honourable
guests arrived. The ceremony started with singing the National Anthem.
Then, the King and the Prime Minister gave their speeches. Later, there
was a colourful procession. Alif and the visitors clapped their hands
during the parade.
Alif and his family returned home at 12 p.m. They were tired but
happy.
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THE FLOOD
(Narrative)
It rained cats and dogs last December. The heavy rain lashed Kg.
Tapu for a week. The river out flow its bank. The water level rose rapidly.
Soon, Kg Tapu was flooded.
The elderly couple were worried. They then climbed up the roof.
They waited patiently for the rescuer to evacuate them. An hour after,
the rescuer approached them. They helped them to board the boat.
They sent the couple to the relief centre. The elderly couple took a
shelter there for few days.
When the flood receded, they returned home. They were thankful.
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LIST OF PROVERBS
SENARAI PERIBAHASA
(www.learn-english-today.com/Proverb/proverbs)
Proverb Meaning
Peribahasa Maksud
 Absence makes the heart  When you are away from someone you love, you
grow fonder. love them even more.
 All good things come to
those who wait.  Patience brings rewards.
 All that glitters is not gold.  Appearances can be deceptive.
 There is a solution to everything even though
 All's well that ends well there are doubts.
 What look good on the outside may not be so in
 All that glitters is not gold. reality.
 April showers bring May  Something bad or unpleasant today may bring
flowers. good things in the future.
 A bad tree does not yield
good apples.  A bad parent does not raise good children.
 A burnt child dreads the  A bad experience will make people stay away
fire. from certain things.
 Cats can survive many accidents because they
 A cat has nine lives. land on their feet without injury.
 A chain is no stronger than  The strength of a group depends on each
its weakest link. individual member.
 A change is as good as a  A change in routine is often as refreshing as a
rest. break or a holiday.
 A fault confessed is half
redressed.  Confession is the beginning of forgiveness.
 A flower blooms more than  If you miss an occasion, you can avail of it at
once. another time.
 A rolling stone gathers no  If a person keeps moving from place to place,
moss. they gain neither friends nor possessions.
 It's better to deal with a problem at an early
 A stitch in time saves nine. stage, to prevent it from getting worse.
 A stumble may prevent a  Correcting a small mistake may help you to avoid
fall. making a bigger one.
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 A tree is known by its fruit.  A man is judged by his actions.
 As you sow, so shall you  You have to accept the consequences of your
reap actions.
 It's better to do something, even if it's late, than
 Better late than never. not do it at all.
 It's better to be too careful than to be careless
 Better safe than sorry and regret it later.
 A person's first duty is to help and care for his
 Charity begins at home. own family.
 Cleanliness is next to
godliness.  A clean body is just as important as a pure soul.
 Clothes don't make the
man.  Appearances can be deceiving.
 Diligence is the mother of
good fortune.  Hard work brings rewards.
 Distance makes the heart  When you are separated from the person you
grow fonder. love, your feelings are even stronger.
 Don't complain if you can't enforce your point of
 Don't bark if you can't bite. view.
 Don't count your chickens  You must not be too confident that something
before they're hatched. will be successful.
 Early to bed and early to
rise  Makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
 What is suggested sounds easy but it is more
 Easier said than done. difficult to actually do it.
 Facts speak louder than  People show what they are really like by what
words. they do, rather than by what they say.
 If something is done too quickly, it may be done
 Haste makes waste. carelessly and need to be redone.
 Health is better than
wealth.  It's better to be in good health than to be rich.
 Honesty is the best policy.  It's always better to be honest.
 Let bygones be bygones.  Let's forgive and forget past quarrels.
 Consider possible consequences before taking
 Look before you leap. action.
 Man proposes, God
disposes.  Our destiny depends on God's will.
 Many hands make light
work.  Sharing work makes work easier.
 Never say die.  Never give up.
 No man is an island.  We all need other people.
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 No smoke without fire.  There could be some truth in the rumour...
 Nothing ventured, nothing  You cannot expect to achieve anything if you
gained. don't take risks.
 After an unpleasant experience, people are
 Once bitten, twice shy. careful to avoid something similar.
 One good turn deserves  You should be helpful to someone who helps
another. you.
 One man's trash is  What is useless to one person could be valuable
another man's treasure. to another.
 Opportunity seldom
knocks twice.  Don't miss opportunities that come along.
 Doing something repeatedly is the only way to
 Practice makes perfect. become good at it.
 It is easier to prevent something from happening
 Prevention is better than than to repair the damage or cure the disease
cure later.
 Rome was not built in a  It takes a long time to do a job properly. You
day. should not expect to do it quickly.
 Saying is one thing, doing
is another.  People don't always do what they announce.
 It's better to deal with a problem in its early
 A stitch in time saves nine stages, because if you don't, it will get
 Stolen fruit is the
sweetest.  What is forbidden is the most tempting.
 The early bird catches the  If you want to do something successfully, you
worm. should do it as soon as you can.
 The way to a man's heart
is through his stomach.  Feed a man well and he will love you.
 There is a trick in every
trade.  There is an established way of doing things.
 Time and tide wait for no  Delaying a decision will not prevent events from
man. taking place.
 Time has wings.  Time goes by quickly.
 Time is money.  Time is valuable and should not be wasted.
 Union is strength.  A group has more force than an individual.
 Where there's a will,  A person with determination will find a way of
there's a way. doing something.
 You are what you eat.  What you eat has an effect on your well-being.
 You scratch my back and
I'll scratch yours.  You help me and I'll help you.
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LIST OF SIMILES
SENARAI PERUMPAMAAN
http://www.englishclub.com/figures-similes-list.html
simile meaning
as alike as two peas in a pod identical or nearly so
as bald as a coot completely bald
as big as a bus very big
as big as an elephant very big
as black as a sweep completely black
as black as coal completely black
as black as pitch completely black
as blind as a bat completely blind
as blind as a mole completely blind
as bold as brass very bold
as brave as a lion very brave
as bright as a button very bright
as bright as a new pin very bright and shiny
as busy as a beaver very busy
as busy as a bee very busy
as busy as a cat on a hot tin roof very busy
as calm as a millpond very calm and still
as clear as a bell very clear
as clean as a whistle very clean
as clear as crystal very clear
as clear as mud not at all clear
as cold as ice very cold
as common as dirt very common, rude, vulgar
as cool as a cucumber cool
as cunning as a fox cunning
as dead as a doornail dead
as dead as the dodo dead, extinct
as deaf as a post completely deaf
as different as chalk from cheese very different
as drunk as a lord completely drunk
as dry as a bone very dry
as dry as dust very dry
as dull as dishwater dull, boring
as easy as A.B.C. very easy
as easy as apple-pie very easy
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as flat as a pancake completely flat
as free as a bird very free to go anywhere
as fresh as a daisy very fresh
as gentle as a lamb very gentle
as good as gold very good and obedient
as happy as a lark very happy
as hard as nails very tough in character
as hot as hell very hot
as hungry as a bear very hungry
as hungry as a wolf very hungry
as innocent as a lamb innocent, not worldly-wise
as large as life conspicuously present
as light as a feather very light
as light as air very light
as mad as a hatter completely crazy
as mad as a hornet very angry
as nutty as a fruitcake completely crazy
as old as the hills very, very old
as pale as death very pale or white in the face
as plain as day very clear
as poor as a church mouse poverty-stricken
as poor as dirt poverty-stricken
as proud as a peacock very proud
as pure as snow pure and innocent
as pure as the driven snow pure and innocent
as quick as a wink very quick(ly)
as quick as lightning very quick(ly)
as quick as silver very quick
as quiet as a church mouse very quiet
as safe as houses very safe, secure
as scarce as hen's teeth very, very scarce
as sharp as a razor very sharp
as sick as a dog very sick
as sick as a parrot very sick
as silent as the dead completely silent
as silent as the grave completely silent
as slippery as an eel slippery, evasive, not to be trusted
as slow as a snail very slow
as slow as a tortoise very slow
as smooth as silk very smooth
as snug as a bug in a rug in a very comfortable position
as solid as a rock solid
as solid as the ground we stand on solid
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as sound as a bell very clear
as sour as vinegar very sour
as steady as a rock very steady
as stiff as a board completely stiff
as straight as an arrow straight
as strong as an ox very strong
as stubborn as a mule very stubborn, obstinate
as sturdy as an oak very strong and solid
as sure as death and taxes absolutely certain to happen
as tall as a giraffe very tall
as thin as a rake very thin
as timid as a rabbit very timid
as tough as leather very tough
as tough as nails very tough
as tough as old boots very tough
as welcome as a skunk at a lawn party not welcome at all
as white as a ghost very pale or white in the face
as white as a sheet pure white
as white as snow pure white
as wise as an owl very wise

