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    The poem expresses the speaker's poverty by saying they have only dreams to offer instead of material goods. The speaker says they have spread their dreams at the subject's feet, asking them to tread softly so as not to crush their dreams. The poem uses metaphor and imagery to convey the vulnerability the speaker feels in having their hopes and dreams be all they can offer.

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    The poem expresses the speaker's poverty by saying they have only dreams to offer instead of material goods. The speaker says they have spread their dreams at the subject's feet, asking them to tread softly so as not to crush their dreams. The poem uses metaphor and imagery to convey the vulnerability the speaker feels in having their hopes and dreams be all they can offer.

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    I would spread the cloths

    under your feet:

    But I, being poor, have


    only my dreams;

    I have spread my dreams


    under your feet;

    Tread softly because you


    tread on my dreams.

    - William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Metaphor Poem
    Hope a knife
    Life a spoon
    Marriage an egg
    Love a brush
    Hate a window
    Anger a mirror
    Disappointment a plate
    Work a rope
    Happiness a cup
    Time a plant

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Metaphor Poem
    Hope a knife
    Life a spoon
    Marriage an egg
    Love a brush
    Hate a window
    Anger a mirror
    Disappointment a plate
    Work a rope
    Happiness a cup
    Time a plant
    Marriage is a rope

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Metaphor Poem
    Hope a knife
    Life a spoon
    Marriage an egg
    Love a brush
    Hate a window
    Anger a mirror
    Disappointment a plate
    Work a rope
    Happiness a cup
    Time a plant
    Marriage is a rope
    We help one another
    We keep each other safe
    Wednesday, October 27, 2010
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    Tuesday October 26, 2010

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Today’s Schedule
    1. Creating Flow, Part II

    2. Referencing

    3. How to write a conclusion

    4. Writers’ Workshop
    • Editing body paragraphs
    • Writing your essay
    Wednesday, October 27, 2010
    Creating Flow with
    Coherence & Cohesion
    My Hero: My Dad
    By Kim Jong Il #8 C3

    Cohesion
    Connections
    between
    sentences Coherence
    Connectedness of
    ideas of your
    entire writing.

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Jigsaw

    Jigsaw Image

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    What is Plagiarism?

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    What is Plagiarism?

    Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or close


    imitation of the language and thoughts of
    another author and the representation of them
    as your own original work (Dictionary.com).

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    In-text Citation

    (Author, page #)

    “Everyone knows they’re going to die, but nobody believes


    it. If we did, we would do things differently.” (Albom, 37).

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    In-text Citation

    Famous Quote:
    “Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while
    loving someone deeply gives you courage.” (Lao Tzu).

    OR

    Lao Tzu once said, “Being deeply loved by someone gives you
    strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Introduction

    Body Paragraph

    Body Paragraph

    Body Paragraph

    Conclusion

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Conclusion

    Summary Statement

    Personal Reflection

    The Closer

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Editing & Sharing

    1. Organization

    2. Do’s and Don’ts

    3. Creating Flow
    (cohesion & coherence)

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010


    Reflection Questions

    Reflection Questions

    Wednesday, October 27, 2010

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