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2 | TALIAN HAYAT BAHASA INGGERIS PENULISAN

Step What To Do?

4 PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

5 REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

Study the sticker notes below.

Source : BK3 (JPN Terengganu)

Use the information to complete the text.

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

can be purchased _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only

pay for these books using _____________. Purchasing an e-book is faster

compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people

____________ to read e-books. This is because the materials can be downloaded

wherever we go. They are ______________ popularity because of its convenience.

Source : BK3 (JPN Terengganu)

STEP 1 > SCAN (IMBAS)

 Match the identical or almost identical keywords

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

can be purchased (1) _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores (2). We can

compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore (6). Nowadays, more people

_____________ to read e-books (5). This is because the materials can be

downloaded and accessed (7) anywhere. E-books are also ______________

(9) because of its convenience (10).

STEP 2 > SKIM (PENCIL)

 Eliminate the unwanted letters and words

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

can be purchased (1) _____________ from publishers or e-bookstores (2). We

_____________ to read e-books (5). This is because the materials can be

downloaded and accessed (7) anywhere. E-books are also ______________

(9) because of its convenience (10).

STEP 3 > TRANSFER (PINDAH)

 Copy exactly the chosen words

 purchase on the internet  using credit, debit cards

 publishers or e-bookstores  more faster

 choose to read e-books  environmentally friendly

 from bookstores  can be downloaded and accessed

 bring whole library  gaining popularity

 numbers of trees being cut down  because of the convenience

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people choose

STEP 4 > PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

can be purchased on the internet  from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only

faster compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people

accessed anywhere. E-books are also environmentally friendly  because they

STEP 5 > REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

Electronic books or e-books are electronic version of printed books. E-books

can be purchased on the internet  from publishers or e-bookstores. We can only

faster compared to purchasing a book from a bookstore. Nowadays, more people

accessed anywhere. E-books are also environmentally friendly  because they

Step What To Do?

4 PROOFREAD (BACA SEMULA)

5 REPHRASE (SUSUN SEMULA)

Source: BK3 (JPN Terengganu)

Blue recyclable paper and _____________

__________ non-recyclable tyres and broken bulbs

Brown kitchen and ___________ vegetable peelings and dried leaves

STEP 1 > SCAN (IMBAS)

Blue recyclable paper and _____________

__________ non-recyclable tyres and broken bulbs

Brown kitchen and ___________ vegetable peelings and dried leaves

STEP 2 > SKIM (PENCIL)

List three benefits of recycling

Colour Category Type of waste